What Pokémon? Isn't This the Phantom Beast Palu?

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It is recommended that everything on the Palu side be illustrated. Pokémon is okay, and many people know its names and appearances. Even if you have never played the Palu side, novices who have played it may not remember all their names.

1. The current pace is too fast. This may be due to two reasons. One is that the author is not skilled enough in writing and does not control the plot advancement speed well. The other is that Fantasy Beast Parlu itself is a game with no main line and a very fast pace. I played it myself and even produced some non-BOSS level mythical beasts on the second day. After all, the breeding system of the game is too abstract. . . 2. It is inconsistent with the traditional pet literature about elves. There is no in-depth interaction with the elves (Palu). The description of Palu is often brushed off. This is also a problem in the game itself. I also mentioned a problem in the previous discussion. Phantom Beast Palu itself is an early access game. Many of its game mechanics currently appear to be immature (such as the breeding and training of Palu and the evolution of Palu mentioned above). Regardless of whether the game will be officially modified in the future, if the author directly copies immature game mechanics when writing a novel, it will set the stage for subsequent plots. 4. I have read more than a dozen chapters, and so far, I haven't seen much connection with Pokémon. 5. The idea of ​​using the fantasy beast Parlu as a theme is very creative, but I hope the author can also notice the many immature aspects of the game itself and properly handle the connection between the fan fiction and the original work.

The most annoying thing is that it was sent suddenly without saying a word. If you were going to send it, why don't you send a leaflet to say something about it? Isn't it disgusting to disappear without saying a word? Some people still expect you to continue. Anyway, every time I encounter this kind of author, I just take a screenshot and write it down in a memo to block him. It doesn't matter if I change my vest, this vest is totally ruined in my eyes anyway.

You don't write books, some authors do

I have a small question. The pallu in the game can have up to four entries. Surely some real pallu are not limited to four entries, right? So will there be a pallu above four entries in the future?

I suggest that you make a Banjira and Metagross, and let him eat metal ores with Banjira ore. Metagross is my love. I love him regardless of his shortcomings.

Good guys, have all the Parlu fans started?

? How come you have one chapter in two days these days? You won't send it, will you?

Anyone who likes to read fan fiction knows that for some fan fiction that is being updated, plot backstabbing often occurs, that is, the updated plot conflicts with the plot of the fan fiction. The Phantom Beast Palu is also an early access game. The game may also add new mechanisms and new Pallu. Did you consider being backstabbed when writing this book?

I can only say that it is still too young. I hope to see the story of capturing the gym leader later.

Wait, is the Phantom Pallu linked to Pokémon?

There has been no update for 5 days. Are you going to enter the palace?

The author wonders whether the main character has an empty vortex dragon. What level of god is the empty vortex dragon equivalent to in this worldview?

I saw that several other paluvins have been cut, but this seedling is still alive.

The world of Pokémon itself has many unreasonable places. The author can make it more realistic, such as eating Pokémon, or humans and Pokémon hybridizing. I saw the comics about Wei Li and Xiaoxia in Paradise Animation. They are very good-looking. I think

Why hasn't it been updated yet? Palu doesn't even dare to rest for so long, right?

Do you have any ferrets? If you don't like it, I won't watch it (´-ω-`). The weasel is the strongest!