Bind an E-Sports Manager at the Beginning, and the Bird's Nest Won the Championship and Debuted

Yasuo, the peak zombie king, hahaha

Starting from the master level of the first area, the operation is not inferior to the king, but the awareness is a bit lacking, and the luck is a little bit bad, so I can't get points^^_

In fact, there is nothing wrong with the writing. It can be seen that the author understands it and is quite diligent. I personally think that the current problem is that team battles are a bit hard to watch, and there are some running accounts, like descriptions of stacking operations, and it's like looking at some automatically recorded log, so I skipped reading it. And then look at the postgame stuff. I have a small suggestion, strengthen the key points, exaggerate the atmosphere, and give more comments and lines to the commentators for highlight operations. Don't just give it a formulaic sentence. Just give each commentator one sentence every time and it's done. For example, for a certain operation, you can write the hero's performance and voice lines under slow-down playback, and write down the details of the operation from the perspective of commentary. Including the player card you are using now, don't just load it at the beginning. I often forget about it when I look at it. It can also be fun to connect certain operations with the player's instant moments of immortality, or gain some insights. You can compare the head commentators with those who only talk about what happened on the field, including those passionate football commentators and those who only talk about who passed the ball to whom and whose ball was lost. They will make a big difference in your entire viewing experience. Write about the game and enrich the content of the game. In addition to writing about the situation on the court from the front, a large part is also about the side effects. You can observe what the casters are doing during the boring moments of the game. They will analyze the players' previous performance, historical data, status, technical characteristics, and even grudges (match winning percentage) and off-court gossip. These can let everyone know more about these people on the court, thereby investing more emotional factors into the game and making the situation more exciting. You are now like a commentator to a certain extent. To make readers interested in this game, in addition to the excitement of the game itself, you must grasp the rhythm well. For example, using football as an example, "xxx is a young player who has just turned 18, but he has already scored xx goals in the league, and there are already fans wearing his jersey on the sidelines." This immediately makes people feel that this person is high-spirited. "It is worth mentioning that this is the xxx game that xxx has played in the xx team. He will retire next season. The audience on the sidelines has prepared banners." The image of the meritorious veteran came out. "In the interview before the game, xx said that xx is the player he respects most, and it has always been his dream to compete with him on the same stage. Let's look forward to the confrontation between these idols and fans." Suddenly, the two people's images were established, and the gimmick of the game was also there. The same is true for LOL games. You can write about their technical characteristics. For example, xxx is his signature hero. He used xx games in the summer split. If you dare to let it go, you can take it. It seems that the opponent is very confident. We will wait and see how they prepare to deal with it. Or, his winning rate against xx in the summer split is xx, which is very scary; xx has been practicing this hero like crazy in rank recently, so he probably came prepared. The last time he used this hero was against xxx in last year's Spring Split. At that time, he led the team to a hard-fought victory. Now he has used this hero again for the team. Will he be able to save the team from fire and water this time like last time? The biggest problem is to highlight the protagonist. What you write now is very empty and suspended. Logically speaking, the protagonist's current experience is already legendary, and it is such a heavyweight game, but it looks like a minor league game, very bland, as if winning and losing are normal. Although you also write barrages and commentary, it feels like you are scratching the surface and scratching the surface. Imagine it for yourself, or go and see how the commentators usually brag about young players who have just come to the altar. They must not delve into his past experience in every game, where he has trained, how many times he has played, hero pool, past outstanding performances or hip-stretching performances, catchy comments, rank records... Niu Bei has Niu Bei's way of bragging, and he can brag about his enlightenment even if it is very dull. If he doesn't have to dig in, he will also come up with comments from insiders who are said to know him, or the performance in training matches that he has learned about. In short, he must have these things in order to pretend. Sorry, I accidentally became a writing guide. These are my personal opinions. I hope the author will write better and better 🙂🙂

I thought it was the coaching stream, but I didn't expect it was the system stream again.

Ah? Are there any players who play lol manager?

√🌿'S horse uniform🔪

The title of the book is a bit confusing, but the rest is good

I want to help her get out of trouble. I have something to do. Please excuse me 😡

There are very few people in the comment section. I scrolled through it out of boredom and haven't read it yet.

Sorry, no matter how well I wrote, I have no choice but to leave. My ex-girlfriend's name is Chen Chen 🙄

This author is serious, he looks like a high-level surfer at first glance