Legend of Demons and Ghosts in the Tang Dynasty: Ningxiang Pavilion

Chapter 2 is about to end, and in the next chapter 3, new characters will appear in Ningxiang Pavilion! Please look forward to it~😌

The author apologizes for the slow update due to work reasons.

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Ahhhh, why? There has been no update for seven days. I can't bear it even if I haven't invested for a long time.

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It is written like a fantasy novel. After reading the first chapter, the impression is just average. The length of the first chapter still stays on the scholar. The main story of Liu Zhilan that I want to read is too little, and the birth of her desire is too sudden. Although the scholar showed that she is very I hate the eldest lady, but to show such strong hatred, I can write more. Although the scholar does fit the image of a nerd, he is very unpleasant sometimes. Besides, he obviously has no ability. Why does Suxin have to take him with her? Why don't you say he is the main character without any sense of participation? If he is an ordinary person, why don't you add chaos? And there are safety issues (´_ゝ｀) The image of the little scholar is too bad. He said he was worried about his relatives and wanted to save people, but when he really wanted to go, he was scared to death. He was talking about holy words. There are quite a lot, but I have no skills at all🤔 In addition, don't describe too many clothes of the same person. These are all secondary. Just write about the first meeting. Su Xin's clothes look different every day. You should describe what she is wearing every time. I'm convinced, it's not necessary. Why don't you just go through it briefly? Writing so many words has nothing to do with the plot The most uncomfortable typos are very serious, and there are missing punctuation 🤔🤔🤔 The impression continues to decline No. There are too many questions in one chapter, and only a few of the ones I really want to read are covered, and there are so many boring things to write about. Write more foreshadowing of the story related to monsters. Readers mainly want to read this. The author should work hard, let's see how the second chapter goes first.