Lu Mingfei and Funina's Whispers

I don't know if this is considered a poisonous point. Lu Mingfei is fine with Funina, but you, Lu Mingze (the little devil), is paired with Fukalos. I think it's a bit poisonous. From the game point of view, Funina and Fukalos are completely the same person, but in the end... You did this. I can't accept it. Abandoned.

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Just write a book about how Lu Mingfei helped the Han Dynasty gain the ability of the god Zhao Yun 😅😅 I want to see the characters from the Three Kingdoms game do Goldfinger

But there is one thing to say, the dragon clan's combat power is indeed very close to that of Teyvat, and even the dragon clan after Jiangnan's patch is a little stronger. At least the young and crippled Black King can wash the surface of the earth by instinct. I don't think God will be able to do it. On the level of the Seven Gods below, the thunder movie split open an island, and the young Fenrir was able to explode a city after accumulating power for a period of time. The director of the Thunder movie may not necessarily be at full strength, but Fenrir's young body is definitely not in his prime. In general, Dragon Clan and Genshin Impact were open at 46% before the patch, and 64% after the patch. At least that's pretty much it for now. So, if Lu Mingfei can really become the Black King, Fukalos will not have to die. If Tianli dares to cause trouble, let the perfect old Lu find Tianli solo.

The emotional description in the early stage is very delicate, and it is considered to be a more reasonable transition in the fandom, but the plot advancement is not organized and the rhythm is chaotic. It was really fun to work on it when it was put on the shelves, but it soon fell into the cycle of doing it just for the sake of it. The early advantages no longer existed, it was suspected of hydrology, it had the potential to become a bad kid, and there was a possibility of selling it like a sheep's head.

But in terms of the Dragon Clan or the Original God, there is no such thing as cultivation. Bloodline is the priority.

The title I saw on Miyoushe was immediately struck by Chuangfei, so I searched for it out of curiosity. I used to like Dragon Clan, and played Genshin Impact for more than a thousand days. I read a few chapters out of curiosity. The author's previous writing was good, and it was reasonable in the outrageous. It was very imaginative, and the jokes were good. There were some problems in the later period, but it was not bad. I have finished reading it now. The following is where I think I can improve it First of all, the plot develops very fast and lacks details in many places. For example, Lu Mingfei suddenly knew a lot of things about Teyvat, and Fufu also completely understood everything at once, which made me feel like I had jumped? Looking back, it seemed like there wasn't either. Also, the author put his own attitude towards the characters too much, and felt that the character design would be a little different from the original design Secondly, the combat power has increased very quickly. I don't know the time in the book, but it feels like it didn't take long. Lu Mingfei has already directly reached the Dragon King level, which is still relatively strong. He is at the level of Seven Gods alone, and the fusion is dozens of times stronger. This is like going to a cute new world to fight monsters. The early plot cannot be connected at all, so you have to give up. However, if a fanfic is separated from the original work too early, it will reduce the sense of substitution. Genshin Impact's combat power system is very unclear and can only be judged by its expressiveness, but this can easily lead to problems. In fact, the protagonist upgraded too quickly. Before I could step in, you were already at god level? Also, actually traveling through the world is not that difficult to write about. Both of us have traveled through countless worlds, and Keli's mother also travels a lot. It's good to write about two worlds that are far apart In terms of plot, there are many well-written ones that make people's eyes light up. But there is a bit of overlap in the shaping of the characters, and everyone is happy. This is not to say that this is bad, but it is not discernible enough. I read through the comment section, and many people suggested that Lu and Fu's relationship develops too fast. I also think this is the case. After all, the author also said that it is a book of pure love. If you write too fast, you will only be able to give out sweets later, and it is easy to not finish writing. Finally, what makes me feel more uncomfortable is that the author wrote a lot of things based on speculation, such as the purpose of the Ice God to collect the Heart of God. The current version only has some guesses, and the third descendant cannot be directly equated with the Nibelungen. Those who have reached the pinnacle of will should be called transcendents. I don't know if you have done the Narcissus Cross, but Rene has reached this state. As for Dragon Clan, I have only seen the old version before. The old thief changed it later and has not seen it, but I feel that it has the same problem. But this is not to blame the author. Fans who write unfinished stories are like this. They don't know the whole story and can only guess. My suggestion is not to write too high-level things first, and then write them after they are released, or to briefly touch on them, just like the classic Riddler, and then fix the bugs when there is a conclusion. It is best for the author to read more in-game texts. It is easy to make preconceptions based on other people's guesses, especially regarding combat power, so be cautious. There is still a debate in the community about whether Tevarin is considered an elemental dragon. Many people have only watched the main plot or skipped it. There is also the screenwriter Tiantian Riddler, which has led to too many plot arguments. Returning to the combat power, Lu Mingfei upgraded too quickly. Not only did the plot fail to connect, it also caused the other characters in the two games to suddenly become clowns. Teyvatli kicked the executive officer and was as good as the Seven Gods. There are several dragon kings on the earth. Do the other people have any meaning to exist? For example, Caesar, I can't even imagine how to recognize them, or the other Seven Gods. You are so fierce and have black elemental power. Are you going to another country to unify Teyvat, or force Tianli to get up and fight? We can't let Zhongli and Wendy be the younger brother, let alone other characters In fact, to sum up, it's too fast, only a hundred chapters have not been released, it has just been released, the plot and combat rhythm do not need to be too fast I am speaking from my feelings, there may be many things wrong, and there are many things I want to write that I don't know how to express. Most of what I said are the points that I feel uncomfortable with, and there are also many points that are comfortable, but everyone's points are different, so I won't go into details. I hope the author will get better as he writes more. I've finished reading the current update, so I'll save it for the follow-up.

