I Will Be Reincarnated and Immortal in the World of Cultivation

The author's writing style is good, but the problem is too big. Not recommended for old bookworms

Author, don't you think the character dialogue is too weird?

In order to highlight the contradiction, the author directly created a plot in which the direct lineage was seriously injured due to intra-branch fighting, which was actually very unreasonable.

It feels like someone has been replaced. This pretense... Really doesn't work. First of all, I rescued a woman, but the guy who ruined the reputation of the Continental clan and bullied men and women did not deal with it and just let her go. I was speechless. Secondly, drinking a few cups of tea is not enough. You have to drink it all the time. Not to mention that you almost missed the family competition. You put the cart before the horse and even drank until your stomach bloated. Where did you come from as a primary school student? Also, he was able to help a complete stranger and talk to her patiently, but in the end, he had no patience at all with his own people in this world. He asked them to come together because he thought their Taoist hearts were broken fast enough, right? Moreover, the previous chapters also describe the bonds within the Continental Clan in various ways. It is said that the protagonist is very friendly to his own clan, but the result is that he is so friendly. Where is the bond? I'm not saying that the author must follow my ideas in writing novels. After all, the author is much better at writing than I am, but the content of this chapter is really outrageous. I hope it will be better in the future.

At present, the story has a complete framework, the golden finger is not too abrupt, and the descriptions of each character are also very vivid. The key is that everyone has their own brains. Looking forward to the future, a little reminder, you must control the mid-term upgrade. This kind of novel is most afraid of being upgraded too quickly in the mid-term and the surrounding characters will feel too disconnected. When playing at a high level, you must pay attention to your state of mind, and don't feel like you can only fight and kill. Tianjiao should also be described with emphasis, whether he is an enemy or a friend. Tianjiao also has his own opportunities, don't press them. Come on, author! You are the next rookie of Xianxia, ​​although you look like a vest 🤫

I got fooled and found out that Guicun pen = sealing pen

It's so long, but a little girl uses so many words to show that the protagonist is caring. I want to see a character like the Ghost Demon Lord who is decisive in killing people.

The first level of Qi training is in the center of the whirlpool, because the golden finger is equivalent to immortality, and the protagonist is not afraid of death, so the description of the handsome young man is very strong, which is really not to my taste. I hope the author can write better and better. See you again.

First book for a newcomer? So awesome?

First life: 🌹 Second life: 😒 Spend twenty years of life just for three chapters of water. This second life requires resources, a background, and a method. If you can't even cultivate the golden elixir, there's really nothing to write about.

The first life was fine, but in the second life, there were many problems. The setting of the golden finger makes the first life look very enjoyable, the lifespan can be used casually, and the protagonist has improved. Carefree, there is only one protagonist left in the family. The second life is too watery and too restrictive. The protagonist was originally immortal, but was set into a family. The family is facing the Jindan fault and the pressure of the family being destroyed. Are you still thinking of engaging in a dispute between concubine and concubine? I don't know how many words have been lost. The second life feels useless. Originally it was based on family pressure. The protagonist should first be promoted to the golden elixir before he can live up to his family. I didn't expect that my realm would improve slowly. I would always be stuck in the qi training period, and I would still be fighting for the Tao all day long, and I would be in conflict with my descendants. It's very annoying. The original golden finger is completely unusable. Consume lifespan to improve foundation. Another point is that the second life is the Jindan family, which is really a big span. The protagonist is under too much pressure. The protagonist is only in his second life. He has never even reached the late stages of Qi training, let alone the Sendai realm. He was born with the mission of continuing the family's golden elixir. It is very contradictory for Changshengliu to insist on writing with this sense of urgency. I feel like it would be better to write the second life as a sect. The outer disciples of the sect have no sense of identity with the sect and no family concerns. Use the golden finger casually, and the protagonist's strength will increase rapidly. The kind of Han Li, the kind who seeks immortality for all eternity, is unrestrained, just to improve himself, hides away from disasters, and develops insignificantly, which is the most satisfying. The sect is also coming and going, with no father or mother, no heirs, and no heroine. Old P is a guest. In the second life, I really don't agree with it and have no interest in it. I just feel that the progress of the protagonist's strength is very slow, and there is no gain from the golden finger. It's not fun, the plot is cliche. In the longevity novel, the improvement of the protagonist's strength is the most critical, and the golden finger should be used rationally. Pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger, keep a low profile at ordinary times, and then be the mastermind behind the scenes, or be the oriole and be the biggest winner. These are also commonly used.

It's so long, but a little girl uses so many words to show that the protagonist is caring. I want to see a character like the Ghost Demon Lord who is decisive in killing people.

In the second life, there are really many unreasonable things that lead to poison.

Reincarnation is the theme. There is no need to spend too much time describing the family. Otherwise, why not write a family story? It is a bit boring to read.

Unlimited reincarnation + lossless soul search + practice room. Actually, there are infinite reincarnations and the last two don't really matter. . You can even say that the Tao of Reincarnation is the core of the plug-in. This practice room is also a bit abstract. If you insist, wouldn't it be nice to change it to a proficiency panel? . Anyway, the origin of plug-ins is games. This is more reasonable

I haven't read it yet, so I want to ask if there will be more updates? If it is updated, I will read it; if it is not updated, I will not read it.

The first one had its highlights, but the second one was mediocre and cliched. I felt sleepy after watching it. Let's wait and watch the third one again.

After reading a few chapters of The Second Life, I felt sleepy. It was too watery.

It was slow and slow, starting from the second life, and the plot was slow and watery. Ordinary books about cultivating immortals should have at least established the foundation by now. There are so many realms to come, and you have dragged down more than a hundred chapters for these two realms. What is the content of this book? Isn't it reincarnation and cultivating immortals? The core selling points are all wrong. Is it different from other books about becoming immortals in one life?

Author, have you finished the idea? 😥🙂

Let's just talk about things, the writing part is pretty good, but the update was discontinued before it started to get bad.

Want to read new books😒