Douluo Starts the Nine-Tails Jinchuriki

You shouldn't reveal your twin martial souls. Ya San may have told Yu Xiaogang that Yu Xiaogang will accept you as his disciple later. Tang Hao should also know about it and may force you to become their Tang family's dog. If you don't agree, he will kill you.

I'm afraid you won't cheat. I'm afraid you'll be fooling me. Later, even killing the God King was like killing a chicken. Just became a god in Douluo. It would be nice to have someone who can defeat one or two God Kings. People like Dragon God have been practicing for many years and still have extraordinary talents. It cannot be raised at once. Small flat three pairs of gods. Even in Dou Er, I can't defeat Destruction.

It's great, but to be honest, the start is a bit stupid. Pig's Knuckle is not a waste of martial souls. The souls with full innate soul power will definitely be taken away by the Wuhun Palace. I went to see Huanyue brother and sister being taken away by the Wuhun Palace when they were only at the ninth level. 😅😅

In fact, chakra can be said to be magic power, ninjas can be said to be monks, and ninjutsu can be said to be spells. Konoha Village can be said to be the Yellow Maple Valley, the shurikens can be changed to Xiao Li's flying knives, the ninja forehead protectors can be changed to sect tokens,... Anyway, many places can be localized.

Can Tang Gou get the fairy grass if he meets Dugu Bo first? I'm really impressed 🤔

Thank you to all the readers. In the new year, I wish them good health, all the best, and most importantly, happiness every day! I hope that my article can bring some pleasure and relaxation to the babies. Thank you for your criticism and correction. I will make corrections quickly when I see it. I am very tearful to have so many babies supporting my first book. If possible, I also urge the babies to read more, because this is really important. (Kneel down) Finally, thank you again for your support! If you have any good ideas or suggestions, you can submit them below. Congratulations!

Come on, as long as you don't post it, I feel like you've already surpassed 90% of the fanfics.

I think I can go to other Douluo universes to play, like the God of Death or the Demon Chef.

In fact, it is not necessary for you to write about Douluo's awakening of the Sharingan and other tailed beasts. In fact, you can complete the Sharingan and the Homura Fan. The Homura Fan is also made of a sacred branch. You need to develop the Sharingan in the early stage, then cultivate the Homura Fan in the later stage, and find a way to turn it into a sacred tree. Then you can plant trees in the divine world. After all, the divine world extracts the energy from the lower world and Xinyang, so it is reasonable for the pig's feet to extract the energy from the divine world.

So far, the writing is very good. Although it is a cool novel, it is not brainless. Everyone in the protagonist group has their own highlights and uses. It is not like other cool novels where the protagonist is brainless and forced to push. In general, it maintains the current level of rhythm and is a proper divine novel.

Organizations can have it, empires can have it, but Konoha Village? It's not other people's ideas. Why do you still want to promote Will of Fire? You can have your own ideas. Don't just follow the name of Naruto.

Who are the heroines? Don't create an original heroine. No sense of immersion. There are so many female supporting characters in Loveland. Picking a few at random is better than the original ones.

I think adding Susanoo would be even better.

I hope readers will continue to read more and try not to keep reading. Woohoo, reading is so important to me as a new author. I kneel down to the readers 😭

It's a really good start, but don't adjust too quickly and slow down.

Don't dig graves and create reincarnated legions of filthy soil

When the protagonist is weak, if he doesn't hug him, if he encounters Tang Hao or someone stronger than the protagonist tries to kill him, he won't be able to resist at all.

Do you accept the three beauties from Shrek, the seven beauties from Tianshui, and the three beauties from Wuhun Palace?

Overall, it's actually pretty good, a bit enjoyable. But I remember that the water dragon bullet appeared from behind, not spit out from the mouth, which is still good. By the way, can Tang San have more scenes? I have long been unhappy with Tang San. Keep up the good work!