Rebuilding Rome

What you write doesn't feel like a novel. It's either all popular science or all spring and autumn style of writing.

Dear author, in order to write to the end, it is best not to involve content related to Northeast Asia!

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First, it writes about a rare Russian subject, which is niche but interesting. It can fill the gaps in novels in this area and has great development potential. Second, the author's writing style is honestly not very good. The large area of ​​straightforward narration makes people feel that the author is not telling a story. Even if he is interested in the subject matter, he can easily be dissuaded by the writing style. I need to work on my writing. Third, the plot arrangement is a bit strange, with neither explosive points nor climax, and it is not very attractive to readers. I hope the author can improve it and stick to it

There are several pictures where you can't see the main character, they are all popular science ()

The new content is generally similar to the first edition. Old readers can start reading from Chapter 18, which deletes the part about the rise of Napoleon, the causes and consequences of the two partitions of Poland, and nationalism.