Go to Work, Clock In, and Be a Magical Girl

The setting is good, but it's too unbalanced to write that the main character is pretentious and over 50 years old. To put it bluntly, this book is still a story about transformation, and interspersing related plots can increase the fun, but now I feel that the protagonist is trying to be a hypocrite, and the more I read, the more awkward and uncomfortable it becomes.

There is so much negative energy. Not only the protagonist is complaining, but also the supporting characters.

I read 5 chapters, and in about two and a half chapters the protagonist is complaining.

Relying on the defense, this bad protagonist, at the beginning, dislikes all kinds of things, dislikes magical girls, dislikes cheating, and dislikes magic! But I am a pure coward! Rubbish! He is still a poor guy, even his life is a problem! Where does the confidence come from? Right there in Versailles! Disgusting as hell! I really want to see his expression when he falls into the abyss and has no way to call for help, falling into despair! Let's see when the time comes, with a perverted look on his face, he is enjoying himself in a desperate situation (but it grossed me out) and takes the initiative to speed up the process! I'm still like a normal person, crying that I can't do anything, feeling regretful and helpless at the same time!

There are more than 100 pictures. I don't even know what you are writing as I read it. It looks like a waste-chai style, but it is not a waste-chai style. It seems like an invincible style, but it is extremely abstract. It is hesitating and dilly-dallying. No matter what you have to put off, you can obviously solve it at the beginning.

I watched 20 pictures in two minutes. I need writing skills but not writing skills. I need plot but not plot. If you don't have the ability, don't try to become famous by trying to get famous. You won't live long enough to clear your name.

For a 2,000-word article, the effective content is only six to seven hundred. Repeating a sentence too many times becomes annoying.

Fengling Yueying said that there is no such garbage blood lock.

The author is still persevering, poisoning, and I admire him. He has written 9 books and still has LV1 perseverance.

How should I say this? I think the author's writing style is quite good. And I want to write as complete and reasonable a world view as possible, and I am really serious about it. But the author may not be able to write online articles. Most people who read online articles want to read novel things and relax. The most important thing is to relax. The author's setting may be reasonable (come on, those strong people have lived for billions of years, and they can be either male or female when they are so powerful, so they may have set the concept of gender so rigidly). But it doesn't make people feel comfortable or happy. If the protagonist has no abilities, forget it, it would be good to watch it as a hot-blooded series. But the protagonist's cheating is very powerful. The author wanted to write about the protagonist's indifferent feeling, but all we saw was aggrieved. Obviously I feel unhappy about many things (such as committing massacres), but when I have such strong cheating and I am absolutely capable of changing when I grow up, I never think about changing. This is a waste. Even if we can't find a real magical girl, aren't those beautiful girls in the secret realm human beings? But we haven't thought about it at all, which undoubtedly proves how much of a loser the protagonist is. A loser and a loser are really hard to watch. Reading novels is meant to relax, okay?

The recent plot has not been very good... I would say that the protagonist immediately improved quickly at the beginning, did not improve half-heartedly, and now someone is trying to kill him and his sister, that's it? If there is a hook, just push it... Either you can work hard to become stronger and live a normal life pretending to be an ordinary person, or you can kill the enemy and then find a place to live a daily life... But now I am speechless when I am bullied to the point that I have no strength.

No wonder nine books didn't even reach level two. . . What is this writing? Half of the chapter is psychological description.

I'm waiting to explode now! Waiting day after day, all the flowers of waiting have faded! I no longer feel like chasing after the wait. At least the magical girl is still human. Have you ever thought about turning into a bug, or even other non-human creatures? From the perspective of a normal person like me, if you have invincible abilities and are still in human form, thank God. It's all God's choice. I keep repeating that I don't want to become a magical girl, so that won't change! Even if you die, don't change, and don't change even after your family is wiped out. The results change again and again. To put it bluntly, it's still the law of Moxiang. It's really too hypocritical to keep repeating that you don't want to transform into a magical girl! No one will say anything if you don't have the strength to act like a turtle. After all, people are afraid of death. If you have the strength to act like a turtle, it will be unbearable!

The setting is interesting, but the writing is messy and the amount of effective information in each chapter is very small. I think most people will run away after reading it for a while.

I think the rhythm in the front is a big problem. I haven't seen the back yet, so I don't know if it has changed. But the male protagonist's character is really very alienated. Isn't it enough in the reality of being criticized? There are no pretense problems with finding a class.

In the final analysis, the protagonist is too full and protected by his family! You can be so disgusting only if you haven't been severely beaten by society!

You have written some plug-in functions but don't use them. They are just put aside as decorations.

The manga "Magical Girl Over Thirty" is recommended to everyone

This book is mainly about a story about a magical girl who has a broken heart and is already invincible. She spends more than ten years in confusion and then wants to become stronger. The male protagonist is already invincible, but there is a prerequisite for this invincibility, which is to fully activate the Wind Spirit and Moon Shadow. If only a part of it is activated, it will be regarded as false invincibility. First let's talk about the broken heart of the protagonist. After rebirth, the protagonist cherished the "innocence" of the magical girl. However, an accident caused the protagonist to be killed by the society + deceived + stabbed in the back by his relatives. His mentality was directly exploded, and then his heart was broken. Then the reason why the protagonist has spent more than ten years in a state of confusion is that the inner factor is that Tao's heart is broken, and the external factor is that he has become invincible because of the wind and moon shadow. The second-level magical girl school only recruits girls. The environment in which the protagonist lives is very safe for him, and there is no danger. Because of these four reasons, the protagonist has been living in a state of confusion for so many years. It was also because his sister showed him the dangers of magical girls that he began to want to become stronger for the sake of his family. So if you feel uncomfortable while reading it, don't think it's a poisonous point, because the protagonist himself has problems when you read this book, plus you have a God's perspective. In the end, the author did not write out all the options that the protagonist Goldfinger Wind Spirit Moon Shadow can check, which leaves room for deus ex machina, such as perspective, passing through walls, becoming two-dimensional, etc.

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