Konoha: Start with the Card-Drawing Mobile Game

To be honest, until now, I have not seen any fan fiction in which the protagonist immediately integrated the Uchiha and annihilated F4 after acquiring the Eternal Eye. It was obviously an invincible force in the early stage, but it was just dawdling.

The original work, Naruto mobile game, Naruto OL, Ultra Storm, as long as there is a prototype For example: Ultimate Storm-Otsutsuki Toneri (Tenshenggan) Naruto mobile game-Senju Tobirama (Drifting Samurai) Naruto OL-Uchiha Izuna (If it is convenient, please indicate which game it is in front, so I can find it.)

I thought that I would stop eating beef after I got the S-nin, but after watching it I realized that I still didn't change the plot and continued to cower. Who likes to watch Naruto and read conspiracy theories? Real guns and swords are the most interesting. I won't write it if it is on the shelf.

I really liked this book, but when I saw a man created from the void to fight against and suppress the protagonist, I lost interest in it. This is not how Invincible novels are written. Invincible novels can also be very long and enjoyable without suppressing the protagonist. For example, Pei Tu Gou has a good book, and Dr. Chen, and there is also one called Starting from a Perfect World. For example, the vest element of this book is very good. It is very enjoyable to write. The vest is also one of the core elements of the Tenseigan. This aspect of the vest is much more interesting than writing about Hyuga Natsu Void Tenseigan versus the protagonist.

Why did you give Hinata Natsu the reincarnation eye to use for the Six Paths? Not worth it at all. Is it convenient for you to waste so much pen and ink? It will take a long time to build this thing. It feels like losing a watermelon and picking up sesame seeds.

Um? Does the author want to write a group portrait or multiple protagonists? Take control of it. Don't ☝🤓: Hey~ I did all the sex work, and then I was fucked by Peng Peng.

Why do some people always think that Sasuke's Kaleidoscope is weak? According to the never-extinguishing characteristic of black flame, it is not a conceptual power in any novel. That's it for the Hokage. In a fight, a 10-second death effect will be applied to you. It cannot be removed unless you move the part. Isn't this weak?

Create a god from the void? Why is Ri Xiangxia doing this? If you want to say that she relied on her own planning and hard work to complete her genes and obtain the chakra of the reincarnation eye and ascend to godhood, then that's no problem. But look at Gouba, what you wrote is a Gouba thing? Just send a deus ex machina to the old man with a plug-in, right? Are Ri Xiangxia's efforts and rewards proportional to this? Is Hamura so anxious? Knowing that he was just a mutilated Otsutsuki, he directly found a Hyuga clan member to kill him? None of the old men in the Six Paths are so outrageous. Others are just trying to reincarnate their own son's chakra. Why don't you just call me "the one who reveals destiny?" What? Do you also have a plug-in for Shiren's Eyeless Prophecy? In short, either change it, or let her expose the reincarnation chakra when she encounters danger in the third battle and be noticed by the protagonist, and then be killed by the protagonist and hit GG. Otherwise, I really can't stand it anymore. When I saw Hamura coming down, I knew he was going to cheat Hinata Xia, but that's not how he did it. You should at least let Hamura observe it, and you have to give the rationale for Hamura's cheating on Hinata Xia.

I originally wanted to subscribe, but before it was released, I felt that Hinata Natsu would be cheating and trying to overpower the protagonist. Later, Hinata Natsu relied on the author's will to cheat, and the protagonist had cheats and struggled to fight, so I was a little afraid to watch it.

If the protagonist gets similar operations such as Eternal Sasuke, who cannot kill indiscriminately and has various restrictions (such as insufficient physical development, insufficient body chakra), then Korrun Author, I advise you not to play this kind of poisonous point

What is this Rixiang Xia? This is the protagonist. I've been writing and haven't figured out how to strengthen it. Can anyone tell me what this character is for?

I don't know what the author's main plot is, it's so confusing!

Have you ever seen the Wing Chun peach style of fighting Naruto? You can use it against the evil Senju Imp in the Chunin Exam. While beating him, he had to touch his head to tell him that we are all ninjas from the same village 🙂🙂 The harder the beating, the better.

The author is writing about clams, so he insists on doing it right, let's do it, and the whole day will come out 🙂

No protagonist would give it a try and have a milkshake with an Uchiha. Do you authors know about Uchiha?😡 What are your kaleidoscopes and samsara eyes for? I'm following several novels about Uchiha, but none of them are pure.

Do you want to compare Hinata Xia and the protagonist?

