Entertainment: I Can't Be Fooled If I Start at the Top!

Alas, the rap part is so speechless. Isn't it embarrassing to look at the lyricist?

I must be lucky today! ! ! ! It's rare to encounter an unsystematic article! ! ! !

Lian Zong 😰 Forget it, keep it, skip this section and don't watch it anymore

What I hate the most is that the protagonist takes out a loan to work. Even if I write a novel, I have to weaken labor laws.

It turns out that song selection really affects the reading experience. There is a reason for this result.

Update soon

It's rare to find an entertainment novel that is unsystematic and truly writes about a parallel world. I've read Chapter 123 so far and it feels very good. Come on, author, please read more.

The author can't sing, dance, or play basketball. How can anyone look at it without chicken feet?

The whole story of "Brother", I feel uncomfortable all over, the gay man is rushing around, and he is flashing

It's rare to find an unsystematic book, so I'm quite happy. The plot is remarkable. Until I saw the song about dancing the great master. Chasing dreams xx heart. I immediately wanted to abandon the book. Although the article has not been published. I really don't understand why you writers like to play this song so much? Except for the title of this song. Nothing else. To be honest, writing romance novels is really challenging for readers. Chapter 108. The part where the hero saves the beauty is inserted. It was really awkward and the insertion was so abrupt. Unreasonable and illogical. The program team filmed in the wild. Security measures will be adequate. Once an accident occurs, the program team will be held responsible. Suddenly, three vicious dogs rushed out. A large group of people were all in a daze, but the male protagonist was both wise and brave. Before time travel, he was just an online anchor. The male protagonist's predecessor was an idol star living in the city. Where did you find the courage to fight the vicious dogs with bare hands and get three of them back! Even if his brother taught him how to use grappling skills. It is not something that can be taught just once. Technical martial arts require time to practice. Fighting a vicious dog in hand-to-hand combat is something only a desperado would do. I guess people who read books without thinking will not mind. Adult readers will not pay for this plot

Friends can tell me the poisonous points, the embarrassing points, the things I don't like, the things I like, and let me know what is wrong in the writing. I accept it with an open mind, reflect on it seriously, and make improvements. Thank you all!

It's casually written, but it doesn't make sense no matter how you read it. Do you understand?

I would like to ask if the male protagonist of this book has a single female protagonist, no cp, or is he flirting everywhere? Forget it if you tease her everywhere.

A story about two male protagonists, "The Last One" The first male protagonist is ugly and lecherous. He was supposed to be the devil in the world of demons. But by some mistake, he was recognized as the holy son of the fairy world. From then on, he embarked on the path of the prodigal son's return... The second male protagonist, his personality, is upright and handsome. He was supposed to be the holy son of the fairy world. But by mistake, he was destined to be the holy son of the fairy world. Next, he was identified as the Demon Son of the Demon Realm, and has since embarked on the path of becoming a villain... The story unfolds between these two half-brothers... This is the theme of this novel, if you are interested in reading it, read it, at least the logic is online, the plot is reasonable, and there are laughs and tears. Welcome to complain

Author, I suggest you change the title of this book, it will ruin your character. The last one with this title had his cheating exposed and was immediately cooled down.