The Sun and the Moon Make the Same Mistake Without Intention

The first drawback is that Ma Chao teaches the protagonist a minor magical power: Ma Chao himself is only an entry-level person. When the Three True Methods were destroyed, Ma Chao didn't learn anything. According to Haishan Liao, Ma Chao skipped the basics and directly asked his disciples to learn the Talisman Body, which shows that Ma Chao himself has little foundation (Ma Chao is a good master and has made great contributions to the continuation of the Three True Methods, but his skills are really not good), so that Haoguang and Ma Chao have been learning for so many years. There is no entry-level one (Note: Haoguang's qualifications are the strongest in the millennium since Jiang Mingzi). Even if the protagonist has higher qualifications than Haoguang, but without a golden finger, he can only be stuck at the entry-level level; Slot 2, the protagonist is not He is the initiator of the Three Truths of the Same Moon Order, but he can see the projection of the Order of the Same Moon: The condition for being selected by the Three Truths of the Same Moon Order is to have the talent to awaken the "Law of Cause and Effect" natal magical power, and the activation condition is "to have a hatred of the Nirvana Corpse". The protagonist does not meet the opening conditions of the Three Trues and the Same Moon Order, and it is impossible to see the projection of the Three Trues and the Same Moon Order. Moreover, the Three Trues and the Same Moon Order chooses one person in each of the three eras. If the protagonist is selected, it will not choose Haoguang again. The third point is that the author's basic setting is not up to par: First of all, there are many noun errors. There is no "Tao Dharma" in Sun and Moon Tong Cuo, only "supernatural power", and all practitioners are collectively called "Dharma seekers". Secondly, people only have one soul, and they can only practice one type of magical power. For example, the "Three Truths Borrowing Treasures" of the Three Truths. Haoguang once tried to practice the "Returning Blood Body", but even he, who has the strongest talent in magic spells in history, can only cultivate a bunch of useless "Returning Blood Body". (Although these useless talismans did play an important role at critical moments, they were always useless talismans that were difficult to use). Many of the author's original moves had nothing to do with the Three True Treasures Borrowing Technique. Especially since the Three True Truths during the Ma Dynasty had declined so much, how could there be so many powerful magical powers? Fruit four, and the biggest flaw, ignores the setting of cause and effect: The original story system of Sun and Moon Tongcuo is inherently difficult to write a fan novel, because any changes to the plot will be punished by the "law of cause and effect." The more changes are made, the harsher the punishment. It stands to reason that the protagonist without a golden finger should be punished as soon as he appears. In addition, the natal magical power shows different magical powers and appearance according to the character of the seeker, the environment he is in, and his understanding of all things. In other words, you cannot awaken your natal magical power without experiencing enough things, and the things you experience will also determine what your natal magical power is like. For example, Haoguang's natal magical power "Fake World and True World Pre-taken Body" was formed by the unwillingness and anger after experiencing the Black Mountain Village and Sanchuan incidents. If you change it like this, then "Fake World and True World" "Pre-retrieval" will no longer appear, and after the intervention of the protagonist, Haoguang no longer has a "Huitian Blood Body". Without the "Huitian Blood Body", even if Haoguang can escape the plot of having his heart destroyed by Pan Nanjun, Duan Xinglian in the modern line will definitely die (Duan Xinglian's organ failure is congenital, and he will die without a Huitian Blood Body!). Moreover, without experiencing these two things, Haoguang would not have made up his mind to find "a rope" to connect the seekers with mortals, thus becoming the "Wu Dao Dharma Demon King". Without the "Wu Dao Ji Dharma Demon Lord" who shared the luck of the seekers with mortals in the two battles of cause and effect, human society in 2025 would not be able to develop to the current level, and would probably continue to maintain the level of the old society. These may seem to be just "difficult to reconcile", but they will develop into extreme cause and effect events that affect the history of the world for a hundred years (the Wanye Corpse Immortal loves the protagonist to death. The more chaotic the law of cause and effect, the weaker the world's restraint on the Wanye Corpse Immortal). It is not too much to increase the punishment of the protagonist by the law of cause and effect thousands of times. Although there are many ways to avoid the punishment of the Law of Cause and Effect, for example, when Zhuo Zhao was resurrected, he relied on "No-Self Dharma" to evade the surveillance of the Law of Cause and Effect, and Haoguang also hid in the false world of "Pre-taking the Body in the False World and the True World" to avoid the surveillance of the Law of Cause and Effect. However, these are the magical powers of the law of cause and effect at the level of great supernatural powers, and they are not ordinary great supernatural powers. Duan Xinglian, who also has the magical power of the law of cause and effect, can only hide in the "Dream of All Karma" to prevent the punishment of the law of cause and effect from hitting him accurately when he is in the level of magical power. Bailiyuan, Pan Nanjun, and Zhuo Zhao, who are the "Dharma Corpses with Great Divine Powers of the Law of Cause and Effect", were all killed by the punishment of the Law of Cause and Effect in the end. You must know that the Dharma Bodies of the Dharma Corpse are much stronger than the Dharma Seekers of the same level, and they can kill Baili Yuan and the others. The punishment of the law of cause and effect can naturally kill the masters of the law of cause and effect. The protagonist only has magical powers. He neither hides in the dream of all karma nor has a golden finger. How can he resist the punishment of the law of cause and effect, which can kill the master of the law of cause and effect? The story frame of the sun and the moon making the same mistakes is really not suitable for writing fan fiction, especially without a golden finger. The three lines of the sun and the moon influence each other, are interlocked, and are determined by the law of cause and effect. If you change anything, it may cause major causal changes. Actions, such as the plots of Heishan Village and Sanchuan, are indeed difficult to calm down, but without experiencing these, Haoguang will not be able to awaken his natal magical powers and will not be able to truly grow. The modern star refining line will also become a mess, and it is even uncertain whether modern times will still be modern.

