The Legend of the Dragon King: Assassination at the Beginning, the Road to Blasphemy

It would be better not to write about Na'er in the prologue... After writing about Na'er, it immediately went crazy, and there were a bunch of inappropriate jokes, which made it even more embarrassing... It was from Master Gu and it was from An Lan. It was really embarrassing. Moreover, the target of the person he is chasing keeps changing. One moment he is killed, and the next moment he is captured alive.

The first seven chapters are too discouraging. They use so many words to describe the rebirth of the protagonist and the death of his parents. This has been mentioned in a few sentences in other books. It makes no sense for the author to write it like this. The beginning is bitter and hateful, and 90% of the readers have been screened out in one go. They have three golden chapters, but this book has seven muddy chapters. If you write like this, you will definitely be disappointed.

It's too much to vilify Shrek. There are almost all peach and plum blossoms in the world. They are the pinnacle of the Bai Dao force in their continent, and the pavilion master Yun Ming has created a half-step god. It is impossible to join forces with the Holy Forest Sect for such a small benefit. It is too ugly. Moreover, this kind of world power is respected, and it talks about pure thoughts. You can't become a strong man for such a small benefit.

The main character is extremely stupid and extremely poisonous. I don't recommend reading it. Just leave it alone.

Died from poison🥵

This chapter number? Why haven't you been charged yet?

Shrek Academy, Tang Sect, Spirit Transferring Pagoda, and the federal government, these forces are all related to Tang San in the final analysis. Although they are all Tang San's forces, the interests of these forces are not completely consistent. They suppressed each other in order to gain greater say from Poseidon Tang San. Because these forces are official forces, there are some things that these forces cannot do due to their status. At this time, the Holy Spirit Church appears as a black glove shared by all major forces. This is an open secret among the major forces. Due to the attributes of the evil soul master's gloves, for ordinary people, the evil soul master is synonymous with terror, so as long as a person is officially defined as an evil soul master, then this person is useless. If a big force wants to kill someone legitimately, it only needs to say that this person is an evil soul master. Then killing this person will not only have no bad impact on the force, but also gain a good reputation for the person who killed him.

The author's description in the prologue is [The protagonist couldn't bear Na'er's behavior and chose to take action]. Everyone can see that this is an uprising based on sex. The author's explanation to the readers in the paragraph review is 400,000 words, and he will give an explanation. No matter how you write it, many people will be persuaded to resign. In the prologue, the protagonist stands on the moral high ground, which is too much to persuade people to resign.

I read Douluo fanfic just to torture Sanhe and steal the heroine

The third young master of the Tang family has withdrawn from the Internet literary circle again

It is better to break than to bend. It is easy to break if it is too strong. You will accept the path you choose.

Is the plot behind this the protagonist's fantasy? Every once in a while, he talks about how miserable his past life was. Good guy, he really just lives in the past.

It seems that the author deleted my review.

If you don't have the strength to dance like that, just follow A Sanguo. A pig's foot is like the Wuchang who held a rifle to challenge an army of millions of sea, land and air forces and had a trump card to defeat him. Don't look down on Tang San. Tang San was just like the nobles of the Warring States Period. Everyone was related.

Just by looking at the profile, you can tell that he is a street kid.

Are you a demon from outside the world? What kind of heroine do you want? All the refinements are made😋 The so-called beauty is just a handful of loess in the end, and dust returns to dust, and soil returns to earth. All refinements are made. Only the eternal girl is the one I love😋

From the first chapter to now, I can be regarded as an old fan. I would like to give the author some suggestions. The first is that the plot is too jumpy and there are many places that are not developed. Whenever I feel something, the author stops writing and starts to dig new holes. For example, the dispute between Bai Mo and the family is mentioned and then disappears. Then it is directly to the competition. Although I know that both Bai Mo's family background and the death of important federal officials are all foreshadowing by you, your narrative structure makes people uncomfortable. In other words, I can't keep up with your rhythm. 😂 Another point is that I think the process of the competition can be simpler. The focus is on the handling of the same matter by all parties, because everything is actually the result of mutual compromise between all parties.

Friends, if you support me, I can write it and put it on the shelves now. 😰

After so long, I finally saw the climax of the plot today, which is not easy. The author has a problem with the fragmentation of chapters. If you read one or two chapters alone, you will basically have no feeling. You must connect many previous chapters to create a complete narrative. Based on this, combined with the author's first chapter of 10,000 words, I have reason to suspect that the author divided a long chapter into several pages.

Should we speed up the writing? With more than 200 chapters, what's left after squeezing out the daily routine?

I found out that no matter what the outcome of the current plot and Shrek's fight in the ring is, it is equivalent to making Bai Mo a focus card. In other words, Bai Mo once again entered the sight of Shrek and other top forces. The result of this incident was contradictory to Bai Mo's original intention.