The God of Ten Thousand Mountains: Starting from the Candle Dragon

There is something wrong with writing! I saw wow, what a beautiful woman. This sentence is so disgusting.

Your subsequent killings are really careless. Anyone who offends you will be killed. Although the Lin family is quite hated, the traces of your growth are so eye-catching that no one suspects it. Personal evaluation: Dry food

I don't really like this kind of eunuch novel, even if it has a single female protagonist, this novel arranges some women around it just to highlight the protagonist's determination to become stronger, which I don't understand. If you have the ability to make your woman stronger throughout her life, why should you become that immortal monk?

In the later stage, it was a little bit too much, it was too ridiculous. I can't describe the feeling

Xiao is the father of the protagonist, and he sends things every day.

The writing in the front is quite good, but when I saw Rong Yu coming out of the cellar and the hero saving the beauty later, I felt that it was a little distorted and flawed.

EMMmmm How childish it is, even worse than a mortal cultivating immortality! It's just that martial arts not only requires several levels of root bones, but also the techniques. Not to mention combat skills, it also requires elixirs, which is even more bizarre. Not only does it cost money but it will last a lifetime and you may not be able to reach the top level. Are you serious? ?

And with your amazing magical powers, the court will treat you as a god. You are the master of the country. Who can catch you unless there are immortal cultivators?

Lin Zheng has a failed time-traveling background. At first glance, he seems to have nothing. Lin Zheng, you have to work hard for your childhood sweetheart, Sister Yu.

It's great to be able to live in two extreme environments, the noisy city and the silent forest.

The novel is very interesting and the storyline is well designed. Not bad.

The plot conflict is well written and the progress is well controlledヽ(⌐■㉨■)ノ♪♬Come on, I'm optimistic about you

What's going on? Are you not ready to write? It's actually quite well written.