At the Beginning of Niujia Village, My Sister-In-Law and I Depended on Each Other.

Let's talk about Yan Honglie, a great man of his generation, why does he not have a queen? He doesn't even have a daughter, so how can he like Bao Xiruo? But he didn't have a child with her? There is no way there is no one more beautiful than Bao Xiruo in the Kingdom of Jin, right? Eunuch? The eunuch also likes women?

Well! I persisted and saw more than 60 pictures, but I couldn't hold on anymore. The author's writing style is really good, and the world and characters he created are also very clear and vivid. Unfortunately, both the world in the book and the characters in it felt very strange to me. It even gave me the illusion that this was actually a magical world of vultures. Qiu Chuji does have a paranoid side in his character, but Hong Qigong... It's really hard for me to believe that he would react like this when encountering similar things, and would say things like "I never kill indiscriminately, but I will destroy your martial arts skills." I still remember watching the Condor Shooting when I was a child. Before the second Huashan sword debate, everyone wanted to kill Qiu Qianren, but he said that no one had ever killed anyone in his life or had done any evil deeds. He was the only one who could come up and arrest a few couples. Only Hong Qigong made a generous statement: Lao Jinghua had killed 231 people in his life, and all of these 231 people were villains. If they are not corrupt officials and local tyrants, they are extremely evil, ungrateful and unlucky people. The old beggar was a glutton for food and drink, but he had never killed a good person in his life. Is it really possible for such a person to shout and kill before the whole story is clear, and to destroy people's martial arts at every turn? In other words, all the treacherous and evil ones were killed, and all those who were not considered treacherous and evil and offended him were deposed? And they don't think it's an evil thing, and they can still be upright and upright in the face of soul torture. What a terrifying demonic character this is! The gap between this kind of old gang leader Hong and my impression is too big, and it is really difficult for me to recognize and accept it. If other righteous people are like this, I can't help but forgive me. Finally, I wish this book will achieve good results and live up to such good writing.

This article is very well written, but it is too clever, with a hammer in the east and a paragraph in the west, thinking that it leaves a lot of foreshadowing, and the whole becomes fragmented, and will drive away all readers sooner or later!

Looking at the beginning, although I still don't know how the story will unfold, this entry point feels good... But, the process is a bit tiring... At the beginning of Niujia Village, it is ten years later in a few chapters, which is not a big deal, but then it is Sun and Moon Villa, robbing doctors and dueling eunuchs. Is it a running account? No. Is that the point? Neither. ... In short, I feel like I didn't write it well... ... Or tell me where to start.

Rubbish, don't dare to spoil the plot, Bao Ruoxi is one, will the next one be Huang Rong or Mu Nianci?

Earlier, I just came out to show off, ran to the palace and was beaten by a eunuch, so I didn't go back to upgrade at this time. He turned around and ran to the Shaolin Temple, and then got beaten to the shit again. That's right, bro. Will he run to compete with the five unique costumes later?

If Hong Qigong is directly abolished, I have no interest in reading it. Reality is reality, novels are novels, and they still need something beautiful. You can tell the truth directly and use your vicious tongue to make Hong Qigong feel guilty, repent, and start cleaning up the Beggar Clan as your helper. Instead of directly destroying a person who is advertised as a good person in the book. Going straight, I only see the protagonist relying on his high martial arts skills and having no scruples, which is very boring.

Outrageous, copying scriptures, taking Jiuyang and still not leaving, I have to get those external skills Licking the dog even gave Lingbo Weibu to that woman, tsk tsk tsk tsk tsk tsk tsk tsk

What are you writing about? You jump to different scenes every time. You really don't treat the readers as human beings.

