Hogwarts Magical Portraits

The protagonist is a big mouth who can't hide secrets

The first time I saw the main character was in Magic Portrait, I thought it was well written.

This way of writing makes it feel like you don't know who the protagonist is. The introduction didn't say it was from dual perspectives.

New version of ship that I haven't seen before, I invested in it

The creativity is very good, but the plot setting is a bit weird, a bit deliberate, and the foreshadowing is not enough and it is a bit abrupt, but everything else is okay.

I've talked too much about the mirror, but it's almost over. 😭

Chapter 98, three original plots, the design, logic, and development are all good, but the protagonist's behavior is still withdrawn, and there is a sense of awkwardness in adolescence. I don't know what some people are worried about. If you don't like the plot, just say it. I have to say that the pace is slow. If this is considered slow pace, then the only collection of short stories that suits you is

The plot development is pretty good, but the progress is a bit slow and not exciting enough.

After reading it, I feel that the overall story is pretty good It is creative, but not too routine The plot is quite smooth. Although there are many perspectives in the middle, it is still very clear and clear after reading it, and it will not be confusing On the CP, it may be Tang, but it may not be, anyway, it is not Hermione. (It's not that Hermione is not good, but that the heroine Hermione will get bored after watching too much) Currently, the protagonist does not behave very obsessively I feel that it needs to be longer to watch, and it is too short now and it is really not enough to watch Although there are some minor flaws, such as some typos that have been mentioned in the comment area but have not been corrected, and the plot bug that the goblin knows that the sword of Gryffindor is in the school, there are no big flaws It is still worth watching