I Can Extract LOL Entries

Does the author know that the heart of infinite firepower has recently burned Galen? It's like swimming in the five-person spring opposite. I wrote it based on that sense of déjà vu. I think the protagonist can go out to fight in the wild and swim with dragons after stacking a wave of resistance and armor-piercing attack power.

Chapter 18, maybe it's not an orphan start. No matter how you look at it, it's a twist, especially when two alien beasts escape from the martial arts hall, and the brothers are holding back. The protagonist is timid at first and then gets up, and the captain who chases the alien beasts is the protagonist's parents. Weird from beginning to end

How to say it? I had a hard time reading the writing of your novel. He has a very strange smell. I can't really put it into words, but I just feel that the writing of your book is very wrong and not intuitive enough.

Feel like there are two schools now? 1. The instant kill style of deliberately stacking health points and deliberately punching? 2. There is another one that book friends mentioned, Fentian's Heart is Strong and Endless Hate, which has been very popular recently? It seems that everything can be written, but it depends on how the author handles it.

I feel a little bit refreshed after reading Chapter 32. The protagonist looks like a stupid boy who loses everything in the world.

You can watch it, but I don't understand how games can survive in this unstable society.

1. If possible, you can write less about playing games. After all, the focus is on watching extraordinary battles 2. You can't play games to get gold coins later, right?

Very retro writing style

LOL game writing disguised as apocalyptic writing?

1. Speed ​​setting problem: The previous setting was not comprehensive and it was a bit difficult to select data. Because speed is the only data we can perceive, it is difficult to design later, so it is deleted. Some comments may have been lost, so I apologize. 2. Later, some magic modifications and implementation of toughness, cooling reduction, etc. Will be carried out according to the situation. We welcome all readers to leave comments ୧(๑•̀⌄•́๑)૭

The body has carried power far beyond its own many times, and it can still be at the second level! A little too outrageous!

Deliberately suppressing the level makes people uncomfortable. Rats cannot be used to stack steel infinitely. A great point will be gone in an instant.

Really well written. I just like watching people fight in fantasy novels lol

Everything else is fine, and the writing is smooth, except that the protagonist is a second-level character who keeps fighting against a tenth-level character, and after the fight, he is still a second-level character 🙂

I've read Chapter 30, and I feel like there's too much nonsense, which affects reading.

I don't understand what you want to write recently. Don't you have an editor?

From the beginning, the level of playing the game is indeed low. If the ancient war academy mode is used, the character consciousness replaces the setting of the hero participating in the war to obtain relevant entries, which may be more attractive. I was playing games earlier...

1. Why play games? As an ordinary person, in the early stage, you can only rely on the game to complete the original entries. Later, the proportion of extraordinary will definitely increase. In the early stage, only a small part is needed to advance the plot. 2. There are a lot of equipment, talents, and hero skills that can be written about. You are welcome to leave a message with good ideas (provided that I can see it!) 3. The pace is not fast in the first tens of thousands of words, and some things must be explained clearly, and it will definitely become more fun later. 4. I hope that everyone can discuss rationally and do not make malicious comments or attacks. The author will read the rational suggestions, change them if they are not, and encourage them. I hope to make progress together with you. 5. Please vote for me and read more!

It reminds me of Jiuzi's first book and a very popular LOL virtual reality novel.

? ? ? ? Is this a game or a fantasy power? Just mix them together and forget about it.

I don't think it's suitable for me. I want to ask what's not suitable for me. I feel like it's slow to advance the main plot. The other parts are also written in too detail. Even if you look at it, you can write a lot of words. This is something I didn't expect. I know that this can reduce the number of words, and I also understand the author. That's it.

I'm confused, is it a game or a superpower?

No, I just take a test and the book is finished? ? ? ? 🤔

More than 200 photos and 45 fans are really miserable 🙂