After Rebirth, They Became Licking Dogs

Let me just say this, it is a failure for the man and woman not to stab the dog to death before rebirth. It is missing a point of enjoyment. The reborn child enters the emotions before the rebirth, and revenge on the girlfriend who has not betrayed the protagonist is also a failure. Because the reborn protagonist has lost his identity as a perfect victim. You have not contributed in this world, so you are not qualified to judge the girlfriends in this world. What's even more uncomfortable is that your protagonist is judging a girl whose native family has flaws. You are not in the commanding heights morally, and your protagonist is not qualified to carry out the trial. As a reader, it is difficult for me to agree with the protagonist's revenge, and it will also be very uncomfortable. Although subjectively the protagonist is seeking revenge, objectively your protagonist is bullying a little girl and has lost the legitimacy of his behavior.

In summary, the male protagonist is reborn + multiple female protagonists. So far, the female protagonist has a system, with licking the male protagonist as the mission goal, which can be regarded as the only starting point. It's interesting, I can watch it, it's not too toxic.

If there are any problems with the plot, you can discuss it below.

Well written, big thumbs up

. . . . This introduction contains nothing.

If that woman is not married, why is she still going to college and finding a boyfriend? Your novel is inconsistent

I am currently reading Chapter 33. How should I put it? The previous writing is quite good, but something is very wrong when it comes to buying a car. There is a very forced feeling of pretentiousness According to the title and introduction of this book, it is actually very impressive to people who read it for the first time. It's a cool theme to have a story about being "taken care of" by a beautiful girl and making other supporting characters jealous and hateful despite being ordinary, such as Lin Muran's money offensive, You Wei's affection offensive, etc. In fact, it's a very good setting and the writing is also good. But it's okay for the male protagonist to gamble on football and treat it as a card for himself, but later on, when he buys a car and tries to show off, it seems that the excitement brought by the title and introduction of the book has been seriously reduced, and the theme has shifted... I look further, and this is the thing that makes me feel the most wrong so far.

I actually like writing very much, but it's a pity that I didn't get to read it.

It's Lin Muran~(｡//ε//｡)