My Script for Cultivating Immortality Went Astray

It's difficult to evaluate the various behaviors of the protagonist. The Su family has never harmed the protagonist, and there is obviously a better way to complete the task. However, the Su family was harmed to the point of ruining the whole family. The protagonist in this fast-traveling novel is definitely a villain who was liquidated by the fast-traveling mission.

I can't stand it, it's so weird. What is the next task in this system? It doesn't depend on the author's whim. It's intermittent, plot, foreshadowing, forget it, what are you asking for?

It looks ok now, keep up the good work

The ideas are clear and nonsensical, as if they were written by a drunk alien.

Look at the picture I posted The fourth picture was written. The protagonist knew from the beginning that he had traveled through time and was not playing a game Please Don't say this in this chapter, [note that the protagonist still thinks he is playing a game]

It's strange, the cause of all the downfall of the Su family is caused by the male protagonist. If you stand by and watch, I can understand the character design. I can also accept the evil male protagonist. After all, he has done so many immoral things before, but he deliberately caused the trouble. Now he comes out to be a hero, kidnapping the eldest lady, causing negative publicity, and then blowing up the enshrined person to you, and trapping the person in the wind abyss (life and death unknown), leading to The Su family is about to be attacked. The Su family didn't provoke you at the beginning. So far, I think it's okay. It's not like I haven't seen the villain protagonist before, but now he appears as a hero, and there is no system reward. I can only understand it as doing whatever he wants, which gives me a sanctimonious feeling. But now he has been doing things according to the system tasks, and there is no sense of arbitrary character. In summary, the character is not established well, and his behavior is conflicting.

After reading a few chapters, it was really uncomfortable to read, "Why do you use the mentality of playing games and using the people inside as NPCs" as a shield? To put it bluntly, he is bad, stupid, and self-righteous, and keeps doing evil things. He is purely a villain who kills without blinking an eye. If you are evil to the end, you can be evil so generously that there is nothing to say, and you can be evil happily, and you have to do a system task, as if you have no choice, and you are both responsible and independent. Isn't this just disgusting? If you want to be evil, just be direct. In the world of immortality, the law of the jungle is the law of the jungle. If I do something evil, what do you do to me? If you can, kill me. That's fine. You have to do something disgusting.

How should I put it? The protagonist is mentally ill and can be illogical, but the supporting characters are not. I feel that the logic of your supporting characters is also a mystery. I feel like they are a bunch of zzs.

In the early days, the writing style was okay, nonsensical, but now it's getting more and more disgusting, it's really disgusting, it's shit and piss.

A slave to the system, nothing interesting to watch

What can I say about this book? In the first few chapters, the protagonist looks like a normal person, passing tasks through novel methods, but later on, the protagonist feels like a psychotic Long Aotian.

is some of the best in this batch of potential new books

Just write like this. If you write like this, I won't follow you. It's so cool. I'll kill the tired and sick Palu at both ends to add to the fun.

Pictures 15-19 were poisoned by me.

To be honest, the poisonous point of this novel is not the morality of the protagonist, but the NPC and logic. The game is dead after all. If players overplay it, it will freeze and cause bugs at most. Writing novels is more about logic. It's okay for the protagonist to go crazy, but the effects and NPC reactions caused by the problem are difficult to control. The biggest problem lies in the level of enjoyment. The protagonist goes crazy many times and burns money like paper. The level rewards given by the system are almost not worth mentioning, but the troubles the protagonist makes and the resources he spends for those things can be said to be extremely exaggerated. So while arranging for the protagonist to burn opportunities and go crazy, in order to make up for enough opportunities, the golden fingers (opportunities) were airborne too casually.

It was a little better before I entered Tianjian Sect, but after I entered, I got sick just for the sake of getting sick. It is recommended that the author be a little more careful and make the world a little more false, for example, Yaoshou and NPCs are rebelling. This will be more in line with the player's mentality.

As a person with a high moral level, the content of this book is rather uncomfortable to read, but it is undeniable that the author's writing style is good. If the protagonist of this book insists on making an evaluation, he would be like "I don't eat beef." He is immersed in his own world and wants to understand the world with his own subjective assumptions.

It's been a month, let's all disperse

Dead eunuch, originally a bad eunuch

Just let my Cultivation to Immortality script run away.

It feels like Qidian's unfinished product rate is higher than that of a certain eggplant

Eunuchs are like pornography, gambling and drugs, there are only 0 times and countless times

Burn incense, summon souls, arrest souls, and shut up in a small dark room

Damn, Eunuch, is there anything similar to this one? I really like reading this kind of book.

I think adding a book title can increase the number of fans: "The Kidnapping Heroine at the Beginning"

Suddenly I felt that these old sect leaders and elders were pretty good again in the later period. As expected, there was no harm in comparison. Some of the elders really felt quite decent.

Nascent Soul can only live two or three hundred years? Are you kidding me?