Save yourself the trouble and let's talk about the conclusion first. Hatake Sakumo has Kage-level strength, and> the Konoha Sannin before the Third World War and after the Second World War, their military exploits and reputation in the ninja world far exceeded that of ordinary people. The logo of Konoha White Fang is "White Fang Short Sword, shining white chakra". The sword technique Kakashi performed in the battle of Kannabi Bridge clearly came from Konoha White Fang. Okay, next is the argument. There are too few descriptions of him in the comics, and the formulas are also vague. But we can analyze it from the side. After the Battle of Pain, Konoha elected the sixth Hokage, and Nara Shikaku recommended Kakashi. As a well-known figure in the ninja world, Kakashi, the first reaction of the daimyo was not to copy the ninja, Kakashi of Sharingan, but the son of White Fang. At least in the eyes of the leader of the Fire Country, the value of the Son of the White Fang is far higher than all of Kakashi's names. First of all, the daimyo is an ordinary person and does not understand ninjas. The following characters are more valuable. During the Five Kage talks, when Danzo ran away (Kunai blew himself up after stabbing Susana) When Danzo couldn't be contacted at all, Gaara recommended another ninja. Among them, Gaara even specially emphasized the Sharingan Kakashi. As a result, Onoki's first reaction was "He is White Fang's son." This shows that in Onoki's eyes, White Fang is still deeply impressed even after 20 years of death. The Sons of White Fang are far more important than the so-called copy ninjas. Therefore, Hatake Sakumo is roughly Kage-level in strength, and his military exploits and reputation in the ninja world far exceed those of ordinary people. The next one is the positive one, which is easier to understand. Whether it is the setting book "Book of Zhi" or "Book of Formation", there is such an explanation in it. The former is the Book of Masters, and the Sannin is just a hazy existence in front of him. The latter is the Book of Formation and is more powerful than the Sannin. It's easy to understand, the White Fang of Konoha before his death> The Sannin of Konoha before the Third War and after the Second World War. The specific point is: Jiraiya has not learned the sage mode, but has the bonus of the psychic beast toad. Tsunade who has not mastered the Baihao and Yin seals. There is no forbidden technique such as reincarnation of the dirty land, but Orochimaru signed a contract with Ryuji Cave and can channel thousands of snakes (mastering the Orochimaru Substitution Technique) In addition, in the battle of Kannabi Bridge. During the battle between Kakashi and Iwakakure Jonin, there was such a conversation. White fang short sword, chakra attached This is the symbol of Konoha White fang. Jounin can be regarded as the high-level combat power of a ninja village. You must know that Konoha White Fang has long been dead at this time, so Iwagakure's Jonin still maintains this attitude. Although I don't know the true fighting style of Konoha White Fang, I am certain. The white fang dagger and the shining white chakra are his trademarks. The sword skills Kakashi performed in the battle of Kannabi Bridge must have come from Konoha White Fang.

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The protagonist is obsessed with making six path clones, strengthening the scientist Orochimaru, and making Danzo take the blame. But the writing power is not enough, it feels like a running account

This wave of resurrecting Kaguya Otsutsuki makes me confused. I don't know what the meaning is. It's boring and has no original feeling. I feel that it's more interesting to push it with my own strength😓

It's too scattered, why do you have to worry about the puppet of six paths? In order to make up for the six people, they are almost writing a group portrait. Hinata can't finish it in one breath, so she just drags it on. I have no motivation to watch.

