Mounting and Cutting System: Starting from the Pioneering Lord

Is it so powerful that throwing a stone is as powerful as an AK? Just build a bunch of 5-pound iron bullets and put them in a space backpack. Then go and surround a city alone. See who doesn't like it and give him a bullet. If you dare to come out and chase him, just run away. Anyway, you are absolutely fast. If you fly a kite, you can kill all the city in 3.4 Months.

First of all, I am following other novels. I read this one after I finished the update. Surprisingly, it was pretty good. I basically read the paid chapters outside.                                                                                                                                                              The title of the novel contains Qiqiao, but the general category should be "Invincible Literature"                    Western fantasy novels                                                      . The overall rhythm of the novel is relatively smooth. At present, the largest part is the battle, accounting for 40%-60% of the whole. The main point of enjoyment is the invincible crushing. The over-plot and territory construction together account for about 30%, and the emotional drama accounts for about 15%. Although the specific number of girls is about 330 chapters, the overall rhythm of the novel is relatively smooth and does not affect the specific reading experience, so it is acceptable.                                      ，，，（，！）                                           But, let's talk about it next. Although the novel is relatively smooth, there are really many flaws. Personally, I feel that the biggest flaw at the moment is that the background settings apply too many settings from the Game of Thrones, accounting for at least one-third. Various names, characters, map backgrounds, and the kingdom where the protagonist is located in the Game of Thrones. It can be seen as a replica of Westeros. The duplication rate of the main characters is more than 40%. Although it is very labor-saving to copy, it is really easy to make a show. It is like adding beef and pork to a pot of fish soup. It is not inedible, but it is against the law. Another obvious shortcoming is the combat power system, especially in the Invincible novel. For example, the protagonist's attribute points before advancing to the legend are 63. His physical strength can suppress the chaos god servants in the Holy Light Trial World, but when his attributes are 43, he can separate himself from the gods in the hell system through the portal. When fighting against each other, according to the training techniques, when fighting the gods of the hell system, the attribute increase is 2 times. When fighting the gods, the increase is 10 times or 12 times. It feels a bit confusing. I hope the author can sort out the combat power settings later. A good setting will always make the novel better. As for other shortcomings, you can read them in the discussion forum yourself. My own words are not so obvious because I read them faster.                           ，

I just wanted to ask. When the castle is in chaos, the protagonist's skills can completely snatch away valuable items. After all, there is system space. Second, since weapons are valuable. Armor is valuable and can be looted. Why do you need to protect a burden for 1,000 gold? It's not cash, it's just a promise to kill a few more people and grab more equipment if you have the time. I have collected enough 1,000 gold already. It's no problem to scrape together a few thousand. This is no longer losing the watermelon and picking up the sesame seeds. This is the difference between watermelon and sesame seeds.

To be honest, I think it's a bit of a drama when it comes to the dragon turning into a human form. Maybe it's because of Game of Thrones that solidified the image of the dragon. However, I still support the author as always. After all, it's quite enjoyable to watch. Don't be a eunuch.

The writing is okay, but he is just another eunuch. Just talk about it, whether you should accept it or not, thinking that you are accepting the cliché, but it turns out that you are more clichéd if you don't accept it.

Okay, you are one of the best among the many knight-and-blade novels I have read. I will go to the knight-and-blade club when I have time to help you promote it

The domestic lords are not very good at writing. They have a strong Chinese style in terms of cultural consciousness, and their speaking tone is a combination of Chinese and Western. The result looks neither Chinese nor Western, which is very strange. Alas, can't we write orthodox Western Lords stories in China?

Another eunuch story with multiple female protagonists

It feels a bit inconsistent when I read it. The author has always exaggerated how powerful the protagonist is. He is already a humanoid tank when he puts on armor. He can kill thousands of people in a short time and throw spears as powerful as cannonballs. However, when doing things, he does not feel that he fits this kind of personality. I don't know how to describe it, but there is a slight sense of dissonance

I feel more and more that the author is showing off his skills, writing those witty words, and writing those long paragraphs of psychological activities. But what determines whether a novel is good or not should be the content of the story itself. In the past dozen or so chapters, to be honest, there hasn't been much in the way of useful information. Sometimes, after reading a chapter, there is no progress in the story.

