Elf: Whose Family Is Good and Everyone Is Evil?

This picture lacks Darkrai, and Padea's four second-level gods are also evil.

Let me briefly talk about my impressions of this book. Pros: The Pokémon are well sculpted, I really like Mew. Disadvantages (only my personal opinion): The protagonist's growth is slow, and the low level of combat hinders Pokémon. Two battles against Qishu, the first time I was defeated in seconds, my heart went blank, the second time the same situation would have been more miserable if it hadn't been for the evolution of the fire-spotted cat. This is a gym battle. The level of the main Pokémon of the gym leader is indeed much higher than that of the protagonist. However, using a level 20 electroplated frog to torture the protagonist to the point of "Luohuai was stunned", "'What?' Luohuai exclaimed" and "How could this be like this" will make the protagonist appear to be a bit of a clown. The protagonist is a time traveler and has a system. It is not reasonable to be beaten by an indigenous museum owner and make him doubt life. If the protagonist is mentally mature and grows up to meet the evaluation of other characters in the introduction as soon as possible, the perception will be much better. This book has great potential. I hope I can keep writing at the current level. Sooner or later it will become popular. Come on, author!

Chapter 24 is so weirdly written that it makes the hunter look like a fool. There are obviously two Pokémon, and it is perfectly possible to command one Pokémon to fight the protagonist's tabby cat, and then order the other Pokémon to kill the protagonist, but the result is not the same. He has to wait for the first Pokémon to lose its combat effectiveness before letting the other Pokémon come out. In the end, he was like a blind man, letting the protagonist walk to him, speechless.

It feels like watching Pokémon TV animation, of course I don't mean the journey 🙂

Hope it looks like this 🙂

In fact, the writing is good, but the title of the book is not well chosen. At first glance, you would not know that it is an elf book. Without internal investment, it would be difficult to attract traffic and attract editors to sign contracts.

Regarding the hunter's thoughts: There are two problems. The first is that the protagonist's mind is blank, and the reader's perception is reduced. In a story about a heavy bond like Pokémon, what I want to see is that even if there is a desperate situation, you must fight for a possible way to survive, and even if you cannot survive, you must find a way to save your partner. In short, it is passionate. The second question is that the deus ex machina of the disaster beast can be smoothed out. Give your own suggestions for revisions that you think are reasonable: 1. Why did the villain not attack? Because the villain has the mentality of being arrogant and a cat catching a mouse. This must be written down. 2. After being controlled, he tried to signal the flaming cat to escape, and the flaming cat also realized his bluff in order to let the protagonist escape. 3 The two have the same mind, and the plug-in Heart of Justice is online. After the fire-spotted cat bluffed, he had a moment of opportunity. The protagonist's strength surged by 20% (coincidentally, the cunning tengu and the crocodile are both evil types) and suddenly broke away. 4At this time, the disaster beast appears and the incident is resolved. In other words, the author and readers know that nothing will happen to the protagonist, but the protagonist must not know and must not be confused.

It is recommended that only one or two of the mythical beasts be collected. The main thing is to highlight the ordinary Pokémon.

Is this book a harem? I won't watch it if it's a harem or an affair with multiple people.

The heroine of Hope Peony🙂

A bad start? You can also add some other types of elves

Will the author include the Galar Flame Bird in the later stage? I haven't seen many books that include it. Evil + Flying are handsome and powerful, which is really exciting.

As mentioned, I wanted to create a team with evil as the core, but I didn't know how to make an evil team with high strength.

Will there be Carlos' Koga Ninja? Water + evil

Have you ever considered letting the protagonist adopt a handsome Galarian Flame Bird? It's too cool to be angry 🙂

Let me state in advance that I am not a loyal fan and only have a partial understanding of Pokémon 1. As the protagonist, he has a time traveler + system double buff bonus, and his family background is still very good. There is currently no saying that you must reach a certain age before you can own Pokémon (it should not be confirmed?), So why don't you sneak away? This is a situation that may occur in reality (those with ancient families). After all, the goal is to be a trainer and there is a vision of the past life, at least after enrolling in school. To prepare for the goal, after all, you need to go out to hunt for treasures, and cultivate it a year or half a year in advance. Combining the knowledge with the memory of the previous life and self-study can deal with some problems. At worst, you can ask the teacher. It would be a pity to be reborn in the Pokémon world without going to the top to see the real scenery. This is a sense that cannot be experienced in the game 2. The protagonist has played the game and understands Pokémon knowledge. He is also in the Pokémon world, so why doesn't the protagonist train skills and attribute energy? This should be useful. Yes, what may happen is that the skills will evolve, the control will increase, and the form of the skills will be changed. This should be possible. For example, to increase the temperature of the flame, you can even try to integrate skills 3. Anyone who has played the game should have a partial understanding of the lineup and skill combination in the game. Even if it does not apply to the real situation, wouldn't you try it in advance? It should be very feasible to use the Pokémon of the protagonist's parents to experiment, and you can also solve the command by the way. Questions 4. In order to train and communicate with Pokémon, you can subdue a telepathic Pokémon. In this case, you can try some attribute moves or physical exercise methods in other anime. You can try to prepare some medicines and potions. Anyway, it only costs money to try without losing your life. I am not very good at expressing what I want to say. It is like this for now. It would be better if someone can popularize the science. After all, I also fantasize about going on adventures in that world.

Many skill machines in the purple version are made from Pokémon's dropped items plus LP. The protagonist can't always wait for the system to give them. Flame Fang, Charged Fire Attack, Swallow Return, Stomp, Stomp, Roar, and Bodybuilding are not too difficult to obtain, so you can give them some consideration.

Again, everything is possible. Tigers, monkeys, bears, and leopards 😁😁😁😁😁

I really need a Moon Eevee

If it were written based on Zhuzi's game, I hope it could make up for the shortcomings of the GF plot, and it would also solve the player's regrets. For example, the three lines in the game are too isolated; the ending of the DLC is unsatisfactory, and the source of the paradox is not clearly explained.

The author asked the male protagonist if there will be Magical Masked Meowth or Koga Ninja in the future. These two Pokémon

Is there a Kamen Rider (crossed out) Fierce Legs Locust?

How about using alien elves to keep parasitizing, start with a facehugger, keep parasitizing, alien beasts or something 😰

However, I feel that the all-evil type is still a bit too easy to target, so bring a hair girl ()