Your Game Is Not Allowed to Fail

Newcomers should write according to the routine first. The beginning is too protracted, the writing is relatively smooth, but there is too much meaningless information, which can easily wear down the reader's patience. After reading two or three chapters, I can't see any cheats. There is only one advantage of knowing the plot. To make an analogy, there are no cheats in historical novels. However, historical novels have a complete world view. Players of game novels like you basically have no difference between knowing and not knowing the progress of the game, and there is no sense of expectation. The most poisonous thing is that the male protagonist is motivated. If you want to write about the character of the heroine, then use supporting characters to establish it. Your hero looks too useless. Don't always think about the later stage. If you can't retain readers in the early stage, no one will read your later stage. That's all. If you think what I said is useful, you can copy it and delete this comment. If you don't like it or find it useless, you can just delete it. Best wishes

The writing is good🌹🌹🌹

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The ending is bad, no, there is no ending at all.

It's okay, it's good to learn a bit, I hope I can sign the contract soon 🙂