Marvel: Starting with Gwen Spider-Man and Traveling Across the Universe

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(*´I`*)٩(￥A￥)۶Gong Xi Fa Cai

MJ, Gwen, Black Cat (Catwoman)

From the universe of "Spider-Man and Deadpool", in this world Spider-Man is a good friend of Deadpool. However, one day he killed Peter. Later, after learning that Spider-Man was Peter, he came to the hell world and resurrected Peter. The reborn Peter is no longer indecisive, his personality has changed, and he has become the nightmare of a New York supervillain! The battle suit is the companion suit that comes back from hell!

Spider-Gwen: No Hero Returns

In fact, I don't think it's necessary to lie to other Spider-Man. To apply Garfield's experience, just don't say it. Spider-Man won't care.

I hope that Gwen and I can be honest with each other about Spider-Man's identity as soon as possible. There are too many things that are hidden and tucked away, which makes it annoying. Too few people reveal their identities quickly. Then, the first chapter said that the protagonist is a senior spider fan and knows the universe of Gwen Spider. Being sucked into another world, seeing shadows, earthquakes, and Spider-Man dying, but you can't think of the plot? I hope that the protagonist in the new chapter will know that, otherwise it will conflict with "senior spider fans"

I can't stand it anymore. I can't understand why Gwen concealed her identity. You are both extraordinary human beings. Are you hiding anything from each other? The second protagonist has a bit of a virgin heart. Wait, it's not to my taste anyway. I don't want to watch it for free. It's boring.

Let's show all the forms of Spider-Man, so I'll go to the first floor first ~ Attached is a picture of Gwen Spider-Man

Thank you

Asking for a day off, awesome, this day is a cruel day, a damn day

It can be seen that the author has a thorough understanding of the Spider-Man series, and the writing style is also reasonable. At least among most American comic fandoms, it can be said that it is better than the best, but not as good as the worst. However, many of the plots that are written to be different from the original fanfics are too self-contradictory. I am not judging the author to be unprofessional. If the author were to read other Spider-Man fanfics, I believe that like some book friends, they would frown and feel disgusted by the self-contradictory loopholes in the fanfics, and would like to correct them. I have also tried to write novels. It is indeed not easy. I have to think hard and think carefully before I can write the characters I am inspired by and the plot I want to see. But what comes with it is an author's perspective, protecting his novel like his own child. When a reader says that the protagonist's character described in the previous article does not match what he does in the following article, or when the plot loopholes are somewhat offensive, the author will immediately arouse the desire to protect and attack the reader with a gun and a stick, instead of choosing to tell later: why the protagonist chose to react this way under the circumstances. I am not saying that readers want to interfere with the author's writing, but that readers want an explanation. Readers' questions want an answer. It does not mean that the author must respond with a perfect answer, but as long as there is an answer, readers who approve will naturally stay, and readers who do not approve can also let go and leave. The author is very ambiguous about the readers' questions. It can be seen that the author is active in this chapter and the book circle, but there are few truly convincing answers. From the author's perspective, there are many reasons for doing this in his mind: "To serve the subsequent plot" "The protagonist's character is like this, but readers have misunderstood" "Would it seem too watery if I write these out? "I was scolded by readers again" Even the most extreme "These readers can't understand my characters at all. I don't bother to explain to them because they are so barbaric" But readers don't know that book friends do not have the author's perspective. They are just fans. They create original characters in the author's mind, so the details and emotional thinking are in the author's mind and the readers have no idea. I hope the author can write these things out, write them into the story, and bring the character to life, instead of simply scribbling perfunctory refutations for readers outside the text of the novel. (I originally wanted to cite a few American comic books as examples, but when I thought that they might be subjectively considered to be a slap in the face, I gave up) Come on, author, I wish my writing will get better and better

Looks like Ben Riley

Run! I suspect that the author is an old author who recently failed in his investment and came back to write a book. Because of the serious nature of the doppelgänger, I subconsciously committed the crime in the past, and in this chapter I actively admit my mistake, but I will dare to do it next time!

Different identities tend to be addictive. He is obviously a time traveler, but he also plays a set of psychological torture like a superhero. I don't want to read it later.

Gwen

The protagonist likes to be bullied To put it simply After the protagonist knows that Gwen likes the protagonist Disguise yourself as a powerful masked man to play with Gwen And then use the spider sense to make Gwen feel good Forcing Gwen to cheat on the masked man Screaming in sexual pleasure on the side

I suddenly want to ask, how many people like Spider-Man: Across the Universe and Miles?

Has this copy been sent?

Your proud spider sense can see every detail of her death

I remember there was a male and female spider that attracted each other, right?

Can't you take both Gwens?

As a Marvel fanfic, it really failed, because I knew something was going to go wrong as soon as I saw the system setting. And what kind of system do you need in the 65 universe? It's not the background of regular alien wars like 616.

I got this short video on Douyin to attract traffic. After reading two chapters, I decided to go back and wait for the short video to be updated.

Shen Nong is Coming It doesn't look good. I endured it in the early stage until I confessed my identity, and then the protagonist looked like he was turning blue? He is a dog, scolding anyone he catches, saying that he is not Spider-Man, and at the same time saying that he wants to be a different Spider-Man. The logic of the writing is confusing, and although the plot arrangement is reasonable, the performance and shaping of the protagonist are unsatisfactory. They usually kill for the sake of killing, and arrange the plot for the sake of killing. The author takes his protagonist too seriously. Often what the protagonist says will resonate with other characters and then start to change. There is no preliminary foreshadowing, and there is no mutual understanding of hardships. They simply bump into each other, say a word, and then immediately turn around and want to be with each other.

Chapter 101 is really boring. I just stop yelling at anyone I see. It's really okay to read it before signing the contract. After that, I just let myself go. This happens once or twice. It's okay if I really plan to yell at people until the end.

Why isn't it updated?😭😭😭

I feel that the author's aesthetics may be different from normal people's