Standalone Tokyo

There is no need to do anything about helping her detoxify at the beginning, just write that she overdosed, and don't hold a funeral. It feels like the funeral is just to have a relationship with the supporting character, which is very alienating. PS The author didn't feel like he was thinking about the protagonist. He waited a week to see his appearance after traveling through time? The glasses can also be explained using muscle memory habits, but there is no introduction to the soaps and so on. Then about the system tasks, I hope to add a little description of the environment and accidents. The word count can be similar to that of the Mysterious Journey of Go Away so that readers will not feel bored.

It started to forcefully suppress the combat power, or forcefully suppress the protagonist's IQ. There is no shortage of people and weapons. Such advantageous conditions, but the assassination failed with two small pistols. The protagonist was quite annoyed after the failure. This seems very weak. Even if you buy a few AKs, there is no shortage of money and channels.

The author originally came from 🦔Cat. The writing on the cat is pretty good. But when I came to Qidian, I almost got scolded and pouted. Hahaha, so happy.

Can the protagonist have some IQ? This is too poisonous, and he wants to use cheap goods. He stabs with a pistol as soon as he hits the head. After that, he fails and feels annoyed. Why not use automatic weapons? What is this? There are fellows who make automatic weapons in the market. Isn't it cheap? Why not buy it? If you have to play with pistols, if you don't produce elite soldiers, you can produce some elite weapons. You won't be able to make them for everyone automatically. This is just like being brainless and useless. If you don't search all the people, the money will be put there, and the people will keep it. It's just for fun. It feels like an ancient novel. Vengeance or vendetta, everyone has this kind of hang-up, either plotting or starting a gang. What's the ink mark at the end of a chapter? There's been no progress for a long time Will the villain fight back next and hurt the beauty or the male protagonist? Then when the protagonist gets angry, he grits his teeth and says, "What's going on?" Then he thinks of his fault; he has to hide and pretend, and he finds a part-time job, which feels meaningless. Part of the plot even involves hooking up with the boss's broken shoes. What's the use of this part of the plot? It's easy to be blocked, and the writing is not good. It has no feeling, but gives people an old stallion feeling. All your light comics + explosions are better than this, and you can still eat two servings of rice. Can the character creation have some IQ and some common sense? 🥵 The cool thing about the protagonist is Japan, which has anti-social rules Firstly, the loyalty of the younger brother is not lost. The tradition of the violent army system Secondly, the source of guns is convenient. It is in sharp contrast with other social organizations and gangs Thirdly, is it Japan? Everyone can kill and kill as they like, and there is no moral restraint after reading it Fourth It is the protagonist who plays behind the scenes, and the film is not involved So recruiting people is a failure, and being discovered at every turn is also your main point. It lies in the anti-social (novel) common sense and the protagonist's behind-the-scenes flow. The contrast between the bright and dark side before and after should be more prominent. How can I say this character design, barely I think the author can now read urban novels, which are about working in Tokyo. Enrich the fireworks of daily life At the same time, learn military knowledge at Station B 🤐, Baidu is also available, get some social knowledge, and play military jokes at every turn, it feels like something written by Xiaobai The good and bad guys must have IQs and distinct characters. How come there are always people who want to kill people? The kind of people who sell people and still have to count the money, the kind of depressive feudal society and colonial atmosphere are the social reality in Japan. I look forward to the day when the US military base stationed in Ryukyu throws a grenade and sets a fire in the divine toilet The author's subject matter is still there. Okay, it's not easy to see this kind of system article about exploding troops, but the taste of the ancient article is too strong, and the protagonist's IQ is too poisonous. Please change it. I was really happy and uncomfortable when I read it I am glad that I have read it, and I am not in a hurry. What is uncomfortable is that the IQ and the plot are too damn poisonous

Every external site author who achieves certain results in an external site thinks of the starting point to prove God.

It was well written before it was released, but now Seese is gone, and the subsequent plot is not exciting. The protagonist's role is gone, and the protagonist is not stepping on ants, but just watching how the ants fight? What to watch

There's something wrong with this system, it's so evil. Spend money to recruit soldiers. The more you spend, the stronger they become. There is no limit to the number! This is to urge the protagonist to fight to support fighting!

If the protagonist's personality is half as good as that of the protagonist in "Flying and Domineering, Starting from Chinatown", the performance of this book will at least double. With the same personality as Xiao Shou, and no bigger goal line, this subject system will be blinded.

It's too weak. The protagonist's system of summoning helpers should set up more branches and take root in places where warlords rule, such as Mexico, South America, Myanmar, Central Africa, the Middle East, and even Eastern Europe. Set up a noble program, brainwash teenagers, and form peripheral cannon fodder troops. Is there any way to make more money than establishing a political power? Then organize elite troops to raid banks in various countries, kill all the people, and then retreat systematically. Let's be honest, just looking at friendliness and loyalty is enough to rule the world.

It's not that I'm putting pressure on you. You're an old author who has written several million-word novels. It's too stingy to publish just one chapter of a new book.

What's going on with the author? Aren't the previous books all about macho men? How come you are 18 years old here, 1.65 Meters tall, skinny, and have a transvestite physique?

