Creating the Multiverse Starting with Nier

Overall it's good, I just wish the scenes with the live audience would be deleted. If you are not sure about these live broadcast routines, old-time mentally retarded villains, etc., It will be as disgusting as suddenly stepping on a lump of flying while walking on the road.

Indeed, a good subject matter is paired with a backward and clichéd live stream, and a lot of passers-by ridicule it, which is speechless. This is too imbecile! Who in the right mind would do this? Just like when you see someone messing around during a game, who would laugh at him? Most of them just don't see it. Everyone's time is so precious, who would care about an irrelevant person. Not to mention live streaming.

The subject matter is pretty good, but the whole fucking exam is live broadcast. Too old-fashioned,

Ah, is this how you created the world? Find a class, I'm pretty good at driving screws.

What a waste of time. Such a good introduction, I am ready to add comments on the bookshelf, live broadcast? , Isn't it already 2024, dreaming back to 10 years ago?

You just turned such a good subject into a slap-in-the-face article, and it's just unacceptable.

Reduce the proportion of real-life disgusting people in the plot

That real world is so embarrassing!

A very formulaic slap in the face article. Continuously describe the supporting characters and the audience's exclamations. Mix in a little bit of the protagonist's content and it's over in one picture.

The three golden chapters in the author's book are the three extremely poisonous chapters. There are so many poisonous spots that I can bear to look at other poisonous spots, but the sister was instantly poisoned as soon as she came out. I don't know if it's very poisonous to write about younger sisters now. According to the author's writing skills, the plot of this younger sister is definitely one of the most poisonous in this book. I'm sure this book will go to the palace. My comment will probably be deleted within a few days!

I didn't dare read it after reading the comments. Can anyone recommend a non-toxic novel of this type? Can it be done?

The subject matter is very good, but the writing is a piece of shit.

The subject matter is good, but the content is messy. I can only say that it was a dream ten years ago, but the writing was still very rubbish. It can be seen that the author wants to stir up the readers' emotions, but the method is too old, and a bunch of passers-by make comments that are very theatrical, and the passers-by seem to have no IQ. They all talk like 13-4-year-old children, childish and ignorant. The extraordinary person in it is also outrageous, like a giant baby who has not grown up, living in his own world. In general, it is like shit wrapped in chocolate💩.

Look at the introduction. Isn't this the whole Azur Lane Spaceship Girl thing?

The trickery of the Kingdom of God After completing the creative plot, it fell into the slap-in-the-face cliché of urban drama

The level of technology in reality is ridiculously low and completely inconsistent with the level of technology in this setting.

Passers-by's commentary accounts for half of the plot, and it's not easy for the author either.