Build a Holy Land Sect from Scratch

The first is to write about the sect leader, the invincible push stream The second is to cultivate the sect's genius stream (group portrait stream) behind the scenes The third is that I didn't expect it for the time being So, which author are you?

In my humble opinion, since the Hidden World Sect at least has the sect's background and can recruit some strong elders, the elders and deacons and hair care workers are all outsiders, so what kind of Hidden World Sect is that?

The author even got the positioning of the book wrong. The title of your book is a development flow, but you wrote it as a personal show-off flow for the protagonist.

When I first read the title of the book, I thought it was about sect development. After reading a few chapters, it turned out that the protagonist was personally recommended by Invincible.

I was deceived by the title of the book,,, bad review, bad review

How to say it. The story develops too fast, and the description of many key things is too vague and too rushed. The content of the novel puts the cart before the horse, and the disciple sect has become a vassal. Instead, a large amount of ink is devoted to describing the upgrade of the protagonist. Eight chapters out of ten are at the same level. There is almost no communication between the disciples and the protagonist, it is just a lottery ticket. I have put so much effort into designing so many sect constructions, but the process is just passed by in one stroke, and there is no picture at all in my mind. Watching the sect flow is nothing more than the pleasure of infrastructure construction. Watching the sect expand step by step and watching the disciples grow up step by step gives you the joy of a good harvest. But now this part of the content has been omitted, and it has become the protagonist's legendary road, and it has become the protagonist's combat power bonus. In addition, it just isn't exciting enough. One of the great things about Zongmen style is how advanced the sect's infrastructure is, which makes outsiders' jaws drop. As a result, no one can even enter your house. Except for the gate guard array, other things are not shown at all. There are even very few scenes of disciples using the infrastructure. The same goes for disciples. They reported the name of a dish, but in the end they didn't even have a rough idea of ​​interpersonal relationships. I hope to increase the description of this part and increase the sense of existence of the Zongmen style setting. If I wanted to see the protagonist become invincible, I wouldn't watch Zongmen-ryu and just watch Side-pushing.

Like some forbidden dungeon or secret realm dungeon, the setting is very high, but there is no corresponding performance. I don't know what the point is if I clear the level in minutes.

I just don't understand why the green and white rewards are necessary. After all, they haven't appeared a few times so far.

Happy New Year, this book is good, it just needs to be updated.

If you want to write about fantasy, write it well. If you write about martial arts, you will make me vomit.

Is it a studio article? It's not refined but all negative comments have been deleted 🙂

It's getting boring and I feel like I can't stand it anymore

The world's first tenth cave is a bit nonsense. The tenth cave is so easy to complete. Is it difficult for the sons of the emperor?

There's really no drama at all later on

The writing is quite interesting, and the plot of the protagonist's manifestation is not awkward. Keep the pace and don't randomly open new maps. Play steadily and steadily.

It was good at the beginning. The first female disciple and the reborn person directly pulled a big wave. You said that I can accept rebirth from the ashes. What an outrageous thing like you, you directly reborn in the timeline 😰😰

Some suggestions for the author (2) System lottery I hope the author will have a good rhythm in designing rewards for the protagonist, and not often give the protagonist too many orange to gold level rewards. After all, things are rare and valuable. Too many orange and gold level rewards will easily cause the protagonist to cheat too much in the early stage, causing the plot rhythm to get out of control and the combat power to collapse later. After all, this book can be compared to a fantasy version of a modern divine lottery flow. It often happens that the protagonist's lottery must be more advanced than the previous lottery reward. This makes the plot fall into a vicious cycle in the later stage where continuous lottery draws make it easier to obtain the highest level reward, which will eventually lead to the protagonist's failure. If the cheating is too big, it will become a mindless cheating trick, which will make the readers tired of the aesthetics of the lottery. It is easy to have a sense of déjà vu in a low-quality online game where you can hit 999999 damage in one second and complete the level perfectly in one second. This makes the plot lose its challenge and interest. Therefore, the author must carefully grasp the frequency of the protagonist's lottery and the reward level. The author can appropriately control the proportion of the plot of the lottery system, slightly downplay the system lottery, and appropriately strengthen the plot of the protagonist's development of the sect. In fact, the biggest selling point of this book is not just the system lottery flow, but the elements of the management and construction flow, farming flow and cultivation flow. As the title of the book says, building a sect from scratch, you can see the protagonist operating, farming, developing sect facilities step by step, and constantly recruiting Recruiting Liangmiao disciples and training them to become geniuses, let the Taiyi Sect gradually become stronger and become a famous sect with the top ten elders, the top ten guardian beasts, the top ten weapons, the top ten techniques, the top ten spiritual places, whether it is the husband and wife, the wealth, and the world's top sect. It is also a pleasure to be the number one sect in the world. So the author might as well describe more of the daily plot of the protagonist farming and running a sect, recruiting martial arts talents and practicing as disciples. Some relatively routine or ordinary plots, such as recruiting disciples for the world's best martial arts tournament, picking up leaks at auctions, reappearing ancient ruins on the battlefield, exploring ruins of extinct top sects, and group treasure hunting expeditions in treasured and dangerous places, can all be appropriately described to embellish the plot. Of course, all plot follow-up must be based on the author's ideas and outline. The above are just some of my suggestions. I hope to bring some creative inspiration and plot suggestions to the author. Useful suggestions may be adopted, and there is no need to forcefully add in those that are useless or inappropriate. The most important thing is that the author writes well. It is enough.

Very good. I like it very much. Please update it soon!

It can't be written like the Xuanjian Immortal Clan, where there are high and low levels of immortality in martial arts, conflicts between sects, families, and brothers. The protagonist is insignificant and develops. He relied on his own immortality and was trained from a common disciple. He stayed behind the scenes and watched his disciples and grandsons swallowed up or survived.

There are always books like this. I feel like my starting point will get cold if it is not corrected.

1/You need to summarize and gain experience for yourself. Don't think about it, just write it down and find out what went wrong. For example, how to improve writing style and penmanship? To imitate those books and then improve them. How can the plot be condensed or unfolded, and how can the rhythm be laid out? Set how to close the loop. Wait 2/Look at your own data to compare the data of books of the same type, and then see where the problem lies. 3/Think about yourself writing this book now. Yes, your eunuch's book, write it out in a rolling steel outline, write 50,000 words, and review it yourself. When you can no longer change it, stop and read it again. I'm not talking about the setting or the plot, which is a single random expansion. I'm talking about the overall story. When it gets to the point where it can't be changed, tear it up and delete it. As for why, think about it yourself, I only say that it will be beneficial to you without any harm. 4/After the top three can do it, now go find settings, fill, rhythm, routing and integration in the type you are best at. In this way, you have completely reached a new level. Of course, when I say this and you hear this, you have to think clearly about the purpose of your writing, just like everyone knows that they want to be rich, but what? Is this really sober and clear? Finally, I hope you can continue writing. Of course, if there is a better way, quickly turn around and re-plan the route May we be better, come on

Come on As for the first few chapters, the author's main content in the first few dozen chapters is to introduce a lot of unknown lottery rewards, but the story that extends from this has not yet begun to be detailed. Maybe they want to pull out a basic sect first. The lottery is a relatively fictitious thing. Terms such as genius, emperor, and sainthood are also fictitious without a solid story to support them. Sooner or later this book will have to find a way to transition from fiction to reality.

If you update it twice a day if it's not on the shelves, but if you update it twice a day after it's on the shelves, then you're not putting it on the shelves in vain.

Md, Senior Sister has disappeared, right?

Isn't the author of the next few pictures a bit lazy, and the plot is a bit bloody! So familiar