Funina: In addition to the human side, I also have a divine side, but the divine me is another me. Lu Mingfei: Me too, I also have a personality that symbolizes my dragon side. Funina: I have no fighting power at all, but I pretended to be the new Water God. Later, I got the Eye of God and finally had fighting power. Lu Mingfei: I was a weakling at the beginning, but I was designated by the principal as the only S-class. Later, I got over the devilish characteristics of the academy and finally became stronger. Funina: I have a water dragon king named Navilet here. Although he always controls me, he is very kind to me. Lu Mingfei: I have a bunch of senior brothers and sisters here, and they are very good to me. Funina: I'm not exaggerated at all, I'm just pretending. Lu Mingfei: I don't like to talk nonsense, I'm just pretending. Funina: I have endured five hundred years of pressure. Lu Mingfei: I have endured eighteen years of blindness. Funina: I'm lonely. Lu Mingfei: Me too.

To put it bluntly, what qualifications does the so-called Blood Mourning have compared to what Funina has to bear?

Weird, this cp is really evil, the emotional scene is too fast. If you advance the plot and draw in the emotions at the same time, I think it would be better if Lu Mingfei kills Bronze and Fire, Fufu is frightened by the servant and then the relationship heats up. Now it is too fast. I don't know how the author ends it. The emotional scene is about the process of pulling.

Such an abstract title. I feel that Lu Mingfei is a real traveler. What world has he not been to? Who should be named the true traveler now?

My eyes went dark when I saw the title of the book. I read it carefully and found that it was pretty good. I just have a few suggestions. Personally, I felt that the progress was a bit too fast. I felt that the two of them had already become close to each other after only a few days of the plot. In order to speed up the plot, I directly made the aunt a villain. Originally, we could write more at the beginning, showing each other what their lives are like, but now it's only more than 60 chapters, and it has already become an undying love, so fast, Lu Mingfei can write more about the psychological troubles of teenagers in high school, playing games, feelings of loss, etc., And there is no need to rush to write the aunt as a villain, Then Fu Ningna can also write about the various events in the plot that the travelers did that made the continent famous, such as the ritual of sending immortals, the Thunder God locking the country, etc. By the way, she can also write the plot of Xumi modifying the world tree, so that Lu Mingfei can realize that there may be a conspiracy in that world. You can communicate with each other like two netizens and write the plot in this way to feel more full. Otherwise, you will already be in love to death after only 60 chapters, and it will be similar to time travel. How to write the plot in the future? Unlimited streaming? It's the end of the short story Now I feel like I've written all the exciting stuff, and the rest is difficult to write. Like many mysteries in Genshin Impact that haven't been revealed yet. You've reached the plot point now, so what if a screenwriter digs holes for you in the future?

