I Don't Want to Fall in Love If My House Is Ruined

It's quite interesting. Although the career steps are still the same as most entertainment routines, the interaction between the characters has its own characteristics and it doesn't seem so cliché! Keep! (The female protagonist's affection for the male protagonist can be reflected in other descriptions. Don't blush all the time. It's too demeaning.)

The introduction doesn't even talk about love dogs, but then the main text starts to have a relationship drama? So what is written in your profile is fart?

It's not a romance novel, it's a variety show novel. When two people are about to confess their love, a male lead will appear. Or the second male lead who proposed hundreds of times. In order to pursue the female lead, the second male actor invested in the program and continued to do variety shows. . .

I've been feeling a bit depressed lately and want to read novels alone. You all should delete the starting point.

Our brother Zimmer is really a congenital idol.

I'll look for a few more

I heard that the more likes and comments you post, the more likely the author will fail. I'll give it a try.

How can I put it this way? I have no motivation to read this book until I reach chapter 110... Every time I click on it and read a few lines, I don't want to read it again~ First, the male protagonist is too showy. The previous few opportunities for the male protagonist to show his strength ended up being suppressed by the author. As for the share of writing scripts, I have never seen the share of pig's feet in several books be so low (don't say that's the reality, I'm reading novels, not reality). The male protagonist's share should be increased, the debt should be paid off as soon as possible, and then a studio or something should be established, instead of always relying on pig's feet to grow. Second, the male protagonist is too much of a mother-in-law and has too many psychological activities. He is preoccupied with this and that, and does not have any of the qualities necessary for a good male protagonist. I didn't care about myself before, but ended up writing songs for others... I also helped the agent sign celebrities, so I helped, but the pig's feet were like a nanny... Thirdly, the heroine is a rich woman. This setting is okay, but the heroine was written as pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger (not letting the hero know that the company belongs to the heroine), and the pig's feet are the tiger... This writing is very problematic, and the perspective that readers take in is the perspective of the male protagonist, not the female protagonist! The readers know that the company belongs to the heroine, but the pig's feet don't know, which leads to a very fragmented sense of substitution. Fourth, the love story part of this book is very good, but after the love story ended, the male protagonist seemed to be in ruins, which led to less and less interest in reading. Author, you are writing a novel, not a group portrait. Things should revolve around the male protagonist, and write about how wonderful the male protagonist is, instead of the male protagonist writing songs for others, writing scripts for others, and then watching others pretend to be sexy. The correct plot should be for the female protagonist to act as the director, the male protagonist to be the director, and the actor to film and play the male protagonist, like this! Instead of writing a script for the male protagonist, and being limited by people, arranging a director has to ask others to repeatedly discuss whether this director can be added, and the male protagonist has to play a role, and the director's consent must be obtained... In the end, the plot is not interesting at all, and it is completely impossible to follow the story! ps: Don't believe those who keep saying that the plot does not conform to the logic of reality. Reality is much more magical than novels! Moreover, none of the novels that conform to the logic of reality in their perception have become popular or have ever become popular! Moreover, there have been authors who have written content that is very consistent with realistic logic, but the content they write, even those who shout that it should be consistent with realistic logic, do not want to read it themselves.... So, a novel must first serve the purpose of being happy, then the plot should be smooth, and then the author's writing style is required! However, this one that conforms to realistic logic can only be used as an icing on the scene if the previous conditions are met! If there were so many people pursuing realistic logic, it would not be possible for Xiaobai to keep quiet for so many years~

，，，，，80%， Has the author never talked about it, or is it all based on imagination, speech, expression, and inner activities? You are very verbose. In fact, your writing style is good. Readers can see what you want to write, but I feel that I am afraid that readers will not understand it.         ，，，，，，，，，，，，She is not yours. Why, you have already expressed your feelings. You still want to sign a contract with your partner to get a share. Now the protagonist is the heroine's ornament. And there is a big loophole in your book. The debt is 40 million, which will definitely be enforced. Moreover, the original company did not let the original owner go. The money earned cannot reach the protagonist at all, and it seems that no one has given the money to. You might as well say that the protagonist needs 40 million to terminate the contract. When the money is paid back, the protagonist leaves the company to open his own studio or company, which is in urgent need of money. This Wouldn't it be better if the heroine contributed money to become a shareholder? That's what I meant, but this way it would appear that the protagonist has the initiative. At least he is not just a showpiece, and the follow-up writing will not be finished at a glance. It makes people want to stop watching. At least the director, singer, and variety show are all in his own hands. He has traveled through time and doesn't know how to be kind to himself. He only knows how to fall in love, which makes him look stupid. I feel like you don't have an outline. At least I can feel that you changed the main idea several times.

I'm just curious? What is a love story? Do you think many urban novels are romance novels?

Alas, it was so well written that it kept me up all night. Should I sleep now or read another chapter?

Nowadays, these children are drooling all day watching those mentally retarded variety shows.

Pulling too much makes me tired of looking at it

Is this the beginning of water? You can actually write 300,000 words about playing dice, write two games in one chapter, and you will have more than a dozen chapters in just one hour of playing. You can play it every day! If you go out for a week in total, you can write 100 chapters!

The emotional scenes are really written so well.

The writing is good, but there are a lot of typos. Send me the saved manuscript and I'll help you revise it. I'll start with a hundred chapters. There are too many and I'm afraid I won't be able to revise them.

After reading the introduction, it's a bit toxic. The time traveler uses someone else's body, which is too uncomfortable for readers like me who are resistant to poison.

Very well written, good luck to the author

It was so damn well written, so sweet that I squirmed in bed.

If you don't want to fall in love, why is there a female protagonist?

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I really wanted to read entertainment articles, but I couldn't find any that I liked. In the end, I only collected one. This one was based on the real entertainment industry. I feel that many authors write based on imagination, and I lose interest after reading them.

With the intention of learning, I selected this book among many entertainment books and finished it. To be honest, I was attracted by the beginning. It was the same cookie-cutter predicament, but with an added element of love. But it was the love element that attracted me. Different from the past "workaholics" and "plagiarism and pretentiousness" where career was the main line, this book is obviously based on the emotional line. To be honest, there are not many books of this type on this site that impress me! Coupled with my critical analysis of the beginning, I actually persisted in reading the first volume. Then I analyzed the advantages and disadvantages and felt it was necessary to read it to the end. As expected, the love line with a high sugar content completely overshadowed the career line. After quickly joining hands and living together, there was no need to write a love line. . It can only be completed in a hurry. This book is a good teaching material for newcomers (including the reverse side). It has a good beginning and interesting male and female characters. It also includes many negative cases. The author has gone through all the mistakes that newcomers can make, and finally summarized the problem himself.

Very good, come on, author, don't listen to them send it blindly, beep, follow your own pace. . .

Rt, what type do you want to see? You can mark it here. If it is suitable, I will adopt it. It doesn't matter if it is outrageous or not. Anyway, I should be able to modify it.