Versatile Mage: the Government Is over and the System Is Coming?

You just took care of all Mo Fan's wives, right🤭, that's so shameless😁

It's okay if the heroine doesn't have Tang Yue 🙂

The writing is generally okay, but it is too close to the original work, but your strength is much stronger than that of Mo Fan at the same time. You don't consider the reality at all, and you still follow the thinking of the original work. Compare the super-level full cultivator against the deputy department, the semi-forbidden curse against the main department, and the forbidden curse against the deputy country. Take a look and see if there are many so-called challenges that are not accepted by you. You should be licking your feet at ordinary times. Bastard, you are all rebelling against Tiangang. In the latest chapter, going to a girls' school to blindly guess is just a slap in the face. Normally, you shouldn't notify people more than a month in advance. It takes a month to prepare for the welcome ceremony. It takes half a month for a department-level inspection to go to our place. I feel that you are still a dog for improving your cultivation. Didn't the forbidden curse break through in vain? 🤔

Later, I was convinced by Xu Zhaoting's forced extra scenes. In the original work, he did have some talent, but at most he was almost the same as Mu Bai or Xiaohou, right? Mu Bai had no resources in the early stage and was far behind Mo Fan and Old Zhao. Only when he reached the super level, he surpassed Old Zhao by one step. When Monkey joined the military and had resources in the later stage, he was one step behind Mo Fan and Mu Bai, which is about the same as Old Zhao. So logically speaking, the four of them The first one should be Mo Fan > Mu Bai > or = Old Zhao and Xiaohou (According to Uncle Luan, the three of them are actually Mo Fan's helpers, so they should be similar, but Uncle Luan said that Mu Bai will have many roles in the dark plane, and there is a high probability that he will help Mo Fan defeat the dark side. The Dark King may become the new Dark King, so it may be a bit higher than the two of them), but in your book, when Mo Fan does not lack any resources of the original work, Xu Zhaoting gives me the feeling that it directly surpasses Mo Fan. The two most impressive points are the arrival of the National Team. In the United States, Mo Fan was attacked by the Black Church. In the original book, Mo Fan seemed to be injured, but he seemed to have fought for several rounds until rescue came. In the end, Mo Fan almost died in one round here, or did Lao Zhao and Xu Zhaoting beat him away? 🤤 The second point is that during the World Championship, the two opponents that Mo Fan fought so hard to defeat in the original book were all defeated by Xu Zhaoting? And it looks very relaxed? Sprinkle some poison on the props and then kill Captain Britain with a sneak attack? (The mage with a strong Chaos system in the original book was the reason Mo Fan wanted to awaken the Chaos system because of him). If you don't steal Mo Fan's resources, even if you do, you will sell them to him, and at most you will steal some of his money. However, in the original work, he has never had any money. No matter how it is written like this, except that Mo Fan is worse than the protagonist, I can't think of any reason why Xu Zhaoting can compare to the son of the plane Mo Fannb, just because your protagonist's Liu family sponsors him? But how many people does the entire Liu family have to support? It's impossible to give all the resources to him, right? At most, your protagonist should give him more care. Others, Lao Zhao, have a worse family than yours? Moreover, he is still a young master, and given so many resources, is he better than Mo Fan? So in my opinion, Xu Zhaoting is at the same level as Mu Bai Little Monkey Lao Zhao in the original work, but what you wrote here is even worse than Mo Fan, which is so disgusting. Let's come back and say that the protagonist has been either pretending to be B or looking for a woman. During the World Championship, he was a mentor. He would look for this woman and then that woman (the only good thing was that he participated in a King Hunting Competition and became a King Hunter, but I don't remember whether I went before the World Championship or during the World Championship). Brother, don't you have any good plot at all? Do I have to keep looking for women? Wouldn't it be nice to go out hunting and do a mission?

Forget about harvesting Mu Ningxue, Ye Xinxia can also harvest it. I don't understand. Although it is a fanfic, you can't just pick whichever one you want!

It's better not to mess with Ye Xinxia. How can you pry away the person Mo Fan has raised since he was a child? Even if he robs him, don't you think that Mo Fan has been raised since he was a child and won't react?

I was really speechless when I saw Liu Bei and Zhang Fei's mood.

Those plots of pretending to be a cup of tea are too embarrassing. How can the author play without strengthening the IQ of passers-by? They're all mages, so let's make them smarter.

I hope it will be a single or double heroine, because there are too many harem stories in France 😒

Chapter 18: Giant Poison, Guo Caitang's words were embarrassing. . . High-level mage, two-star hunter master, showing off wherever he goes, such as the security guard (embarrassing) and principal of Tianlan High School, Zhan Kong, Mo Fan's classmates, the city demon hunting team, Mu Zhuoyun and Ning Xue are embarrassed to give things. He Yuna embodies the protagonist who is both responsible and independent. . . . If you can resist these, you can look forward to it. And Jiang Shaojun's words were also embarrassing.

I have been thinking about what resources and money I will earn, and what money I will spend if I get a position? Ten years of clearing up the prefecture and one hundred thousand snowflakes of silver

This is my suggestion after reading a fanfic, and then I thought about some new books that have just been published. Ignore the ones about "Shadow Army" because they are settings in other books (because there are too many words to type. If I want to type it again, I can only post a screenshot here, but I can't find a copy. If you are interested, just read and write about the plot mentioned in it. If there are book friends who want to open a new book after reading it, you can come and kick me. I will pay to read it.

Damn, this one of yours is worse than that one. You asked me to play the Guofu one as soon as it came out.

Inexplicably, I wrote a few rounds of nonsense. If I complained about it, I would delete the comment immediately. Pooh

It's okay to have a harem, but it's not necessary. In the original work, every mother who meets the protagonist for the first time will be shy and have a good impression of the protagonist. It's a bit embarrassing😓

The topic is great and novel, I hope you won't stop writing it.

I personally feel that I am a very picky person, and I will basically not give out monthly tickets, nor will I give out recommended tickets. Just read a book. If you write well, I will praise you. If you write poorly, I will complain. Originally I also saw this name. I thought it was the system after Mo Fan's term ended, so I didn't read it. The second and third times I didn't read it, so I simply took a look. Oh, it was the previous one. Then read on slowly. There is a little bit of dissatisfaction in the front. But they are all acceptable. I slowly got into the mood for the rest of my writing, and I feel that the writing is very good. Especially feelings, there is no procrastination. The writing is pretty good to be honest.

The author's writing skills are not good enough, the characters are not well established, and the plot is also somewhat imperfect. You can try to read other people's works and improve them.

The five tiger generals in the entire French world should all be mages.

😍😍Potential to look good

Can you collect it from Mo Fan 😭😭😭😭

From the beginning of more than 300 chapters, it can be said that Invincible has no plot to write, so the author, do you plan to end the plot with the women?

Which level of emperor does Demon God Emperor Fengxiu's combat power belong to?

Are there Ai Tutu and Bai Tingting as heroines? Please let me know 🥺

Author, is your book Taixu Gulong still updated?

Brother, how much money did you make from writing this book? Can you tell me?

This book is about to be finished. The new book is Versatile Mage: A random forbidden spell every month. Please support me.

How can it be possible to write a popular book with a non-human mind that overwhelms the protagonist's fighting ability?