Game of Thrones: Elden Sun

There is no wisdom, only provocation and counterattack, no demigod wisdom to actively plan, and only a wandering knight showing off. It is better to go directly to the other side of the sea, manifest the saint to recruit soldiers and horses to work with the centaurs, and then slay the dragon, find the dragon eggs, and let you bring the ancient dragon soul to have your own dragon. , Is it not easy to write after that? Isn't it enough to write about Machiavellian farming and marriage, gaining strength by exploring the cursed land, slowly unifying the Throne games, fighting White Walkers, accumulating strength by killing gods, and fighting back to the borderland? Isn't it enough to write about these slowly? Isn't it better than being a wandering knight pretending to be a criminal?

It's impossible to describe how powerful and imposing he is as a demigod and the eldest son of the Golden Dynasty. You have been provoked by several mortals again and again. You, the Duke of the North, are nothing in front of the extraordinary. Moreover, the dragons in Game of Thrones have not yet revived, and magic has not returned. Even if Godwin's power has not been restored much, he will not be afraid of you. For Godwin, it is easier than killing a chicken. The power of being a demigod can be seen from the scene in the game where Lani summons the stars and unseals the stars sealed by Latan. If you don't have that ability, don't add such a devious background to the protagonist.

To be honest, Godwin shouldn't be written. The protagonist's strength is too strong, and there is no natural connection with the original work. It's all forced on. The key is that the author can't write such a strong character, which makes it very embarrassing.

Just watch, I hope there won't be any tricks later on that try to weaken the protagonist and distort the apparently normal outlook on life.

It's very similar to the popular "Peerless God King in the City" more than ten years ago. It was interesting at the time but not now.

Is this Greg? If Godwin wanted to do this, what kind of destined death would he need? He could just take it away with a missile.

Stop writing this book, cut it and reopen it. The protagonist looks like a licking dog, and the book has collapsed.

The most important problem with this book now is the initiative. Isn't the World of Quan You world in competition with the world of Elden's Ring of Law? In order to write a good follow-up, I think it is good to follow the outline of the TV series and deduce it slowly. Unfortunately, you must be able to deduce and dare to deduce when writing fan fiction. Don't be afraid to change the plot, especially this kind of deus ex machina. Why does the protagonist have to wait for the magic of the plot to revive? With the superiority of Elden's Ring, it will be easy for the world to change after the protagonist comes The most important thing is the audience. You can read it by your title. Think about what you want to see. To put it bluntly, the initiative in the general direction is not with the protagonist. Don't tease it. It is a god, even a demigod. Go to the fantasy area to read the god-flow novel to learn from it When writing a Game of Thrones fanfic, it depends on whether the general farming style is feasible I think, author, you are willing to listen to what your book friends say, so you are willing to write so many words. I also like Game of Thrones fanfics. It is normal for you to have unsatisfactory results in the future according to your current thinking. It is possible if you fail. Stop arguing with book friends. It will not only affect your mood, but will have no effect on your writing. Work hard! There is still time to change it at the beginning, and by the way, it is best not to be awkward in the emotional scenes. This is a god who has lived for many years, not a young boy who is not experienced in the world. Your current emotional line is too far out of the protagonist's B-level. You can't learn from the masters of the historical area. If you are domineering and proactive, even Cao Thief will be better than what you have written so far. It is too coy. Many Game of Thrones fans with good ideas have cut it. I hope you can work hard, brother.

From hiding his origins to being accustomed to spoken language, he is just a loser, not an invincible demigod prince. He has no aristocratic character at all. However, he did not directly pass through the Game of Thrones but became a demigod prince for 27 years. As a result, even 27-year-old cannot control whether he is a prince or a loser.

As I said in the first chapter, you are already a demigod, where will you go in a world with low demons? The world is never for the strong. The white, gray and brown Maiya enemies in Middle-earth have always been at the level of demigods. Facing the mortal world, the white robe directly showed disdain. The gray robe plays the human world, and the brown robe simply does not touch it. You protagonist, stop being a demigod and reincarnate.

When you write about ordinary people, just have the wisdom of ordinary people. When you write about chivalry, you need to understand chivalry. When you write about a revolutionary, you need to know why he revolutionized. If a demigod can't even despise mortals and live alone in the world, then he is nothing but a god.

A demigod can be approachable and have no problem with being no different from ordinary people in daily life. But when the war breaks out later, how do you write about it and hide it? Then the character in front of me jumped out.

If it doesn't work, just add settings. For example, before the red comet comes, you can't absorb runes or only have a small amount of runes to cast magic prayers. Furthermore, even with the background of Ice and Fire, even if the world is drained, you may not be able to cast super gravity magic like sealing the stars.

Not fighting for hegemony? What else is there to write about about Game of Thrones?

I will be here to help with the new Game of Thrones book

If you take this leave, I will hire a eunuch directly.