Question, Understand, Become the Holy Lord

There is a feeling of pressing the accelerator to the bottom What on earth did I watch? I can't come! What did the author write? Aba aba

It's a little bit toxic to me. After all, I'm a gold digger, sifting through a lot of new books to find what I want to read. So I'm a little bit poisonous about mine, and for some people it might be straight up poisonous. It is best for Zhu Tian Wen to have multiple female protagonists. If you have a single female protagonist, you have to write a character who is courageous enough to be able to withstand so many women in the world of Zhu Tian Wen. This is not easy. Many people will bring themselves into the perspective of the protagonist, and when everyone reads a book, there will be a few Bai Yueguang in the book. At this time, just including one is not enough. It is difficult to agree with each other. Either accept them all, or don't want any of them. Another point is that if you already accepted Platycodon from Inuyasha, then you have to accept another Kagome, otherwise you will feel like you are being cuckolded.

There are so many treasures in Jackie Chan's Adventures, but you only used five chapters. Inuyasha said that the ugly part didn't even hit half of the power level of Jackie Chan's Adventures, and you wrote more than forty chapters.

Damn it, I can only post 10 pictures at most, and I can't post the remaining 104 pictures

It's quite good. The author doesn't need to pay attention to those who say there is no heroine. If your book fails, they will just pat their butts and leave without responsibility. Every book has this kind of eunuch. Just write it according to your own original idea. I'm not sure whether there is a heroine or not, but according to the reviews of the book, this book will definitely die.

To attract jade.

When writing fan works, even if you are a fun person, you can't go too far. The ending of Holy Lord has begun to show signs, but as a result, the whole plot of Dragon Clan is ridiculously collapsed. When you write it this way, I don't see the coolness at all. It's all about the protagonist enjoying himself. The plot is also incoherent in several places. If the author doesn't write out the plot he wants, how will the readers know? Do they rely on guessing? The premise of flashbacks and interludes is that you can attract people's appetite. But you leave out a lot of plot at the beginning, so how can readers have the desire to read further? After the Platycodon volume, my desire to read the rest of the book plummeted. I don't know if other readers were excited about it, but the author must have been excited about it.

Why do you feel like so many books have been written about Inuyasha lately? It's already 2024, don't keep writing such old dramas. I'm really unfamiliar and have no impression at all. I read a little bit and couldn't stand it at all. I have no interest in the characters and plot.

The jumps in the plot are astonishing. All the famous scenes that you love to see have been danced, and I will show you the results directly. This means that you can start reading this book from any chapter, because the author will jump into the plot inexplicably anyway. It's very simple, but it's also very time-saving. That is to say, if you don't like it, just jump.

Alas, I still can't accept that the heroine has been in a fifty-year relationship with someone else. It felt like there was a thorn in my heart. After all, I don't believe they did nothing for fifty years, even if there is beautification in the anime. I thought the author would use the power of time and space to change it, but he didn't change it. The heroine still couldn't accept the fact that she was in love. After all, reading novels is all about having fun. I wish the author this book will be a hit

After reading the comments, I found that I was not the only one who thought the author was too arrogant.

Internet articles are highly commercialized writing and are aimed directly at consumers The author cannot ask "Is this plot a poisonous point?" If you need to ask, try not to write about this plot, because it will inevitably screen out some readers On the contrary, ask more "Can this writing be used as a fun point" and decide to be brainless (the benefits brought by cheating) in The proportion of fun points will be advanced according to this rhythm Readers are in real life, and in novels, they will do more things. If you want to be happy, don't let difficulties advance the protagonist The protagonist may not be familiar with his own power and even make mistakes, but he cannot tolerate the lowering of the upper limit and the lack of power. If he plays with the hang-ups, he will inevitably dissuade several readers every other paragraph in the subsequent plot.

All the following are the author's own comments. After reading the InuYasha volume, please moisturize it quickly, children.

The plot is okay, but your emotional drama is really mediocre. After Jackie Chan Adventures World ended, I ordered a few more chapters. These few emotional dramas made me embarrassed and I didn't want to read any more.

Don't you dare to kill the decent characters in the original novel?

Even Toru Yamayama came. Then finally add some special job titles. Allen Bushnell deserves a referee job title, and the justice in his heart deserves a special job title.

After seeing Dragons, tell me about your feelings about not wanting to read it. This type of novel can have multiple female protagonists, single female protagonist, or no female protagonist. In advance, the author's writing skills are sufficient, but obviously the author's writing skills are not enough. If you want to write a love book, this type of book is actually not suitable for detailed description, so for the stability of the novel, it is best not to have a female protagonist. If you want to take Platycodon to transcend the world together, it is not suitable. The biggest worry in Infinite Flow novels is to take others to transcend the world, especially the heroine, because it will interfere with the plot, and it is better for you to bring brothers than the heroine. Brothers like blue idiot Aqua can't do that. They just have fun. Of course, if your writing skills are good, you don't have to worry. One plot and one emotion is most suitable for most authors. You can write extras. You can read this novel, although it is quite average.

Looking at the title of this chapter, I feel confused like Tom Cat vs. Megatron.

The title and introduction say that the Holy Master never said that he would travel to other worlds, and then out of the fifty chapters in the new book, five of Jackie Chan's Adventures are written, and the rest are all about Inuyasha. You can at least indicate it in the introduction.

After watching more than a hundred episodes of Inuyasha and more than twenty completed episodes, the only characters I like are Kikyo and Kagura. The woman who could not harm InuYasha even if she hated him so much - because she still had a deep love for InuYasha in her heart. It's not that she is indifferent, it's just that she knows that she is a dead person and a person with no future. After all, she couldn't stay with Inuyasha. Many people don't understand Kikyo, saying that she has become dark because of her unfair fate, and that she is not as sunny and cheerful as Kagome. Yes, indeed. If a person is resurrected after being killed and can be as good as a normal person, then that is the Holy Mother. But what did she do after she was resurrected, besides wanting to drag Inuyasha to hell. Instead of staying with Inuyasha and fighting with Kagome, he embarked on a journey alone to find the fragments of the Shikon Tama, hoping to end this endless battle. She saved many, many people, including soldiers, residents, children, sweethearts in the village... Too many to count. As for Inuyasha, it was only when Kikyo misunderstood that he killed her fifty years ago. When she was knocked into the Miasma River by Naraku, InuYasha was still arguing with Gangya. When she was captured by Naraku with spider silk, Inuyasha was still carrying Kagome on his back. Her last words before her death were: "You're here, that's enough." Not everyone can feel the tenderness of Platycodon grandiflorum. Can Zishan's Bow cure Platycodon's injury? I couldn't come to a conclusion until the end. It's just that the Zishan Bow contains huge spiritual power and is an important weapon to defeat Naraku. This is Kikyo, the Kikyo-sama who you say wants Inuyasha to die and wants everyone to die. How broad-minded do you need to be able to tolerate all the injustices and all the misfortunes in this world? Lord Kikyo silently endured all this.

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I was tricked by Xiaoyu, can't I take him back?

The writing is very reasonable, and the writing style is okay, but it often uses long paragraphs to describe the plot. Although it is more in line with the real situation, after all, no one will believe others in just a few words, but the length will be longer, which is not a very popular way of writing. However, I can feel that the author writes very carefully and often checks information.

No, it was just added to the bookshelf from Duodu. I haven't read it yet.

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The author's writing is very good, definitely worth reading and subscribing! Recommend a book that is decisive in killing, sharp and joyful. "Old Man in Time Travel Picks Up Rags and Survives by Making Bad Movies" is hilarious...