It's a bit boring and I don't want to follow it anymore

This book is set at birth: between 36 and 37 years in Konoha. The reason is roughly as follows In the original anime, there is not only "obtaining the title of Shunshen Shisui in the Third Ninja War and opening the Mangekyo", but also similar conflicts such as Itachi who has become a genin and the young Shisui training together. Itachi was four years old and followed Fugaku to the front line at the end of the Third War to experience the cruelty of war. Theoretically it is impossible for Itachi, who has obtained Konoha's forehead protector to become a genin, to meet the young Shisui. Unless Shisui activates the kaleidoscope as shown in the picture above, and obtains the title of Instantaneous Body Technique on the battlefield, it seems that the protagonists of some fan novels do not dare to be so exaggerated... Since there are many bugs in the original part of the anime, regarding Shisui's age, the main references here are comics, formula books, and the Ultimate Storm-Transformation supervised by Kishimoto himself. The official game "Ultimate Storm·Change" and the ninja drama "Two Uchiha" are Shisui Kaisuzuo. (Kishimoto put a lot of effort into the DLC character Shisui in the game. The official statement is that all the settings of Shisui were set by Kishimoto himself. The manuscript can also be found online, so it can be completely regarded as a reliable setting) Chilabi was restricted from freedom in the middle of World War III. Kirabi was very sensitive to the name of Uchiha Shisui. And from the later battle between Kirabi and Mangekyo Sasuke, it can be seen that even though Kirabi cultivated the Tailed Beast Jade after the third battle, he was still not allowed to leave the village and could only sneak out quietly. You must know that after the end of the Third World War, Kumogakure and Konoha still had some local frictions (Hyuga Hizashi died when the armistice agreement was signed, Konoha 54 years) You must know that in Konoha 47, when the Third War was still in its infancy, Kumogakure even dared to use Kirabi, the successor of the Raikage, the Perfect Jinchuuriki. Such a lineup was enough to provoke a large-scale war against Namikaze Minato in his youth. How come Kirabi later had many restrictions on even leaving Kumogakure Village. My inference is roughly as follows: 1. Uchiha Shisui opened the kaleidoscope during the Third War. With Uchiha Madara's experience of controlling the Nine-Tails, Kumogakure did not dare to let Kirabi appear in front of Shisui. 2. Shisui's reputation has spread to Cloud Hidden Village. Tailed beasts are afraid of Sharingan. Shunshen Shisui, who possesses three Magatama Sharingan, is the elite of the Uchiha clan, so Ai has repeatedly asked Kirabi to pay attention. These two points can explain one thing: Shisui's strength and reputation had reached a very high level in the middle of the Third Ninja War when Kumogakure half retired. So an original anime that is as old as Shisui and Itachi should not be established. In addition, Qing was observing Danzo. Ao once used his Byakugan to observe Mangekyo Shisui's chakra, and Ao's Byakugan was obtained in the third battle. In the third battle, Kirigakure suffered heavy casualties. The Seven Ninja Swordsmen were almost completely wiped out. The three tails (Lin) died, and the time for resurrection is far away. The hypothesis that the villages of Kumogakure and Iwagakure would start another war after World War III is unlikely. Otherwise, wouldn't the matter of the three ninja villages of Iwagakure, Kumogakure, and Kirigakure provoking war against Konoha be very similar to the situation in the Third Ninja World War? (Selectively ignoring the strongest Kazekage ~ The third generation Kazekage died, the fourth generation Kazekage was temporarily selected, the old jinchuriki was half dead, and the useless Sagakure was useless) Aoya probably met Shisui during the Third War, and he was Shisui with the titles of Mangekyou and Shunshen Shisui. In addition, referring to the Ultimate Storm Transformation (there is a problem with the screenshot and cannot be released), the cooling time of the other gods is also ten years. Shisui used the other gods at least once ten years ago. Before the night of the genocide in Konoha 59, the cooling of Shisui's kaleidoscope had been cleared, which means that the kaleidoscope was turned on roughly before Konoha 49. To sum up, let's put aside the originality of the animation team's conflicts. Opening the kaleidoscope during the Third World War and obtaining the title of Shunshen Shisui should be in line with Kishimoto's expectations. In the comics, Uchiha Shisui has never appeared in the pages of Uchiha Obito and Hatake Kakashi. Not at the same time as them, but judging from the approximate ages of Shisui and others in the three battles in the comics, Shisui is probably close to Asuma's age. (Although it seems a little young to open the kaleidoscope at the age of 13, Itachi is also 13 years old, and Obito is even earlier. And those ninjas are like taking hormones. At 13 years old, they look almost like adults. They are too mature. I name Uchiha Itachi here)

To be honest, I have also tried this kind of golden finger, but because I can't write novels, I didn't write it.

Is this the end? More than 100 pictures, holy shit.

I was in a vegetative state again at Station B. I suddenly thought of this book and came back to see where it was. Looking at the results, I went, how could I get to fight Kaguya with just over a hundred pictures?

Good guy, the plot is progressing so fast. So we are planning to change the map. Let's wait a little longer. Let's see what happens after taking a look at the relationship map.

I feel that this system is the same as in the mobile game. It only has two skills and ultimate moves. The rest is learned by the ninja and then the ninja releases the skills. There is a CD. However, the CD is the same as in the mobile game. Ninjas and equipment are the same. Only a few ninjas can be equipped at a time.

This flattery makes my skin crawl, I can't stand it anymore

Can the author open another cup of card drawing? Don't do too many private goods, it's okay to develop slowly. I hope it starts before the third war.