I Rely on the Panel to Practice Martial Arts and Live Forever

What the hell are you writing? It's a mess, rubbish.

This book is the author's first contract signing, and I am very happy. There are many things that the author does not understand at all. This is not just about writing skills. Today someone complained that the plot written by the author was too strange, but I was actually very happy. Because this proves that I finally have a stranger who is reading my book and can take the initiative to talk to each other. Even though he was complaining, and I felt that what he was complaining about was right, so I modified it slightly. Go back to the author's page, like his comment, and send another thank you to the author. It has been modified. Back to the text, where are my comments? Where did my huge comment go? That's all I have to say in total! Finally, I asked in the group and found out that as long as the main text is revised, this chapter will be gone. It hurts, it hurts too much. And the reader, I'm sorry, I really didn't want to delete the comment.

I don't understand either. What on earth do you want to write? Looking at the order before and after, it's very strange. There is an inexplicable feeling. Maybe your scene is not spread out, and the connection is not done well. Anyway, I looked a little baffled. (Personal opinion only)

Writing very organized things in a messy way is also a kind of ability! The lack of a systematic introduction to the practice system is on the one hand. The author wanted to write something more thorough but did not have the writing power, so he made it nondescript. The detailed description of each plot did not reflect the characteristics of the characters, and the progress of the plot and the description of the details were out of order. This made the reader look very disordered, a bit like a person thinking about all this in a daze, making people feel that they can't remember what they wrote after reading this book!

You don't even have to eat, but you still practice boxing. Haha, aren't you afraid of dying in the practice?

Help me

The plot is good, but a bit confusing

Three monthly tickets, two recommendation tickets, here you go, come on brother

Come here, everyone!

I want to read Rivers of Blood. This is a proper light novel with no passion at all.

This subject matter is too complicated, and the person next door is also a newcomer, and the writing style is similar. It is classified into urban light novels, but the results are good.

What are you writing about?

The writing is good, but important storylines are always missing, making it difficult to read.

So you also watch mygo (

The whole story is very loosely written, with very little description of the protagonist himself, and only descriptions of the people and things around him. But sometimes I don't know what the author is writing There is almost no sense of immersion

The author has great ideas and the setting is not bad, but the writing is a bit messy, especially the plot. It is best not to write so many twists and turns of the plot. The main reason is that you can't grasp it and it makes it very confusing to read.

What the hell is the last chapter? Want to cut the book?