The Magnetic Field Strongman Who Started from Douluo

I'm here to see Mr. Dian, not your ignorant college life.

It's not something as ignorant as going to school at Shrek, right?

It's purely for self-interest. It's on the shelves. The main character makes a fool of himself after eating, the main character's mother-in-law is autistic, and all kinds of "I'm not worthy". 500,000 Horses can barely beat 250,000 horses and Tang San can't even break his arm.

Wow, cousin Junlang is so handsome! Because Junlang and Zhenghai are twin brothers, they can also be handsome photos of Zhenghai 😍 (infringement and deletion) First is the happy little Haihu period Then is the Haihu Er black-face blasting fist launcher period

A sea tiger is a sea tiger, and a swimmer is a swimmer. If the sea tiger cures autism, your protagonist will also need to cure autism?

I really don't know the so-called plot. The previous protagonists were frustrated and embarrassed. After recovering their strength, they did not go to Shrek or the God Realm for the first time. Instead, they walked slowly across the continent. When I met the heroine, I felt that I was dragging the heroine down and that I was not worthy of it, so I didn't dare to meet the heroine. Is your protagonist the same thing as the protagonist in your extra story? I'm not happy where I should be happy, and I keep drawing pictures of the places I shouldn't be happy about. Can I write it well?

I am Shennong. I can't do it from behind. Let's go. Children, run away!

A hearty Akaishi ah

This is? ? ? Shit! ! ! ! ! !

1. Modern Chinese grammar is different from Hong Kong comic grammar. The grammar of Hong Kong comics is derived from the semi-literary and semi-white vernacular. Its writing is similar to Lu Xun, which is short, concise, and powerful. The author mixes in too many modern Chinese habits, which makes it useless. 2. The plot tension is similar to Chapter 200 of God of War. It's obviously very interesting stuff, but the author makes it a bit bland. I recommend watching "Fist of Fire" to learn how to handle the character's emotional outbursts. 3. Five hundred thousand horses knocked down Oga once. Everyone here knows that Oga was tricked, but the author cannot tell the trick, which makes it very boring. In "JoJo Eyes of Heaven", it is also written that Dio died in a steamroller twice, but it was not obtrusive and worth learning. I wish the author to write better and better.

After reading more than 40 chapters, the protagonist has very little role, while the original protagonist Huo Yuhao takes up a lot of space. Then why do you need to add Bai Zhenghai? You can just use Huo Yuhao to write an article. Ma Xiaotao couldn't understand that, so the protagonist assigned the solution to Huo Yuhao, and later added a patch saying that Huo Yuhao's martial spirit could solve it. What is the purpose of this plot development? Are you going to open a harem for Huo Yuhao?

How should I put it? First of all, the most serious point is that you arranged all the parts where the protagonist is defeated on the shelves. I have scolded you for this and there is nothing to say. But after your protagonist came out of seclusion, you did a lot of unknown operations to restore the character traits of the Bai family. Yes, I can understand that your writing is right and reasonable, but can you take out your brain that used too much on the rationality of the setting, think about it, and guess what impact this plot connection will have on the perception? Do you think I would enjoy watching the protagonist slaughter the sun and the moon after coming out of seclusion? I just feel that you have been suppressing it for so long, and then you show up and complain while walking and slaughtering. I don't know what to say. If you put this plot elsewhere, I can still praise you for the rigorous setting of details. If you put it here, I can only worry about whether you are suffering from the youth disease again.

At first I thought the protagonist was going to kill Douluo's gangster (it turned out he was playing house with the slimes)

I am a naturally strong person and let the floor tiles repeatedly mess me up. How could I have such a dream?

Writing about Naruto will only quickly enrich your few readers.

Yes, you are a Japanese w, but as far as your plot promotion is concerned, the whole thing was just put on the shelves, and almost after it was put on the shelves, it was all amazing operations. You can write whatever you want about the return of the God of War, but then don't put this unknown plot on the shelves. It is better to say that you are a Japanese w, otherwise the impression will be even worse.

The more novels I read, the less and less interesting the combination of concave and convex becomes. Only the sparks produced by the friction between guns can make my heart surge.

Still too gentle, wouldn't it be nice to have a character like Bai Junlang in Sea Tiger 2? He's ruthless and doesn't talk much, which is in line with the male lead's experience. He's also damn handsome with his dark face. As an elder parent, I also have a reference