People Are Devouring, a New Talent Every Month

The most worthless thing is time. Update once a month?

How many words does the author plan to write in this book? It shouldn't be difficult to write a million words once the rhythm of Swallowing Stars is adapted to it. If it's too short, it'll seem too fast-paced, but it won't make sense. Some fans of Swallowing the Stars are able to write longer than the original work. Author, I support you, just start with a million words.

Well, I feel that the sense of déjà vu is too serious. Just taking a quick glance at it makes me feel like I am reading the original work. It is too discouraging and too conventional. I really feel like Luo Feng's name has been replaced by the protagonist. It's really too discouraging.

How should I put it? When Luo Feng broke into the sixth tower, I felt very powerful. Bo Lan felt that he was very powerful at the time. As for the protagonist of this book breaking through the seventh tower, I just felt, ah? ? Why, why can this pass?

It's pretty good, but the progress is too fast. I think it's beyond the mark after more than 300 chapters. What to write next? Are you going to write about the continent of origin originally? Or are you going to other worlds in Tomato's works?

Is it disgusting to have a female protagonist suddenly pop up? A good cultivating madman suddenly became a pure love god of war and a real talent.

An infinite proto-nucleus space directly dissuades you. This is a fan work of data flow science fiction novels. Use data to speak and do not bring into the vague concept of fantasy flow. Even in the later stage, when the data is relatively large, it must have an approximate size. For example, in the original work, the size of the original universe is 1 billion light years, and the cosmic sea is unfathomable, but that is only for practitioners of true gods and below. For practitioners of the god king level, the cosmic sea also has different sizes. You can just go to infinity and you can have fun.

A son of thunder and lightning, and a son of time. With these two geniuses, you can pass the seventh floor. You are awesome. You are the smallest person I have ever failed. You are the most awesome person I have ever seen. How can you pass the level with just these two talented people?

I don't understand why the Devouring fans have to create a clone like the original novel. The reason for the Devouring period novels is that clones are very popular and can be considered interesting. But now that the clone has gradually become a poisonous point, why are they still used? The gene multiplication issue is too far-fetched. It is written by a fan, and there is a system hang-up. Just turn it on and it will be over.

Being accepted as a disciple by the Immortal, he developed a purple talent, and got a purple-level time and lightning darling; he cleared the genius battle and got a silver unlimited clone; then he became a disciple of the Lord of the Universe and got a gold-level evolvable gun talent? ? ? Talk about gun talent alone, apart from being useful in the early stage, what is its use in the later stage? Isn't it all about playing with the rules, divine body and will in the later stage? Then they say it can evolve. What kind of growth trap is this? You have unlimited talents, what other talents do you need to grow? It is the last word to realize talents in time and then use strength to refresh talents. The former sentence says that there is no bottleneck in the art of shooting, and the latter sentence says that there is no life and death experience. Originally, the time flow of Swallowing Starry Sky was fast, and it could be improved infinitely in time. The last sentence let me know that this talent is completely useless. I will definitely have to practice life and death in the future. Having this talent is the same as not having it. Anyway, the author wants you to break through at the last moment.

I saw the protagonist go to the universe sea and get the inheritance! This inheritance is too outrageous! The Lord of the Universe burst out with a top-level eighth-level attack! If Luo Feng hadn't broken the Donghe inheritance, would he have been able to unleash a level 7 attack? How many geniuses from the Origin Continent can unleash an 8th level attack without inheritance? How outrageous! Are you still just an outer disciple? Do you think you are the inheritance of Lord Hunyuan?

After reading dozens of chapters, I don't dare to read the rest. I'm afraid that another one will become invincible with the Divine Beast Way. He has already integrated it before he can do anything, and he hasn't acquired the relevant talents yet... The Divine Beast Way is basically a starting point, immortality, and the end point of the Lord of the Universe. There are always people who regard the Divine Beast Way as the path of fusion of laws. These two cannot be equated... Not to mention the Tao of Time and Space 99.9 % Of the sages are walking, and the Lord of the Universe is grabbing them. Except for the old beast god, the true gods are not trained in the time and space path. They all come from the time and space path. The time and space path is still part of the path of law fusion... The cosmic beings in the sitting mountain guest are basically the Lord of the Universe or the True God when they reach adulthood. In the Origin Continent, they are the True God when they reach adulthood. They don't need to work so hard to become the Lord of the Universe. These are just for children. The Beast God Way is just the product of the interception and processing of the original universe. During the evolution, eight templates were made. The eight innate beast gods are all fourth-level masters of the universe (the strongest secret method in the original universe is the fourth level, and the fifth level requires the fusion secret method). Including the Ancestral God Sect behind it, they are all used by the universe to govern the interior. Once outside the universe, they are novices. According to Luo Feng's cultivation situation, the more he cultivates, the more he looks like the Golden Sky Beast God. These are all things with templates and limitations. Luo Feng has a blood clone of the Golden Sky Beast God like the Golden Horned Behemoth, a Nine Tribulations Mystery Code to follow the divine power flow, a secret pattern flow, an old beast god's bonus, a blood crystal blessing, etc., And the most important thing is that Tomato arranged to sleep and discover the heart of the beast god... There is no second example in the entire human race that has the heart of the beast god. The same is true for Herodo of the Golden Horn tribe. How can another species recognize that he is a beast god from all aspects? Even the bloodborn can't do it. Another issue is the difficulty. During the Genius War period, I had not practiced for several years, nor had I developed any relevant talents, nor had I fully understood the essence of Law 108. Why did it suddenly merge? There were also a bunch of things about the Beast God Way... Back then, the human race first came into contact with the secret books of the Beast God Way, but many venerables could not get started. Those who are talented must know how to understand the essence of 108. It would be a thousand times harder... Forget the unreasonable things first, and then continue if you can't forget them tomorrow.

