Immortality Martial Arts: Start as a Border Soldier

Has the author written too many urban novels? Chapter two, chapter three. It's time to go to the battlefield. Is the supporting character so arrogant because he's not afraid of his teammates stabbing him in the face, or because he's not afraid of his teammates shooting cold arrows? The supporting character is written with an abnormal mind.

This military camp is not described as a military camp but like a martial arts gym. Whose military camp has such freedom as five-day rest and an independent kitchen. If you don't train yourself every day, you have free reign.

What a chicken thing! Having accomplished so much, are you still just a small soldier? Play with fur!

If someone comes here, please accept it first as a token of respect! The writing is definitely not bad, but after reading it, I suddenly realized what a talented author is. Unfortunately, you are not. If you want to talk about the faults of the whole article, there are not many faults, but if you want to talk about the good points, it is really not very good. I suggest you write more and see what happens next. Come on!

Weird, why haven't the people heard of Weird, and the court has no means to check and balance it. Since he is invincible, does that person still have any meaning in existence? It's all weird. It's embarrassing to write it like this now.

It's okay inside the military camp, but once outside, the plot involving provocation and banditry is a bit stiff.

He also said that he wanted to write something, but there was basically no homework on the details and no new ideas in the setting. It was basically copied from a few books. In addition, the blood nourishing soup in the barracks was 5 taels, the recruits went on missions to fight to the death for 18 taels, and the three bandits near the barracks market were killed for 80 taels (who are the people you can often meet next to the barracks market? An officer can collect more than 80 taels. It is self-evident who he must meet. In addition, it is self-evident. There are basically no people acting alone on the outer border, and the villagers are also young and strong in the village. They go out in groups), and the recruits in preparation for war can enter and leave the nearby market at will (it is also said that the military law is strict, but the more stringent it is, the more no one dares to let them go alone, and no one can bear this responsibility.) In addition, beef can be eaten freely in the market, and the price is based on the price. There is also a shortage of cattle outside the border, and pepper is sprinkled. These are all flaws in the details. Of course this is an online article~, ugh

The writing is average and not attractive.

Just like a child, you won't save someone if someone says you are in danger. At worst, you won't save him if he is in danger. Then you seem to be dissatisfied with the backhand, and you just pick up the knife and chop him. Why bother? You must know that a biting dog does not bark, and the same goes for people. It is difficult to guard against a kid. If you don't like him, you will have many opportunities. If you find an opportunity to hit him with a sap, kill him directly. If you are angry, you will just scratch him with a knife. You must write like this, like a mentally retarded person?

Write old routines, clichés one after another.

The slogans were so embarrassing that they were shouted and beaten at the same time 🤤

Don't the attack power of a fully drawn bow and arrow be the same? What does it have to do with strength?

How to say. Earn money and get out of the military. Never thought about it. There is a road to the end.

The panel is already very strong, so this survival point is a bit redundant. As long as you are safe, you can survive. Then find a way to a relatively safe place and keep going. If it becomes unsafe, change places. If you continue like this, you will become invincible without any effort at all. The panel is that you can gain something if you work hard, and the survival point is that you can become stronger by hiding. They are completely contradictory. One can become stronger by working hard, and one can become stronger by being lazy. I hope the author can change the function of the survival point, so that it cannot be used to add points.

I used to be a free and easy person, but in the end I was treated like a dog. It didn't feel like a cross-posting at all. The other cross-tweeting posts mentioned killing officials, princes, and emperors as commonplace, so it's no wonder that not many people commented on it.

In order to write a book, many authors don't even think about whether the world background you set is consistent with the living conditions of the protagonist you want to write.

This book is really funny. A border city. Bandits, cults, and all kinds of other things can just come into the city and do whatever they want.

Great book, all set! I have been reading books for half a year, and I can be considered an old bookworm. I think the plot of this book is novel, and the characters in the book are all thousand-year-old with IQs. The characters are very rich, the economic system does not collapse, the protagonist improves quickly, and the force value does not collapse. Much better looking than Lord of Mysteries and Sun God. Why Mo Yan, Chen Zhongshi, lags far behind the author in terms of writing style, but if the author insists, he will definitely become a god.

This is a book written by a girl, the plot is all rambling here and there,

Coming from Zhihu, I feel that this system is set up very well, keep it up.

Grade? What is the level of cultivation? Looks like a mess

It feels like the main article is being abused, and the system is not right either.

I came to watch the Invincible style, but in the first few chapters I had to use lime to defeat Wu Huimin. Withdrawn.

From Zhihu, bro, you really wrote more than a million words.

There are a bit less updates, not enough to watch.

The protagonists are all soldiers and have no blood at all.

Why can't I stand it? What's happening now? It wasn't like this before. It always felt too bland and boring.

I'm an 18-year-old newcomer, please read the book. Please read the book and get to the latest chapter😍

The author's writing is very supportive, and I would like to recommend a new book that has just been published Jidao Original World Zhutianliu, you guys can pay attention and take a look Jidao Strange Demon

This kind of work can still be read around 2010. The writing style is weak, but it can be seen that the author wrote it carefully. I hope the author will work harder in the future.