Immortality Martial Arts: Start Eating Melons by Seizing the Direct Descendants from Kowloon

Fantasy world? Can personal force break mountains and rivers? When the eldest prince of the dynasty was accused of murder by a village woman, why didn't you accuse the emperor of enslaving the people?

The princes all look like Teletubbies. Maybe the author is cuter... Baby physique

It makes me want to write a novel. . .

Isn't it that the author is too naive, because a common woman deposed the prince? ? ? ? (PS: When will a complaint reach the emperor?) This is no longer a problem with the author's writing style, Chun Chun Kindergarten

The first chapter is a bit ridiculous! If any civilian girl beats the drum, the emperor and ministers will all have to go to court! What will the emperor and ministers do for a lifetime (⊙o⊙)? There's no need to do anything anymore, just wait all day to go to court!

These are the first few chapters written by people

There is a reason for poor grades. You want to feel better but not so much. Learn from other people's ways and learn a few things. After reading more than 40 chapters, it's true that you have a cerebral hemorrhage. There is a system. Have you lost your brain after traveling to the past? Is modern knowledge gone? I used to directly activate the industrial mode. If I really don't want the throne, I can just be stubborn. Do I have to be cowardly? What are you pretending to be? If you don't earn the status of a prince, you will die. Also, the prince in your introduction is so awesome. What did you write in the article? I would have died 800 times in modern history. What's more, the fantasy dynasty has no brains, just like what they pretend in their heads. Even if the prince has no brains, his ministers are like idiots. I really can't help but complain.

Isn't the method of the nine sons to seize the heir too low? In the beginning, the emperor held a family banquet and knocked something. The emperor and the emperor and the courtiers all came, just for a village woman. The village woman dared to sue the prince. The reason for the lawsuit was because her husband died and the prince was practicing martial arts in the back mountain that day. I thought my husband was too awesome, but it turns out that he is the lowest ninth-grade martial artist 😰. The female videos are not so explosive, right? You are such an imbecile in seizing the legitimate son, and it is humorous that the village woman can make the emperor and ministers put down everything they are doing and listen to the village woman sue the prince.

After reading two chapters, I feel like I can't read this book without thinking.

I feel like I can't stand it anymore. The protagonist has opened so many plug-ins, and it's been four or five maps. As a result, it's still not as good as his brothers and his father. Maybe the protagonist should be changed to his father. For these two maps, it doesn't matter if you say that the protagonist can't beat his father and several brothers. It's been so long. Logically speaking, it's his brothers and his father who can keep up with him or barely keep up with him. Yes, now the protagonist is not as good as his brothers. They are all the protagonists who came from the small world because of the system. Even if the other brothers and his father are very talented, they are basically the same as when they reached the world of Tianzhuang. Now that they are so talented and have such good opportunities, is it a bit ridiculous? According to the way it is written, by the end, the protagonist is not as good as his father and not as good as a few brothers.

I don't really want to subscribe to the current plot. The protagonist is like a dog. He plays such a big trick and is ridden by a group of people. It's such a waste.

I don't believe what's said in the comment section. I went to read it and the review is worthy of the Teletubbies name.

When I read Chapter 4, it reminded me of the top rich second-generation boss of a female channel who took Bai Yueguang to eat the best Western food. A meal of more than 2,000 yuan 🙂 makes me laugh so hard.

The main character who is both new and established. He used to find excuses to kill people, but now he doesn't use them anymore. He can kill whenever he wants. The thing that makes me want to complain the most is the latest chapter. The relationship between father and son is really awkward.

The complaint at the beginning made me a bit nervous, making me look like a ninth-grade sesame official. And for those who are engaged in politics, this is just a trivial matter, a very small matter. In this regard, the author's thinking pattern is too small.

An ordinary civilian woman reported her grievance to the official, and the emperor and ministers were immediately summoned. The prince was deposed as prince because he accidentally killed an ordinary hunter, and was imprisoned for 30 years. What are you writing about?

Isn't history this extreme? Even if Li Shimin's own son killed a commoner, he would only be blamed at most. It is impossible to convict! High martial arts does not require so much reason, it is mainly about force, and tactics are not that important. Especially when it comes to human life, don't take advantage of modern times.

This prince is really unjust, the drama about this useless prince is so funny

How much time did the author spend to come up with this introduction🙂

If the prince kills people, is it the king's land in the world? On the shore of the land, could it be the king's ministers? If I become the crown prince and the next emperor, I can't even kill anyone? Author, do you want to listen to what you are saying? In feudal society, the people were just cattle and sheep. Is it still a serious crime to kill a cow or a sheep?

How should I put it? If a commoner can report the prince, he will be slapped with 50 charges if he is not an official, and the reason is very strange. There is no evidence. I think that an ordinary civilian woman with no martial arts skills dared to speak without evidence when she saw the founding emperor. As for the founding emperor, he was not directly frightened by the imperial robe.

No, what is written is so messed up that it calls for power but not power, and calls for force but not force. Is it really just a matter of imagination? My writing skills are so bad

Although the first few pictures were a little bit toxic, I feel better and better afterward.

The ending is a bit rushed, but it's finally over, and it's a happy ending

Actually, it was pretty good. I basically finished it in one day and one night. I need to be patient at the beginning, but the end is a bit rushed.

So what if the plot is weird, it would be awesome if I could continue writing it.

"I have played with guns on the throne of Khorne, drank soup at the cauldron of Nurgle, shared spoils in the house of Tzeentch, and sold songs in front of Slaanesh's bed! This is me, the founder of the empire! The slayer of orcs! The resister of demons, the emperor of mankind, Sigmar!" Sigmar introduced himself to the banquet with his warhammer, and by the way told all the guests how bad he was. "Fellow prophets, who can tell me the future destiny of the human empire! Can it suppress all races and be glorious forever?" The muscular man asked arrogantly. The prophet of Ulric the White Wolf came out first and said: "I see that the future of the empire will be filled with bald priests. They have scriptures in one hand and hammers in the other. They chant the name of Sigmar and brutally surround and suppress Ulric believers. After the civil war, the empire was destroyed." "Heresy! As a devout believer in Ulric, I don't believe your sowing discord!" Sigma was furious and smashed the White Wolf Prophet's head with a hammer. The Great Necromancer stood up again and said: "I saw countless warriors fighting with muskets and giant swords. Soldiers were cut down, priests were bewitched, and the empire was destroyed. Only the world of undead and bones will last forever." "Bastard! Humans will never accept a dead world!" Sigma smashed the bones of the Necromancer with another hammer. The rat prophet took a step forward, and the green crystal ball in his hand projected a picture of the bliss of the world: humans and rats coexist harmoniously, and the future will be prosperous; they provoke wars and sell military disasters, but criticize normal trade; they eat chicken and shoot each other in American style, but they are called They love life; their hands are full of blood, but they claim that they are the victims; they party together on the island, but claim to be human role models who take care of Luo Li... "This future seems pretty good. How can we realize it?" The big golden man asked humbly. "We lie, we cheat, we steal, and we have a course to teach these. With such continuous exploration and progress, the glory of the human empire will surely be realized." "What a wonderful future, I really want to see it with my own eyes." Sigma sighed happily. "Yes, when the empire is about to be destroyed and the last emperor, Karl Franz, dies in battle, you can be resurrected in his body and experience it all for yourself."

It's kind of interesting, no, I mean it's really interesting.

Since it is a system document, you can mark it in the introduction.

I feel that if I continue to write the book that is most likely to keep up with Gou Cheng, the author has stopped writing it. . . . . . .