The Infinite Flow Evolution of Mortals

How should I put it, I came here after seeing the advertisement in the book Fujounin. The writing and plot are a bit polished and immature. These are common problems for newcomers, and should be improved with more writing. The psychological description of Pig's Knuckle is really embarrassing, especially for people who have not read the original work, it is even more embarrassing and difficult to accept. Infinite Streaming cannot write many original plots, but it cannot write none at all. Few people will make up for all the original works they have not read just by reading a novel. Since you have borrowed the creativity of that book, you can also learn from the book's allocation of pen and ink in the original work. At least you cannot let people who have not read it be confused after reading the novel.

The author writes so well that this book has platinum status. This post costs 5 cents, remember to delete the brackets.

Basically, you can adopt a few even if your secondary skills are outrageous, but don't go too far. You also need the character's core ability effects and sources, otherwise it will increase my workload and lead to rejection. Thank you in advance for your dedication.

Bringing up a family is a bit of a drama. There is a reason why Qidian Master starts the game with orphans. This kind of non-mundane daily writing about parents often drags out the plot and is basically not handled well. Even those who write about parents are basically NPC tool people.

It's good, it's good, especially the suffix and suffix settings. I really like it, but it's really hard to bear with my family.

Very good book, makes me spin around Binzhou😎

Has the author's fantasyland strategy group been banned as well?

I have been saving it for three months. Come and take a look.

It's pretty good-looking. Why did I think it wasn't good-looking? No monthly pass

5-Year-old Shennong reminds me that there are similar things in the past