It's hard to write Sun and Moon Same Wrong. It's okay to have two timelines for Gao and Jiang. One is present continuous tense and the other is past tense. As for paragraphs, how do you write future paragraphs according to the setting and the correction of causality and fate?

After all, the content of this comic is too high, and things like supernatural powers are a bit difficult to understand.

You are the first person I have ever seen who dared to write a fanfic about Sun and Moon. I didn't read Sun and Moon: Same Wrong from Chapter 1, but just after reading some of the popular clips, I understood that this comic is not suitable for writing fanfics, at least not for targeted fanfics. It's okay to travel to the past and gain a power system and leave directly, but if you want to change the original plot, it would really be a big sin.

Damn it, there are fan fictions about the same mistakes of the sun and the moon, come on, author

Author, why don't you try writing a Douluo fanfic called "Golden Finger" and "The Sun and the Moon Make the Same Fault"? I really want to read it.

It's difficult to write a fanfic about Sun and Moon. I think it's more suitable for a copy of Duke's clone style or the unlimited flow of all heavens. It can also be used as a cheat for character cards and role-playing.

Cause and effect cannot be changed. Then won't the time traveler be stunned as soon as he enters? There is no chance of death 🙂

I finished watching Sun and Moon Together today and found out that the order is Duan Xinglian Jiang Mingzi Gao Haoguang

Eternal Immortal Lord of Ten Thousand Dharmas

The comics are so good and detailed that there is little room for creativity. The imagination is not big enough and the writing is not good enough, so it is better not to touch it.

The first time I watched it, I was moved by the love between Zhao Yan and Shangguan Xiao. If I really want them to have a good ending

I'm sorry everyone, I haven't updated in the past few days. That's because writing novels is a side job. The store has been a little busy these days because of the Spring Festival, so I feel like going to bed when I get home. I can't update in time. I should be able to return to normal in the future.

Come on, if you reach 137,000, you will be the Sun and Moon fanfic that has written the most.

My evaluation is that the writing is too hasty and the pace is too fast. Of the hundreds of chapters in the comic, you can probably finish it in a hundred chapters. The rest of the plot can only be imagined and imagined. Also, although it is a fan novel, it must be understood by newcomers. Those who have not read the comic will probably feel that the plot has a strong sense of fragmentation. Without Zhao Yan's Sanchuan spell, how Hao Guang appears later depends on how the protagonist performs.

It's really too fast. When we travel to Jiang Mingzi's time, it's very disconnected from the plot. The Huangliang part is also very disconnected. It feels very rushed and urgent.

There is a person who lives next door, and I have finished writing the story "The Same Mistakes of the Sun and the Moon". Author, you have to work hard~ and don't give up.

I just want to know if anyone is taking the path of Dharma Corpse or Wanye Zombie Immortal. After all, it is really powerful. Its setting is that in the past, present, and future, anyone who can live will be immortal, and a steady stream of Dharma Corpses will be resurrected.