I think the biggest problem is nothing else. It follows the same path as the original text. The continent of Blood, the Way of the Beast God, a clone, and a female protagonist. It is said that she is not on the earth and does not follow the earth's route. In fact, it is just a different name. The original text has a strong sense of familiarity.

Per month? Do you know how long the Devouring timeline is?

Can the protagonist have a harem? It would be a pity not to pass down the bloodline with 10 times the genes! Besides, the protagonist still has great feelings for the human race, so he should regard it as making a contribution to mankind!

Isn't this just changing the names of the protagonist and the treasure, and rewriting the plot again?

Dear author, I want to tell you some news that I don't know whether it's good news or bad news. That means Tomato is going to write Swallowing II, which is of course not Douluo II or Douluo III like the Third Young Master of the Tang family. It's the story of Luo Feng after he broke through reincarnation, but to be honest, Devouring 2 probably won't be long. After all, Luo Feng was already the Eternal True God at that time, and he had to follow many of Lord Snow Eagle's settings. It felt like there were a lot of rules. I guess the reason why Tomato wrote Swallowing 2 is also to continue the popularity of Swallowing Starry Sky anime.

This protagonist's genius battle performance is not as good as Bo Lan's in terms of genius, not as good as Savage in terms of domineering, and not as good as Luo Feng's fighting willpower, which is very average.

Don't you read the comments on QQ Reading? What about the plug-ins? Lost the plug-in at the back? Apprenticeship gives you a golden talent, and the plug-in is gone... I have seen battlefields outside the territory for hundreds of years, and during this period I also received the Apocalypse inheritance. Isn't it a big event? Why are the plug-ins gone?

Forehead. Do you write a clearance? Seriously? I just saw the explosion and cleared the level? Do you look down on Universe Virtual Corporation?

As for Goldfinger, why is it missing from the back?

Stupid and cool article, no wonder the score is so low

Thunder and lightning + time origin darling, can you clear the seven towers after twenty years of practice? In the original work, Luo Feng has a golden-horned behemoth + a demon-killing clan, which is equivalent to gold + a space darling. Moreover, having two clones that last twice as long is not so exaggerated. Even if the protagonist embarks on the path of law fusion in advance, it is too exaggerated.

This level of writing is even more exaggerated than the original work. . This timeline is even more outrageous than the original. . . In a few years, decades, or three hundred years, you will be invincible. . . . . The most valuable thing in Swallowing Starry Sky is time, right? Why do you cherish time so much? ? ? It's so fussy about writing a timeline. . . Your Devouring Starry Sky is the most outrageous thing I have ever seen. . Completely self-proclaimed, intoxicated in his own consciousness without even realizing it. . .

Talent once a month? The time to swallow the stars is not valuable, it can be tens of thousands or millions of years. Just writing the name of the talent is enough for the author to write hundreds of chapters. It would be weird if it doesn't collapse.

One talent per month, this setting alone is ruined. How many talents can be obtained in one reincarnation? When stacked, I can't even imagine how much the talents can be stacked.

As soon as it was released, it inexplicably brought the protagonist and a girl together. There was no foreshadowing, and they seemed to be together affectionately for no apparent reason. The author said that the purpose is to prove that the protagonist in his novel is not a training machine He really suddenly encountered shit while walking, please! This is the star-devouring sky! If you can't write an emotional scene well, don't write it. What's the difference between this and pooping a big poop on the street just to prove that the protagonist is a human being and not a machine😅😅

The setting of the writing style is okay, but the hook is too high. Now nine of the ten Devouring Books are from Earth. Classmate Luo Feng, after finishing the genius battle, will be either first or second, and after finishing the extraterritorial battlefield - the Ancestral God Cult - alien assassination. In your book, except for those who are not from the earth, you can't write an ordinary genius whose timeline is the same as that of Coty or King Zhenyan. He starts in the Secret Realm of Taichu or the Secret Realm of Heaven and Earth, and slowly grows up by relying on foresight + Gou Daoliu. You can't write about a person with a special life or a starry sky beast origin, joining the Ancestral God Cult or the Starry Sky Beast Alliance. Anyway, these two forces have no conflict with humans.

Internal investment has passed, brothers who want to invest, hurry up

If you really don't know how to write, just delete the heroine. The emotional scenes are inexplicable.