The Pirated Version of Onmyoji from the Detective World

I like Xiaolan very much, but I hate Conan very much. The more I like Xiaolan, the more I think Conan is a scumbag. He likes to solve cases so much, so let's get married to the case.

Usually, what is not said is nothing more than wanting to do it. Now one side of Conan fans are shouting that they are tired of watching the xx heroine, and the other side is full of words: Kid-sama is so handsome, Gin is so handsome, Touko, mommy loves you ahhhhhh~

My personal suggestion is that it is better for the protagonist to do whatever he can, and not to do it deliberately if he can't. After all, forcing him to lick his face in every plot will affect the viewing experience. After all, the protagonist has no reason to become stronger, unless the death of the original owner's parents is related to Black.

Friendly reminder: 1. The author of this book is the New Zealand Party! 2. The identity of Onmyoji is basically a useless addition! 3. The sense of participation in the case is not strong!

If the shikigami is conscious, it is recommended to directly cp the shikigami. Ali is the best in the world, not to mention Mikiko and Izanami.

After Hongzi appeared, I felt that the character of the protagonist had changed. Coupled with all kinds of pressure, when encountering characters who had a role in the original work, they started to fight 50-50 or were forcibly beaten and then turned around. The experience was very bad. Before that, it was pretty good...

After reading more than 30 pictures, I thought at first that the protagonist would continue to run the Yin Yang House, and then cooperate with some powerful financial groups to fight against the black organization, or make money, and then intersperse some daily shikigami subjugation (because there are many legends such as Kiritengu in Conan's daily cases) and the Ke Xue main line. Unexpectedly, the protagonist closed the Yin Yang House and followed Conan through the plot. Moreover, he said before that he didn't want Xiaolan to be deceived, but later when Shinichi turned into Conan, he didn't tell Xiaolan about it 😰😰😰

This plot... Is really frustrating. Not to mention killing all the people in the motherland, at least you should be able to come and go freely. No one can keep you. As a result, one moment is Gin, and the other is Koizumi Anko. The main character has no highlights at all. Five may be serious, but it is better than five. At most, I have seen it on the shelves, and I feel a loss even if I spend a little money 😅

I was attracted by the name, but in fact it has a lot of poisonous points. If it follows the original drama, why don't I watch the original work?

The title of this novel is worthy of being a pirated copy of Onmyoji, and even the protagonist feels like a pirated version of human beings.

I have read more than 300 chapters, and there is basically nothing I want to change the plot of. If you want to watch a female protagonist, it will end with a little ambiguity with the female character, and there will be no interaction with the shikigami. It's just an ordinary novel that follows the original plot and doesn't dare to break the official CP.

With overwhelming fighting power, no one can beat the protagonist

To be honest, I read in the comments that the Yin Yin House will be opened again later. However, I no longer had the desire to read any more. I had completely forgotten the title of the book at the beginning. Your theme is Onmyoji! What kind of detective is this? The plot is even more inexplicably streamlined. Since you don't plan to change the plot, why bother writing a plot where Gongteng is forced to become smaller. Furthermore, the golden finger of the protagonist is a bit stretched. It is understandable that he can suppress the battle, but it is a bit too much to compete with everyone at 55, and the protagonist is still at a disadvantage among those with 55. Ha? Those shikigami and monsters, aren't they full of character, that's all? Otherwise, change the previous part. Even if the later part is well written, the previous content will be enough to dissuade you. Meaningless

The protagonist is a thousand-year-old bastard. He can hold back so well that he is deflated at this point and deflated at that point.

The protagonist doesn't know what he's doing day by day, and Onmyoji doesn't show that at all. It's like he's following the plot all the time, with no main line.

The existence of shikigami and your identity as an onmyoji is too low. Even if you delete this setting, it will not have any impact on your book. Also, the male protagonist is a little too involved in the plot of Conan, and the plot descriptions are almost the same, which is not attractive at all, especially when the setting of your Onmyoji is irrelevant. Increase the proportion of the Onmyoji setting, increase the proportion of your own activities as an Onmyoji, and reduce the proportion of joining the main line of Conan. For now, pretty average.

There is only one snow girl after more than thirty chapters, so it would be better to add some shikigami. In Conan, there are some supernatural or ancient urban legend-themed cases, which can be combined with triggers to obtain new shikigami. Remember there are quite a few snow girls? It can be used to awaken the snow girl and even turn into SP. You can also use the Kiritengu to activate the Tengu. Finally, there is still a set of own shikigami triggering routes.

The protagonist is so useless. The author didn't give him any time to develop. The villains come one after another. Onmyoji is so strong in other books, but why is it so low in this book?

To be honest, after reading the previous part, I can only say that there is nothing new, including the wording, the allusion to the past, and that I don't know, but I happen to be in the same class as the protagonist. It is a coincidence that I happen to be sitting at the same table with Xiaolan. When someone asked me, I just came to my senses. It was a coincidence that I later realized that Shinichi is a neighbor. Although I understood it was to develop the plot, the protagonist first said that he should stay away from death. After a coincidence, normal people should sort out their memories. It gave me a feeling of being stupid.

How should I put it? The protagonist fits the title of the book very well. It's a pirated version of Onmyoji. It's so useless. What is the author planning to write next?

I don't quite understand what it means to talk about the original person and my previous life in the first two chapters. I also repeatedly emphasize that I was deeply emotionally affected by the original owner after traveling through time. Soul penetration is very poisonous in the first place, but it is poisoned repeatedly. What does that mean? I have to ask.

Summon 100 shikigami. . Boring. . So many shikigami. . Fundamental word count

Is there a heroine here? Who is the heroine? Damn it

Is there a female protagonist? Single, multiple, or none?

I saw the catalog and went to Hogwarts, so are you sure who the heroine is?

I think the author should change the main character's name to Hua Yingxiong. After all, he is said to be the Lone Star of Heaven. He killed both his parents when he was a child.

This is a modified version of The Witcher. The setting of Itchy Rat has not been incorporated. You just summon a snow girl and upgrade it with a Bodhidharma? Rising star?

I just saw the treasure map and I was speechless. You are not writing about the heroine Xiaolan. What is the purpose of writing about the protagonist and Xiaolan going shopping? Forcing the protagonist not to take that batch of gold coins? If you can take 150 million yen, let the protagonist take 500,000 yen, right?