Versatile Master: Fighting Sword Battle Mage

Keep saying... After... And then... After. You have added up the number of words. You have said it before all the dialogues, and you have used the words after in all sentence connections. Even if you replace it with words such as first, second, etc., It will not be so uncomfortable.

Good guy, after reading the third golden chapter, I just want to complain: Brother, please change it! First, the reason why Sanren is a Sanren is that they have 24 professions and 120 small skills that can be used in infinite combinations to kill people. You can say that the protagonist is a Sanren of a certain major profession, or that the protagonist plays King of Fighters, and then adds the skills of the other three fighting systems to the Silver Weapon. Second, the eighth season is actually the dnf95 version? The elder brother is very dramatic. Glory only borrowed skill names and career names, many of which were expanded. I don't know how to describe it all of a sudden! Third, you said that the protagonist's silver weapon is the Little Thousand Chance Umbrella, and it is played in the third area. Do you know what this means? It means that he is as talented as Brother Umbrella but younger than Brother Umbrella. He has not been to the professional arena for 8 years and he still cannot reward himself? What can I say? Too contradictory

Why are you writing the last chapter of a novel? Part of it is actually the first part of the next chapter. You thought you were writing an anime?

Why an original heroine? Not both Tang Rou and Chu Yunxiu can do it. No sense of substitution

Let's change the name. It's always Ye Qiu's.

I'm so clueless at the beginning. Can I put that IQ online?

If the author doesn't know how to write, don't write randomly.

What we are asking is, can we not repeat some parts or reduce them?

Your profile has turned off a lot of people.

The introduction has 118 words, 6 letters, and 10 punctuation marks. There are only two typos here, so I can't read it.

Is there a female protagonist? Who is the heroine?

Everyone has a flickering screen on your phone. The old phone cannot be updated for the time being. I will wait until my new phone arrives.

When it comes to numbers, you are not as good at it.