The author has some ideas, but it's a pity that he doesn't have enough writing skills. What I originally imagined was that two similar and lonely souls grew from strangers to familiar acquaintances, gradually understanding each other through repeated trials, opening their hearts, and finally completely entering each other's hearts and clinging to each other. The tone of the dragon world view is sad. Because of the existence of Blood Sorrow, all dragons and hybrids are lonely, and the same is true for Ming Fei, the biggest monster in the world. He has very little and always longs to be cared for, so much so that when Nuonuo is the white moon When the light shines in, he will never forget it, so that whenever it comes to matters related to Nono, he will always be the dead kid who will never grow up (of course, this is also the reason why the old thief has always been illiterate). This is also the reason why many dragon fans have always hated that iron cannot become steel. Judging from the title of your novel, I think what everyone might want to see more is that Ming Fei, the poor dead child, can no longer be lonely under the butterfly effect of Funina, can cheer up, and live a different life according to the original plot line. I think your first problem is that Concubine Ming's strength has progressed too fast. She is already almost invincible in less than two hundred chapters, so she has no need to write more about the world later. The second is that the two worlds interact too frequently, and later the characters in the dragon world view are more or less related to Teyvat. First of all, the unique mutual understanding and emotional development of Concubine Ming and Funina are the core charm of the story. When more people are connected to the world where Funina lives, it may distract readers from the protagonist's emotional line, weakening the uniqueness and depth of the relationship between the two. Secondly, this setting may break the originally created atmosphere of lonely people leaning on each other and saving each other. The involvement of more people may complicate the emotional tone of the story and no longer purely focus on the inner world and emotional growth of the two people. Finally, I think everyone may be more looking forward to seeing how the male and female protagonists overcome difficulties and stick to their love in a relatively closed and pure environment, rather than being disturbed by many external factors. The third is the development of the plot line. In fact, there is no need to dwell too much on the world of Teyvat. After all, the main perspective is still Concubine Ming, and the focus is still on the world of the Dragon Clan. Based on your title, I think the general plot should follow the original plot line of Dragon Clan, with a little help from Teyvat inserted in the middle. Concubine Ming gradually grows up with the help of Fu Nina, and the relationship between the two deepens as the plot develops. At the end, Concubine Ming is finally able to break away from this lonely world and comes to Devati. The two finally meet each other. The whole book is completed.

Hello author, I have copied your book on other platforms. The feedback from readers is very good, it is very popular, and there are many rewards. I plan to mention a new car again. I hope you will update a few more chapters so as not to affect my income or make my readers anxious. Thank you.

If the names of the male and female protagonists were not Lu Mingfei and Funina, then this book would have the beauty of an ancient pretentious, slap-in-the-face, brainless, cool novel. It's not that it's not good to write like this. After all, the results have been written. I just realized this and wanted to complain about it.

How should I put it, Lu Mingze and Fukalos' evil cps are a bit over the top

Author, look what this is, please update more soon

I'm very curious. Lu Mingfei and Lu Mingze really went to Teyvat. What will the dragon lizards be changed into? A water dragon king made them change into little lolita😏😏

I had a very strange feeling while reading it. I can't tell what it was. Maybe I'm not suitable for reading this kind of novel...

I'll give you the monthly pass, please update it quickly

How did I find out that this book is no longer being updated?

When will the author come back to update?

No more, the author group has disbanded

When will the author resume updating?

Grandpa, the books you recommended have finally been updated.

Is this Lu Mingfei? Is this Lu Mingfei?

I'm a little worried. I don't know if I should continue reading.