Write a Diary in Zongwu and Receive Rewards from All Realms

Author, I think you are not suitable for writing novels. Before the Chinese New Year, just find a temporary job to earn some money and go home to celebrate the Chinese New Year.

There are a lot of typos, and the preface of the novel does not match the epilogue. Author, you should go back and study for a few more years!

The writing style is so poor, it's nothing compared to a little piglet.

The author should be a novice. The ideas are very clear and the creativity is very good. However, the description is a bit poor.

It's a mess, why don't you read it yourself after you finish writing it? Isn't it uncomfortable?

After reading the first seven chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. The writing was childish and the plot was crude. I had no idea what the author wanted to express. It was like he was just randomly piling up things that came to mind. Even the composition must pay attention to the succession, transition and connection, but I can't see it at all. What makes it even more troublesome is that the author sometimes writes from the third point of view and sometimes from the first point of view. Those who can read the whole book are all gods full of poison resistance, but I ask myself whether he is.

Me, me, me, me, it sounds so awkward, the preface doesn't match the subtitles, and there's a harem plot, so embarrassing, I'm here, I'll pick you up

I don't know if the author has read it, but I always think it sounds weird.

Author, why do you pronounce it in the first person and then in the third person? Either say it in the first person to the end, or say it in the third person! Otherwise it would be so awkward to read!

The diary article is just a piece of shit. The diary article is supposed to be a cold subject, but you are still messing around.

In this martial arts novel, you just need to add some fairy tales. What else should you add? Ugly

It's boring. I started with a harem at the beginning.

Why do you think you have seen the same setting before?

I don't even know what the author wants to express. The nonsense he wrote makes no sense. This is all on the shelves. . .

After receiving system rewards, you directly gain abilities without using them? You don't even write down the process, you're a fool! Talent, why don't you just make the protagonist invincible and end it?