Is the Dark Summoner Weak? Summon the Shadow Legion at the Start

My first impression of Dark Summoner is Li Jiayu

And don't let everyone's eyes focus on the protagonist. How can ordinary people have so much time and energy to pay attention to someone, especially one month before the college entrance examination. The protagonist is also an ordinary person, not an idol living in the spotlight. It seems that every time the protagonist does something, countless people see it and comment on it.

Is this Chen Fan a fool? You exchange a dozen pieces of silver for five pieces of silver. And bronze. You treat others like fools. Or are you a fool yourself❓

Generally speaking, I feel that Xiaobai's writing is like a child playing house

I feel that the author's writing style is a bit poor and his ideas are not very good, but I'd better read on first. After all, I quite like the Black Shadow Corps.

At the beginning, the writing of the protagonist going to the wild to kill monsters was too rough. There should be more details, such as the protagonist taking a taxi to the wild, and at the same time, describing the scenery of the wild and some legions stationed in the wild. It doesn't need more than one or two paragraphs. These all play a lubricating role. Otherwise, it will be too stiff, and where are so many people mocking the protagonist? It's just a couple of gossips at most, and there's no need to point out their ridicule, readers can see it. Moreover, the protagonist can only let the shadow army move within 500 meters of him. It seems that he has killed all the slimes in a city. And in the early stage, when he is not particularly awesome, don't brag, it is too stiff. Moreover, it was originally a fun experience for the protagonist to farm monsters in the wild at level 1, but in the end, you actually sketched it out and couldn't understand it.

Why are there so few comments? Is there a Shen Nong?