
Xuanhuan: My Disciple Is an Empress
玄幻:我的徒弟是女帝
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- Completed
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- 1.1M Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
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- Xuanhuan
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- 1y ago
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- Qidian
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Ye Feng seemed to have escaped everyone's control and completely escaped the fate of being a chess piece. In fact, he still failed to escape from Han Tianxi's grasp in the end. Han Tianxi is the hidden final boss and the most terrifying boss. She controls everything and the protagonist. The direction of everything in the world is under her control. In the end, Ye Feng cannot escape from her control. Even her strength (including the system) is given by Han Tianxi and can be taken back at any time. Although Ye Feng himself is very satisfied with the result. In the book, the chess players who calculate the protagonist's layout should be in order: the protagonist <Ren Yue Zhenren <Emperor Peeping Sky <Luo Li <Young Sword Immortal <Great Supreme Wu Tian <King of the World <Han Tianxi. It just so happened that several of the first few were Luo Li's fathers in a sense. The protagonist is very depressed. An important reason is that he has too rich experiences, has traveled through too many worlds, has too many identities, and has too many memories. But he lost all his memory. At the beginning, only two memories of Blue Star and Xuantian Sect were left. Later, he experienced some things and recovered step by step. This made him a newbie, unable to know the truth and direction of the matter, unable to escape the calculations of others, and even unable to know who was the decent and who was the villain. On the other hand, the big boss Han Tianxi knew everything very early, and then used her means to plan everything, calculate everything, and control everything. Only then did everything develop according to her will, and the protagonist could not escape her control. In fact, the protagonist Ye Feng started out as a very high-ranking young swordsman. Together with Emperor Gama and Great Supreme Wu Tian, he was one of the three supreme beings in the spiritual world. His strength and strategy were at the top level. At least Xia Lan, the creation empress at that time, was a scumbag in front of him (but the book also said that Xia Lan's talent was much better than him, and her strength and strategy grew very fast, and she would definitely surpass the young swordsman in time). Later, due to his background, the plot failed, he lost everything and was reincarnated as a FW mortal. His strength and strategy were wiped out. This gave Han Tianxi the opportunity to grow up and control him. Another reason is that the protagonist's apprentices are basically either reincarnations of old monsters or old monsters themselves. They have at least millions of years of experience. Their three views have long been formed, and they have only been with the protagonist for only a dozen years. The protagonist can hardly change their three views. The protagonist who has not gained the memory of the young swordsman is basically a righteous person, but his disciples are all dark and cruel, and they hate and kill innocent people indiscriminately, which is evident. Each of them has a villain identity, and they are each the master of power. They always do bad things without telling the protagonist, and they also lie to the protagonist. Sometimes the protagonist can see their thoughts, and sometimes he can't. Especially Han Tianxi, Luo Li, and Mo Baiyi, if they didn't love the protagonist, if they wanted to kill the protagonist, the protagonist would have died countless times. Moreover, Han Tianxi, Ye Xianxue, Mo Baiyi, and Luo Li are all deeply yandere, and they all want to monopolize the protagonist, or even hurt their fellow apprentices and even the protagonist himself. Han Tianxi destroyed the protagonist's cultivation, broke her legs and locked her up next to her (Xia Lan did something similar in the past), Mo Baiyi did the same, Luo Li did the same, and although Ye Xianxue did not destroy the protagonist's cultivation, she tried to put the protagonist under house arrest in the demon clan's territory but failed. Among the non-yandere apprentices in the back, Shi Yao loves and hates the protagonist, Qu Yanyu only likes the protagonist, and Ye Xuanchu only hates the protagonist and has almost no affection. The only real pure master-disciple relationship is with Liu Xiaofan. Each of the yandere apprentices is the master of power, and their relationship is entirely dependent on the protagonist. Once they don't care about the protagonist's face, they will become life-or-death enemies, trying to take each other's lives. This situation changed after the Xuantian Sect was established in the Chaos Continent. The characters in this book are average. The first few of the protagonists are okay, but the last few are very weak. Han Tianxi, Ye Xianxue, and Mo Baiyi, three members of the Qingyun Peak family, took on the role of the heroine. They were all well portrayed, with rich plots and stories, and all aspects of the description were perfect, and the protagonist's daily emotions were described very delicately. Among them, Han Tianxi surpassed the other two with her exclusive chapter on past and present life, early pregnancy and special ending. Although the three Yu families each have their own characteristics, they all turn out to be cold-faced, bloodthirsty and yandere empresses who both love and deceive the protagonist. Their character creations are quite homogeneous. The disciples other than Yu Sanjia are all supporting characters, and their portrayal is very good. It can be seen that the author wanted to create the role of Luo Li as the heroine, giving her a lot of vests (more vests than Han Tianxi, second only to the protagonist Ye Feng, and the only female in the protagonist group without the empress vest), deeply binding her plot to the main plot, and giving her the most reversals. It can be said that it was difficult to judge whether she was a decent or a villain before Wu Tian died. It's a pity that even so, it still can't change her status as a supporting role of a tool person. The greater number of times it advances the main plot, the last time to confirm one's feelings with the protagonist, less companionship with the protagonist, and less description of the protagonist's daily emotions, are all typical characteristics of the poor tool man supporting role. In this situation, even giving her an exclusive chapter cannot make up for it, not to mention that the exclusive chapter is just a supplement to the main plot and a deal with the protagonist, the Young Sword Fairy. Even if she is the tool-man supporting character with the most scenes, it just means that she is the most useful tool-man supporting character. The role behind Luo Li is purely a tool supporting role, and she doesn't even have the capital to compete for the heroine. Among them, Shiyao provides the classic plot of eating soft rice that is popular to see. As we all know, because of the existence of the Empress (a powerful female character who has feelings for the protagonist), the Empress novels often have plots of giving in to others, which is very classic and popular. In fact, there are not many plots of eating soft rice in this article, and because Shiyao is not the reincarnation of the empress, but the empress who is at her peak when she appears, she relies on her strong strength and power to support the protagonist from the time after she appears until she is driven away by the protagonist, and steadily outputs the plot of eating soft rice. It's a pity that her scenes are too few. There is nothing to mention about Xuanchu Ye. She is a cannon fodder female supporting role for a minor villain who has not been cleansed. There is nothing to mention about Qu Yanyu and Liu Xiaofan. They are almost non-existent supporting roles. They come and go as soon as they are called. They only appear when they are used, and the author does not set any daily emotional description for them. It can be said that the existence of the following supporting characters is the downfall of this article.
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March is a month of 10,000 days, which feels a bit overwhelming, and many foreshadowings have not been dealt with well. So in order to ensure subsequent quality, the update frequency has been slightly reduced. But the guaranteed three to four updates per day will be restored. The update time is still the same, updated before six o'clock every evening.
What the hell did you write? It makes me so embarrassed
Is Tian tide beautiful?
Beautiful or not
What to write! In one word, "extremely bad"!
It poisoned me to death. The system gave you a cultivation level that you had to hide. After accepting a disciple and being ridiculed, you still made a contract. Then you just open up your cultivation level and fight. I saw two pictures and it felt weird.
The writing fits my personality so well 😆
Later, I return to reality and then quickly switch back. What the hell is this?
Comrade, you need to work hard
The content is not coherent enough, the jumps are too abrupt, the reversals are far-fetched, and the overall feeling is average.
The content in the middle and later stages is absolutely unbelievable, but it's okay in the end, and the start is average, very typical. The content in the middle and later stages is definitely AI. This horse riding is not a poem that can be written by humans at all.