The first part is very nice and interesting, but later on, various descriptions start to appear, but they are often considered to be too few words. The key point is: Originally, the core of your horse-riding and slashing book was the Peerless Bulldozer, and Peerless Mowing was the more enjoyable part. However, it turns out that the author probably wanted to describe epic scenes, describe daily life and battle scenes in detail, but the result was less enjoyable, and the description of the battle scenes was too powerful. Collapse (Chapter 184), as mentioned before, the protagonist's attributes and skills have been modified by modifiers, making him basically invincible. Before, he had 45 strength and 44 agility, which was already easily unparalleled. Even the dragon lady can't match his strength, and his half-orc hero only has 20+ strength. Later, the protagonist uses attribute points, reaching 61 strength and 60 agility (as mentioned in the previous setting, the attribute increase is not linear, but exponential), and he has practiced Holy Light Fighting Qi, and his strength has doubled. The already invincible attribute plus Holy Light should theoretically be used to fight against gods in the future. Guaranteed, the result was the battle against the Centaur chief in Chapter 184. Although the description of the strength after purifying the bloodline was very strong, but in the description of the battle with the protagonist, it was written: I caught several attacks with 70% of the protagonist's strength, and in the end the protagonist used 120% of the strength to kill him instantly. When I saw this, I didn't continue. I have the desire to continue reading. This kind of centaur chief is an elite monster at best. His strength attribute is less than 30 at most, which is about the same as the half-orc hero. In terms of attributes, this elite monster is at best a child less than 10 years old compared to the male protagonist, who is a peak Tyson-level boxing champion. , Under this comparison, a 10-year-old child caught Tyson's attack with 70% of the power... So the combat power system has collapsed. I hope the author will not forget the difference in the strength of the characters for the sake of exciting descriptions when describing the battle scenes, which will lead to the drama. Once the drama is played, there will be no sense of substitution...

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you watch the third watch, the slightest praise begins to sound, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you watch the fifth update, readers' support spontaneously forms, and the voices of praise become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in a long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updating may not solve all difficulties, but more than 90% of the problems come from insufficient updates.

The feeling now is that the author doesn't know what to write There is no clear enemy There is no clear goal It just hangs there It gives me the feeling that the outline has not been written here at all Then there is a high probability that the alien world will attack, and then the protagonist will become a god all the way, and then collect a bunch of harems and disappear

It looks good, but I can't help but slap my butt 🙂

The procrastinating first 7 chapters drove away half of the readers, and the clueless Chapter 8 drove away half of the remaining readers. The author should read these 8 chapters again when he is free. It is best to revise them, and don't dwell on them without thinking. Otherwise, your results will probably be lost.

Why didn't the author try peeling the goblins, drying them and salting them to see if they could be fed to the kobolds? This saves a lot of food...

The eunuch protagonist is a Lord of Juju but has no farming elements and is more like a mercenary.

I feel like the more I write about it, the worse it gets. "Hai Clan Visits Relatives." I suggest you delete it and just poison it to death for me.

I specifically subscribed to a chapter and let me tell you, the protagonist in the first ten chapters is really stupid.

I thought about the problem. You were originally just hacking and slashing to build an army, but you ended up fighting alone from the beginning of the advanced legend. Moreover, the advanced legend was so anticlimactic that all the characters were sacrificed, and something started to go wrong. I wanted to complain at the time, but I didn't bother to talk about you after seeing your update. Your subsequent missions and travels were also mediocre, and now that you have entered the Dianzhongdian Sea Tribe, you feel aggrieved What do you, a sea tribe, think? The land army under the sea cannot be deployed, and it is hard to explain why you let the sea people come ashore to fight. You have strayed from the topic. Everyone is watching your territorial war. How long has it been since the beginning of the tour? How long have the two duchess and the previous businesswoman been hidden?

The protagonist feels to me like a simple-minded person with well-developed limbs. The panel is unreasonable and doesn't match at all. It's very abrupt and can't be read with your brain.

As title. There is a table of good books, followed by bad books, and a table of eunuchs and a chapter of Ten Days and Half Months and a dog.

Brothers, please collect and read. It is not easy to chop down seedlings 🥺

Is this book really going to be cut?

It looks good and suits my taste. It tastes like boiling animal blood.

Ask if there is one? That's the Body Limiting Potion. Has the protagonist ever taken the Body Limiting Potion since then?

From 3 updates a day to 1 update every 2 days

It's too watery. Come on, author. I've been nursing for half a year.