When the author was just writing a little bit, I added it to the bookshelf. However, due to my mobile phone number, the account was still being appealed. Since I didn't remember the title of the book, I used a temporary account to search for it for a long time before I found the book. When I saw the last chapter about abolishing Hong Qigong's martial arts, I finally couldn't help it and complained a few words. There is no problem in destroying Hong Qigong's martial arts. If you can't defeat Hong Qigong, Hong Qigong will also destroy you. The problem is that I didn't see the serious heroine, so I arranged it. The emphasis was on the sister-in-law who has not yet been married, who is married and has children, but the emphasis is on the princess who has a broken brother, and the widow who helps her sworn brother to cross the sword. Brother! Everyone knows your taste 😰😰😰😰😰 The most difficult thing to accept is that your parents cannot change, but you have to change and teach Yang Kang top martial arts, and emphasize that martial arts will be abandoned in the future. Doesn't this tell us clearly that there will be this plot in the future? None of your confidants teach you peerless martial arts, but you insist on teaching White Eyed Wolf? I usually don't say anything, and just cross it out if it doesn't look good. It's a pity that this author can obviously write a good book, and he did force a lot of plot points that lead to rejection. Looking forward to your next book. In addition, don't include your personal hobbies and feeding the white-eyed wolves in the new book, 🙂🙂

Moreover, if the protagonist practices Beiming Divine Skill, he will not be able to develop other attributes of Qi. If he practices other martial arts, he must first transform it and then practice Beiming Divine Skill. After all, the Dantian of Beiming Divine Skill is empty. You don't even explain why the protagonist has these contradictions. It's so uncomfortable to watch.

The plot is incomprehensible, and it also has a literary flavor, unlike online novels.

Author, please change the previous part. First of all, in terms of martial arts: Huang Yaoshi's apprentice, logically, really can't leave a legacy. Since there are plug-ins in calligraphy and painting, will it affect Huang Yaoshi's strength if he doesn't use his martial arts skills? I first saw that the protagonist had acquired so many martial arts skills that it was unbelievable. Why bother putting an illogical thing there in the early stage? Arhat's Demon Subduing Magic Technique: To put it bluntly, this technique of Brother Dog is the most difficult to practice. It was customized by Mr. Jin for Brother Dog. Logically speaking, ten thousand protagonists cannot be trained. But if the author hasn't already given the protagonist the best plug-in "sucking method", then use it! Just open it for him! Beiming Divine Skill: Putting aside the setting of Beiming Divine Skill and other internal skills, they cannot be practiced at the same time. Even if you can practice it, it's really not necessary! Does the protagonist need to practice? It's totally unnecessary! Where does the strength of a martial arts world lie? Internal strength, moves, and power! In addition to the internal strength of Brother Gou's Arhat Subduing Demon Skill, the addition of the Beiming Divine Skill is even more perfect! He co-wrote the ceiling-level protagonist of Mr. Dog Brother Jin. He practiced Kung Fu. The protagonist is a time traveler. After practicing, he became a dog. Not only better than Dog Brother, but also similar, right? He couldn't defeat the eunuch, couldn't run with Lingbo Weibu, and he still needed the Beiming Magic Kung Fu to save the scene? He's so lucky! Not happy! Change it, please! Nine Yang Divine Skill: This is okay, you can take it, after all, it logically does not conflict with Arhat's Demon Subduing Skill! But you have to pay attention to the characteristics of the Arhat's Demon Subduing Kung Fu. Brother Dog can practice any magical skill with it. Your setting of Arhat's demon subduing skill is not perfect, so it is not considered a flaw. The Seventy-Two Special Skills of Shaolin: There is really no need to take this, and there is really no need to practice it! It's really inappropriate for my subordinates to train! Inappropriate points do not need to be resolved by Buddhist teachings. I'm your subordinate, do you want to put your own brand on it? It's like you start a company and sell products with world-famous brands. No matter how good the sales are, you are still a second-rate dealer. Do you want to think about whether you will collapse or lose your wealth? I only see that you want to start a sect! You've already established a sect, how about using other people's martial arts to start a sect? Even if it's a sect, you might as well just say that you swallowed up Shaolin, which is even more tyrannical!

It's not that people can't accept h-content, it's mainly that there are too many marginal contents that crowd out the effective plot.

The writing is quite good, and I recommend expanding the worldview to many of Jin Yong's novels.

I really can't end it hastily, it's better than being a eunuch.

It looks pretty good, I like Bao Xiruo

Isn't there any fans of The Condor who can watch it? They are all newbies, it's really annoying to watch.