1983 Hunting Ziwu Ridge

The protagonist has no sparkle at all, and the family relationship is in conflict. The worst part will be given to you when the family is separated, but you still smile and forget the grudges. It doesn't matter whether you suffer or not, but the suffering of your wife and children is the most important. The meaning of rebirth is not how big a factory you open, how much money you make, happiness and happiness are the most important. Without money, your son will have to receive a substandard education. In the future, he will not even be able to afford a house. Only then will you realize that money is the most important thing after rebirth. You don't have to show off your wealth, but you can't have no money. Also, those who are related by blood may not necessarily be related by family, and those who are related by family may not be related by blood. You are just following the hunting article blindly, but you haven't even designed the basic storyline. You are just creating conflicts, but the conflicts do not advance the plot.

A harvester wrote 30 chapters! Who gave you the courage to start with such a lousy start? More than 60 people went to the toilet. He was disgusted at first and then fell down. Then he was stripped naked by his wife and still stood still in embarrassment? You traveled through time when you were 6 years old, right? Lived on a dog? Can such a childish person travel through time?

The new book is about to start. The author has an independent perspective. I don't know whether the writing is good or bad. Everyone is welcome to leave comments. Basically, I will reply to every comment. The author is older and talks a lot. As long as there are comments, I will reply.

I've read Chapter 30 and I'm really convinced. It's too ink. I read the comments specifically and found that they were all scolding you, so I felt relieved.

Apart from the title having a Northwest flavor, there is nothing else about it. Your three brothers are so good, so why were you the worst when the family was separated? Brother, good brother, don't say anything? It doesn't matter to you if your parents can't even give you a bowl of water, which is the worst? The parents are not good and the son is still garbage, so the wife and son are so hungry that they are skin and bones! The conclusion is that except for the wife and son, the whole family is trash. The protagonist still thinks that his brother and parents are good people!

I have no idea what I'm writing about. A 68-year-old man is reborn and goes back to bask in the sun while others are fine. He is flooded by the rain. He wants to buy a bicycle as many rabbits as possible. . . . It's still selling for more than 100 cents. What's the concept? Even if a pig weighs more than 100 kilograms, it doesn't necessarily sell for more than 100 cents. In 1983, pork could be sold for 60 to 70 cents, which was considered too much. What are you thinking about?

Chapter 42 is still recalling the past. My son and my wife accounted for more than half of the wheat harvest. My family didn't respond to the hare and pheasant I got. Also, can't you write it well? Why do you have to use dialect?🙂🙂

I would like to ask everyone, is what I wrote succinct? In order to write in detail, some places may be a bit too talkative, is that right? If you have any questions, please leave a message for guidance. The author Jun Chu only wants to write this book well and try his best to tell you the story of the 1980s in his own language.

No, it must be the beginning. Why would you be sorry to your wife, baby, and family? My scalp feels numb just looking at it.

It's so wordy, I've read dozens of chapters and still haven't officially gone hunting. So why did you choose this name? The author is awesome!

When I saw the hare costing three yuan a pound, I didn't want to look at it. It was too outrageous. In the 1980s, bear meat didn't even cost three yuan a pound. Who would eat rabbit meat if it didn't have oil and water? It's not like buying bear meat. At that time, pork only cost a few cents per pound, and rabbit meat cost 3 yuan per pound? In the 1980s, wild food was not as delicious as domesticated food because there was no oil and water. In the 1990s, wild food was more delicious than domesticated food.

There are so many dialects that I can't stand it anymore

After reading three chapters, I decisively gave up. What the hell was written, even rubbish is exalted.

I have seen Chapter 181 and read all the comments. To be fair, the author's writing style is simple and worthy of praise. The dialect problem does not affect the reading experience. I guess I can understand what it means. After all, this kind of writing style needs the support of dialects and unique local customs. Of course, it would be best if the author added comments after some unique local nouns. After reading this point, I still have some doubts that I hope the author can answer: 1. Why does it take nearly 20 chapters to write about the funeral of Zhao Yanglai's father, and it is a plot that has almost nothing to do with the main plot. This is my biggest doubt when reading the book. 2. Why do family members and relatives call each other by their full names? Is it a custom unique to your place? In our area, even people with the same room and surname will not be called by their full names, but only the first name without the surname. This will appear to be a close relationship. Calling the full name only exists when you are angry, indicating that the relationship is about to break down. 3. Zhao Yajun's relationship with his original family is rather blunt and strange. He has been away from home for so many days, and his parents don't care or hold him accountable. His grandfather doesn't interfere, and the protagonist doesn't even say a word to his brother and sister-in-law. It seems very abnormal. I have never seen extended family relationships handled this way. There has to be some explanation as to whether it is adoption or employment. 4. Nearly 600,000 words have been written in the book. Overall, I feel that the characters in the book, especially the male characters including the protagonist, are rather useless and not refreshing. The main reason is still the protagonist, who lacks the temperament of a manager but has to lead a team. Or, arrange for the protagonist to fight alone, ask for help when encountering problems, and live a good life as a small family. If you must lead a team, you must give the protagonist a managerial temperament. People like Zhao Jingping who destroy the team must be removed from the team as soon as possible, otherwise the team will break up and it will be difficult to lead. Overall, it is good, but there are some flaws. I hope the author will make improvements and not give up halfway.

Others rely on skills and experience for hunting, but you rely on sharp guns. Are there gods in the guns? Nervously slipped away

This way of writing stream of consciousness gives me a headache

Yes, some of the content is totally wrong. Secondly, I just want to ask what dialect this is from? Are only those who live in the same place as you worthy of reading this book? Have you ever considered whether readers from other regions can understand it? I've seen other novels where the author knows how to annotate the meaning of the dialect no matter how lazy he is.

The further you go, the more disgusting it gets. It's hard to read and the writing is lousy. Starting from Chapter 170, it has been related to other characters. I think it is the protagonist, not the supporting characters. Your protagonist has not married yet, why are you running to care about Zhao Yang's marriage? Water for water's sake.

Chapter 13 is still 4 pheasants, I'm already drunk, forget it

It has been added to the collection. It has great ideas and the author's writing is very good. This book title makes people want to click on it. I visited with my work "The Witcher Begins in America". Thank you!

There were no 50-yuan or 100-yuan bills issued in 1983. The author's writing is simple but not rigorous.