I, Uchiha, Hold the World-Crossing Gate in My Hand

It feels like the pig's feet are too tight. At the age of seventeen, Uchiha was still a chuunin. The feeling I get from the article is that Pig's Knuckles thinks about opening his eyes all day long. Is there no other way to improve his strength besides opening his eyes? Also, you were a baby when you traveled back in time, and your parents and brothers who took care of you since childhood, don't you have any feelings at all?

Use mental power to control kunai... Dream back to swallow the stars. Can't you control hidden things like poisonous powder? Regardless of whether it's a close or distant fight, the most effective way is to directly deliver the poison to the opponent's mouth, ears and nose...

Why is it so cliche? Not long after entering each world, you will either be accompanied by a beautiful woman or meet a so-called daughter of some aristocratic family.

Um, why don't you just take everyone away? We have to fight in Konoha.

One hundred and eight thousand kilograms. Brother, how much does the stone lifted by Ji Langfang weigh approximately? Do you really think that the Hokage's one hundred and eighty thousand catties is worth a lot? Even if you beat Itachi, it would be difficult for you to beat an ordinary Jonin.

Save traffic: stallion book, rush to a woman when you see her

After watching it for a long time, I felt like I was holding an incredible plug-in and doing it myself, putting myself in danger and slowly becoming stronger. The problem is that he already has a mid-range combat power at the beginning. Not to mention the small forces, he doesn't even have a single follower.

This kind of book should not be classified as a Naruto fanfic. It just wears the skin of a Naruto. It is a zombie world, a fairy world, and an empress. It is a mess.

As soon as Itachi's story came out, I don't know how many people wrote conspiracy theories that the third generation was stabbed in the back. The conspiracy theories came and went, but it turned out that the third generation was really a good person. However, the third generation is really not suitable to be Hokage. Danzo has done so many things, and he really doesn't know most of them.

Isn't one hundred and eight thousand kilograms the perfect blood-moving realm? ! Equivalent to 54 tons, but I remember the Hulk started at 200 tons. The protagonist had a strength of 54 tons when he first appeared on the night of the Uchiha genocide, and he had traveled through many worlds. Unexpectedly, he still stayed in the blood-moving realm! 😏

Wandering into the Queen's Bath by mistake, what kind of ancient fantasy novel?

Did Su Wanrou bring water in the apocalyptic world? Every time I go to that world, I have to exchange a few words of greeting, but in reality there is no progress at all. And playing pure love in the apocalyptic world, right?

It's all over the heavens, and he's messing with a group of mentally ill people. He's really drunk.

The subject matter is good, but the layout is too small. It's only two magatama and it's squeaky. If you don't have the layout ability, you'll do crazy output to improve your personal abilities. Don't be a woman all day long. It's really boring. I'm withdrawing it.

I definitely don't like to write about Nika fruits. The protagonist can only travel through all realms through surgical fruits. Tuntun fruit is the most suitable fruit. Tuntun can surgically transform spiritual roots. Tuntun can fuse the genes of all realms. The factory can refine metal magic weapons. Fusion can combine six world systems into six clones. If the protagonist is transformed into a blackbeard alien through surgery, he can have three fruits, the Buddha's body, the soul fruit, and the troops that can be trusted in all worlds. Tuntun or Thunderous Shaoshao are both good.

The most disgusting thing about Naruto is F4. A public trial should be held, and the entire clan should be exterminated! There is no need to call the village Konoha. As a native of the motherland, you can call it Huaxia if you like. Whatever feels good will come to you!

I haven't watched it, but Konoha has had 4 Kage changes in the past 50 years. White Fang had done so many good things and then forgotten about them. With this kind of virtue, if you go to another world for 10 years and come back, maybe no one will know what an Uchiha is!

The current protagonist has a special feature. Yellow but not color. I look at women all with admiration, but all of them are old perverts

The transition is okay when the chakra system is weak, but it is better to replace it when it becomes stronger. First of all, Otsutsuki does not refine his own cells to be short-lived, but eats people and planets. Refining was invented by Hagoromo. Secondly, the blood after the snare is not in the flesh and blood form, but should be an energy form similar to the tailed beast, so interstellar navigation does not require a ship to turn into light... Kaguya's resurrection Madara's head is still talking, proving that it is not a borrowed corpse!

It's a cool article, too brainless, but it looks okay. It's a cool article after all.

After taking it, why am I becoming more and more watery? How come the plot is like a daily running account? The author writes well

A good subject has been ruined by your writing

With more than 400,000 words, the protagonist is a jounin when he appears, but he is still running for the night of genocide. That strength is too good. It has been said that the attributes have skyrocketed, but they have not increased much.

1. The author has no idea about data 2. The attributes of the design menu include physique, strength, agility, and spirit. It is just a foolhardy panel. Is it reasonable to replace spirit with will? 3. A reckless man creates an apocalyptic urban magic world in the first world, and a jounin in the second world is worse than building a foundation. This kind of setting in the main world is too low in power level, so it should be brushed aside. Genin, chunin, and jounin are equal to the Qi training period? Elite Jonin and Kage level are equal to the foundation building stage (Kaleidoscope)? Super shadow level and six-level level are equal to the golden elixir stage (reincarnation eye)? 4. It's disgusting to add crystal core points freely. It's not a game world. How can others add points? Normal is 0.1, First level is 0.3, And third level is 1.0. Don't you think that third level zombies are not even slightly stronger than ordinary zombies.

There are too many plots in other worlds. It is recommended that the plots in other worlds be summarized in a similar way to an outline, and the plot of Naruto should be mainly written.

Fan fiction is different from original novels in that it already has the world view of the original work. The biggest failure of the author is that he does not check the information when writing fan fiction, and writes based on the impression of the original work he has read, and does not explain the ambiguous parts of the original plot. The most important thing is that I traveled to Uchiha and came here about 18 years in advance. I just watched the night of genocide happen without any preparation. Did I not know how to write it if I left the original plot? Will all subsequent plots follow the main plot? It would be a good idea to travel back in time. It would be enough to directly set the time travel to shortly before the night of genocide, and it could also cover up this point.

The creativity and ideas are great, but the plot is rubbish!

No, butter doesn't count, and it suppresses strength. It's obvious that the Sharingan is related to the spirit. As a result, the physical attributes are increased wildly, and then the writing method is relatively old, creating some villains who look bad, and the conflict creation is too naive.

I don't know if it's an illusion, but this looks a bit like a color novel.

This is the gold content of the protagonists' names "Ye XX" and "White XX"