My Body Refreshes Every Day

Why does it feel like watching a Douyin short drama? One side is pretending to be awesome, and the other side keeps pretending to be stupid and can't see that others are awesome, all kinds of brain-filling

Not only do you feel unhappy when you write fantasy novels, but you also write about this little sister who is alienating readers. It's so painful to watch

It's a classic old routine. I was discriminated against along the way and then slapped in the face by pretending to be cool. I asked if I could kill the Li family when it was released.

It's so embarrassing. It's like the son-in-law of the Urban Dragon King's family many years ago. He didn't say how awesome he was outside. He was scolded by his family all the time. It felt like everyone fawned over him outside and he was scolded as a loser when he came home. And then you didn't say anything about it. His sister was the equivalent of the son-in-law. The protagonist did nothing outside and didn't say anything. Then he came back late and had something to do. Then he was scolded bloody. I also saw his comments saying that the whole text was there. I couldn't stand it anymore, so he left after a few curses. If you want the main line to be deleted, then you can rewrite the main line instead of just pretending to be cool.

Zero hour mystery brings back long-lasting memories for me

Give it up, buddy, go read the novels on Rotten Tomatoes. Most of them are better written than yours. They have nothing but pretentiousness and slap in the face, and there is no logic at all to make people understand.

This slap in the face is a bit harsh, and the character of the protagonist is a bit loner and a bit unlikable. In the first picture, he apologizes. If there is force, use force to suppress it. You have not even understood the society and you have started to have no scruples. It's a bit deliberately forced to show off and slap in the face, and there's no audience.

Look, Pig's Knuckle is a waste. He is obviously powerful, but he relies on others' charity to improve his status. He is a waste. I guess it was written by xxn, otherwise this kind of brain circuit would not be the same as some NC novels.

After reading Chapter 15, I felt a little confused. I came to see if there was any Shen Nong in the comment section. However, I was very disappointed. Let me tell you my feelings first. First of all, it seems very naive, but this is not a shortcoming. So what is the shortcoming? First of all, a teacher cannot teach his students how to kill themselves, even in a joking tone, in school. Secondly, it is an inexplicable state. Because the protagonist is innate, he has come into contact with this level of power? No, is it too outrageous to think about how to contact him one second, and then find it the next? Forget it, why do you still act like it's natural? I have been bragging, how talented I am, how talented I am? Say it! Write! Fight! ! ! Can you resist sniper bullets with your eyelids, or can you demolish a wall with your bare hands? I don't feel that awesome, why are you bragging? What's the dog's name? ? ? ? ! ! ! And when you come into contact with a warrior or something, why does it feel like you have found a little brother for yourself? Since we know that the protagonist transforms from an ordinary person to an innate in just a few days, with no power, power or background, why should he go against other forces for such an ordinary person? ? ? Shouldn't the normal thing be to arrest him and interrogate him? And when it comes to ways to torture the protagonist, the one who comes to your mind is to have his hair whipped into a pigtail? It's not even as good as a fight in TM kindergarten. If you have to go to work, why don't you take the time to go to the kindergarten and just sit by the wall and watch how other people fight? Is that okay? ? ? The last and most important point is that this kind of complaint is not based on your settings. In other words, it can be completely avoided. Why are you poisoning it? I can't even think about what happened next. Even if I'm not pretending, I'm not happy either. My blood pressure is about to drop. When I saw the comments, I started to wonder why so many people are complaining? It's not uncommon to find girls who defy the will of God in online articles. Until I read it myself, I couldn't stand it any more. I wish the author good luck when he goes out.

You, the male protagonist, do you leak poop when you walk?

One word: so poisonous. Both mentally retarded and holy mother. If you don't pounce on this book, you will swallow it live live! 😡

This novel is very frustrating. If you can stand the frustration, just read it. If you can't, don't read on. It's quite uncomfortable.

Rubbish article, frustrating to death, not recommended

I felt nauseated, vomited, and had a headache when I watched the smashing and dancing routine! Born with pure dirty eyes

It feels like the protagonist is too stupid, becoming an innate warrior, and then hiding it just to be ridiculed by others? Just to cause trouble for others? That's not how you should be considered a weakling. . Such a weak pretentious slap in the face is not satisfying at all. I only saw countless troubles coming to the protagonist, and then the protagonist disliked the troubles, but at the same time did not want to solve it once and for all, and just wanted to deal with the trouble once it came out. . . Because the protagonist is innate, the troubles are all the troubles of ordinary people, troubles that even an ordinary warrior will not encounter. . . To give an example in the book, an innate warrior (equivalent to the most powerful person in the text) went to school, and was asked by the class teacher to make him stand. Then the protagonist went to make him stand, thinking how dare you treat the innate warrior like this, and wait until night to kill your whole family. . . I can't stand it anymore

Haha

After seeing a few pictures, Shennong couldn't stand it.

This author is really unbelievable, and his thinking and logic are awesome. His three views have refreshed the standards of modern online literature. He has an unbelievable sister, an unbelievable protagonist, an unbelievable passerby, an unbelievable villain, and an unbelievable supporting role. They are all so unbelievable that I almost want to laugh.

The author has time to test his intelligence. If you have low intelligence, don't show up.

Goldfinger is good, the plot is hard to describe in one sentence, so I say goodbye. What a pity

The author wrote the main character so brainlessly! The protagonist is already a genius and yet he goes to take classes of ordinary students! And go to some junk parties! I suspect that the author is deliberately writing a story about pretending to be a slap in the face! There are tens of millions! Find a store and open it! Goof around during the day and practice at night! Or you can find some moves to practice during the day and practice them at night! I have to take some regular high school classes!

The novel world has gone backwards for 20 years, and you haven't had the time to make your mark.

What the hell is this? It's so disgusting.

I really miss it. I haven't seen this kind of routine writing in a long time. It's really disappointing that no one discusses it. Don't mind the author.

You have to have a certain level of pretense. A plot is four or five chapters in and it hasn't started yet. Are you really just prepping or just preparing?

This article is about urban martial arts. There is really no need to say the opinion "I hate pretending to be slapped in the face". If you don't like pretending to be slapped in the face, why are you in the fantasy area? . .

What are you writing about? I suggest you read what other authors have written before writing a book, okay?

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It's been 24 years and there are still people who write pretending to slap people in the face

What the hell did you write? You ruined the subject matter.