It turns out that the squid is not only the father of the Americans, but also invaded the empire. I only know that the newspaper group has many industries in the empire. It seems that there are far more than

Don't waste a good subject in vain. You won't want to read it after you subscribe. It puts too much pressure on your IQ. It always puts pressure on your IQ. If you don't have money at the beginning, just recruit two cheap ones. After you get the first money, you can gather a team of elites. Whether it's robbing a bank or kidnapping a rich man to quickly accumulate wealth, and then keep blowing up the troops. , Even if you don't take it back every time you rob or kidnap and let them, the police and the military use it up, you will definitely make more every time, and you will be able to promote Japan in less than a month. Even if you don't want to write nothing to keep up the pace, you can still write hundreds of thousands of words to unify Japan's Yakuza and become the underground emperor, right? Then write hundreds of thousands of words to enter Europe and the United States and revolutionize the mafia, right? Interspersing life and pretentiousness in the middle can last for hundreds of thousands of words, and the rest is almost there. If you want to write millions of words for a book on this kind of subject, not only is it a waste of subject matter, but it also loses the sense of reading and pleasure!

Values ​​are exported too much. I suggest you, the author, not to export your values ​​all the time (although I don't think you will listen). Even if you want to export them, you have to be more subtle. Instead of saying this bluntly here, readers are here to read the book, not to listen to you talking about these damn values. You will only make people disgusted. In addition, I guess the author is not very old.

It's becoming less and less interesting to write.

The protagonist is too pretentious. After time travel, he found that he was affected by the residual emotions of the original owner, but he didn't feel angry. He found that his spirit was affected and turned into social fear. He actually let it go. After time travel, he found out that he had a golden finger. He just put it aside and ignored it. He waited for four or five days or more than ten days before he even thought about using it. After discovering that he had a golden finger, he didn't want to use the money to recharge it immediately. Instead, he had to waste more than one million yen on a high-end funeral for the original owner's poisonous mother. With the golden finger, instead of trying to find out how to use it to become stronger, he was so pretentious that the protagonist's thinking and logic was a bit too much to be like a normal person.

It's really not that I'm deliberately looking for trouble. What is this book about? It's really trying to persuade people to quit at the beginning. I read that other readers in the comment area said that Blade of the Empire was also written by the author. The author is getting more and more backward as he writes. His style and writing style are too different 😅

That plot was really disgusting to me. The old man kindly introduced a job to you, but fucked me. In the end, the protagonist fell in love with the old man's daughter. This was really disgusting to me. I couldn't stand it. I really couldn't stand it anymore.

I was running amok in Japan, and there was another book called The Sims in the same genre.

I read the comments section before reading it. It can be said that it is not good in various senses, but because the author's new book has a good impression, I gave it a try and then finished it. After reading the entire novel, I came to the conclusion that this is a very Maozhan-style novel, and it is natural that I will not adapt to the climate at the starting point. The biggest problem with this book is that it is too "cool". The "coolness" of the starting point is for the readers. It is the ups and downs of the plot that bring pleasure to the readers. However, the "coolness" of this novel is entirely the "coolness" of the protagonist. It is so good that even the "mixing pig" process of "pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger" has to be skipped. The protagonist is happy from beginning to end and does not hold back at all. The criticism in the book review section about immediately revealing one's trump card after returning to the family is the result of the novel being too "cool". The chaotic state that followed actually stemmed from this style of having fun all the way to the end. Because it's fun, all the problems encountered are often solved quickly and smoothly. On the one hand, the author needs to spend a lot of energy to create new conflicts to advance the story. It doesn't matter when the length is short, but when the length is long, repetition and boring are inevitable; on the other hand, it also makes it impossible to determine a long-term specific main goal as the backbone of the story, causing the story development and the protagonist's growth to lose direction at the same time. In fact, the problem of the protagonist here is particularly serious - after all, the entire book is told based on the protagonist's standpoint and perspective. However, the protagonist of this book almost never encountered any difficult problems that required his efforts, thinking, and changes, nor did he encounter any difficulties that would make him pursue anything. All problems can be easily solved, and all desires can be easily satisfied, so it is foreseeable that the protagonist will stay in place throughout the whole process. A protagonist with no desire, no motivation, no charm, and almost no memory points except for color was born. Without the system, I don't even think the protagonist would be much better than Shun Xiaomiuchi. Looking at the novel as a whole, this refreshing style from beginning to end will obviously lead to a lack of emotional ups and downs and explosive points throughout the novel. If I hadn't been flailing throughout the whole process, I wouldn't have been able to finish this book. The final problem is that the ending is very bad. Although it can be seen that it is to cut off the book, but... It cannot... At least it should not... "I can only say that it is corrupt and not at all. There is a slight difference, but it is limited.

What is the limit, what is the end? Don't do it. The protagonist's system hasn't been upgraded for so long? Are both the protagonist and the system so Buddhist? Invincible on the ground? There are also underground people and aliens. 404 Is because we are not Israel and non-human beings cannot fight? Ami has shown us blockbusters for so many years, and suddenly summoning a master chief to ride a thousand horses, do you think it can shock them? You have writing skills, can you write more?

The influence of Squid is so great that I really hope that such a poker organization exists in reality.

If you don't pursue rigor and read it with no brains, you can indeed watch it, but there are several problems. First of all, in the early stage, the protagonist often spends a lot of money to do small things for small gains. The second is that the title of the book is "Single Player Tokyo", but later there are too many foreign stories, including the Philippines, especially the American scenes. And from the perspective of a simple novel, the things the protagonist does are too exaggerated. Although this is a novel, I feel that I still have to be careful not to be too exaggerated.

What is the author's other book? I went to the cat next door and searched for Blade of the Empire. It was a Warhammer game, but it didn't feel like it. Does anyone know about this?

Are there any similar books? You can read Summoning Style without thinking too much, this book is quite enjoyable to read.

More, Goudaner ~ This is your destiny

It was well written. Then I went to read your previous novels and found them all very interesting. I hope you will work hard next!

It's good to read, but it's too short. The new book is too young.

The novel is updated so slowly. It takes more than one day. It's harder to just write one chapter every day than to get out of here and there are two chapters.

I always feel that I have read this book a long time ago. . . . Strange,