
Zhenhun Street: Dragon Descendants of the Tang Dynasty
镇魂街之大唐龙裔
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- Anime Crossover
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- 1y ago
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In the Zhenhunjie fanfic, there are few names that the guardian spirit calls the person who is sending the spirit right. For example, Xu Chudianwei, the guardian spirit of Cao Yanbing, and the others called them lord, while the two brothers Xia Hou came out and called Cao Yanbing boy. Yan Qing was Lu Junyi's servant during his lifetime, and he called Lu Tianyou his master. The soldiers summoned by Xiang Kunlun all called Xiang Kunlun King Xiang. Basically, the names of each guardian spirit will be different depending on the relationship between the guardian spirit and the person who sends the spirit. Moreover, if you write about Li Shimin of the Tang Dynasty, couldn't Taizong have seven military generals? Do you have to write about Li Cunxiao? Li Cunxiao was from Shatuo or Li Keyong's adopted son. He didn't even know how loyal he was to the Tang Dynasty. How could he protect Li of the Tang Dynasty? Li Jing, Li Ji, Hou Junji, Luo Shixin, Su Dingfang, Xue Rengui, if you want to make Wu Ling the strongest man, you can add Li Yuanba. Among these people, except Luo Shixin who died early, who is not a macho man who has destroyed several countries? Moreover, Qin Qiong, Yuchi Gong, and Cheng Yaojin were all available. Ling Yan's Twenty-Four Heroes, please count how many generals there are, let alone seven or ten.
The character of the protagonist in question is said to be very calm, but I haven't seen it. He talks too much, and his mentality is the same as that of the supporting character.
Li Cunxiao was not considered a loyal minister of Li Tang. As Li Keyong's adopted son, he sought refuge in the imperial court after being falsely accused. However, he was defeated and surrendered in the war with Li Keyong. He was not considered a loyal minister of Li Tang.
It's okay, but there's a problem with the writing. Sometimes it's in the first person, and sometimes it's in the third person. It feels a bit fragmented.
I took a look at the title of the book and said, "Hmm, Dragonborn of the Tang Dynasty." Then I saw the second picture, "Well, I recognized my godfather. I didn't expect that."
There are too many subordinates, no characters, all forgotten
There are many powerful generals in Li Tang. There is no need to write about Li Cunxiao. They are not from Li Tang, but from Jin.
There were many powerful generals in the Tang Dynasty, but the most awesome general was the emperor 😂
Come on, it's been so long, and finally there's another one writing about Soul-Suppressing General
Will Sun Zhantian be the heroine after she debuts? She is my favorite among the three great warrior gods.
Attributes of the protagonist's spirit sender
The five elements in the characters Li and Tang belong to fire. The protagonist should be a spiritual person with earth attributes. The five elements complement each other and the combination is reasonable.
If the protagonist has Li Cunxiao, there should be no Li Yuanba. If there is Li Yuanba, there should be no Li Cunxiao. The guardian spirit of Li Cunxiao should be the same as Cao Ren. Theoretically, the protagonist can inherit it, but it cannot be. The one on the left, Li Cunxiao, and the one on the right, Li Yuanba, are too easy to compare. If it is not written well, it is easy to be scolded. It is better to let one go offline. Moreover, Li Cunxiao has the power of the ghost king. You have to use the power of the ghost king. Let the protagonist's guardian spirits all have ghost king power, or let Li Cunxiao not have ghost king power, so that the team can be more harmonious, and the protagonist's night spirits must all be from the Sui and Tang Dynasties and the prosperous Tang Dynasty. The time span between the Sui and Tang Dynasties and the prosperous Tang Dynasty is not acceptable, but to be honest, your entire residual Tang Dynasty is easy to make people laugh.
{"NickName":"Step into the Heart Moon","UserId":437397307} Author, does the protagonist have a harem?
It's good to choose Li Tang, but the author may have looked at too many marketing accounts, and the people he chose were too screwed up. Li Cunxiao and Luo Cheng... I really can't say anything. What is Li Cunxiao's composition? Do you want such a snake-rattling thing?
Come on, author, okay.
Author, would it be okay if you let the protagonist have a harem? How about asking the protagonist to take in all the beautiful beauties in Zhenhun Street?
The problem with the protagonist is that his father just died and he still looks at everyone with a sense of superiority. Having no emotions is like having a weak brain.
Does Li Shuwen have it? There is even Jack the Ripper in Zhenhun Street, so can Li Shuwen be there too, right? He is from the Republic of China
This description of characters only uses the words "he, his, and them". The description of characters and scenes cannot move people at all, just like junior high school students writing essays.
I suggest you write Gang Zi in it
They've all entered Zhenhun Street. Isn't it unreasonable to call in the commander-in-chief? Very reasonable! The commander-in-chief has been planning for n years to support the descendants of Li and Tang. Your Majesty invites you to ascend the throne and proclaim yourself emperor!
What is the original name of Zhenhun Street? Where can I read it?