Naruto: Before the Night of Genocide, I Awakened the Ninja System

I feel like there is something wrong with the setting. The ninja system is a family. Are the mother and sister not from the same clan? No recognition? Could it be that only the three of Fugaku's family could be considered a ninja? Not counting the rest of the family? No one else agrees? Family, you can either summon or resurrect directly? Wouldn't it be better to resurrect all the former Uchiha clan members!

The level of political struggle among primary school students. In fact, if you can't write well about political battles, you can concentrate on developing your abilities and defeat them with force.

Writing less about politics and less about emotions is too demanding for the author, so he can take his time, and the Uchiha have never been short of money. Let's not talk about the background of the rich clan. Look at the houses in the Uchiha clan's land, which are all courtyards and commercial streets. They have a cooperative weapons business with the ninja clan, and they have their own private training ground.

From the moment when the protagonist came into contact with Charming, I felt something was wrong. Later, when Uchiha Itachi and Uchiha Tomigo opened his eyes with him and fought against the Third Hokage, I felt something was wrong. A person who can massacre an entire clan can be turned against you in just two or three sentences. It would be better for the author not to write about politics and just use force to defeat all laws. It's really not okay for you to write about politics.

After people in the Naruto world are controlled by the Sharingan illusion, their eyes will not look like the Sharingan at all. Kishimoto drew this just for the convenience of readers. . .

If you don't know how to do politics, then don't engage in it. Framing, frame-up, and intimidation are all false. What is real is that the physical level disappears directly.

It looked okay in the early stage, but the more I looked at it, the more awkward it became.

The author is too imaginative. Your ninja system should be approved by Kaguya, gain favor with Otsutsuki, and then Uchiha, Senju, Hinata, Uzumaki, etc. Are all branches of Otsutsuki's bloodline. If you do it, it will not take off. If you gain favor with the branch, you will get Otsutsuki's reward.

Authors, don't listen to their nonsense. Your writing is very good, but you clearly claim that it is a fan, but you still want to have more depth. You must understand that fan texts are inherently simple and entertaining. Readers love to read, and the last word is that they enjoy reading.

If you write about the political struggle in depth, the battle lines will be too long and it won't be fun enough! ! It's just right now. I don't use all physical attacks so mindlessly. I like the rhythm. It's fun.

Author, let's just say that it's a bit wasteful to only use Doubi's technique of distorting the scale of space to catch people. For example, stretching space can stretch a tiny distance to infinity so that no attack can get close. Compressing space can compress an extremely far distance into a square inch. You can reach for stars with just one hand, and you can take one step to infinity to achieve the effect of teleportation. Isn't this the ninja world's version of So Far? Another example is treating the space where the object or enemy is as a plane and compressing it into a line to create a dimensionality reduction effect. Isn't this similar to a dimensional weapon such as two-way foil? This move also kills Otsutsuki randomly; I feel that Yuzu Ming looks powerful and is useless in actual six-level combat. The space pupil technique that distorts the spatial scale of Douban has been developed. It's definitely very cool. Besides, since the title of the book is about the ninja system and the protagonist is an Uchiha, the readers who are attracted to it must be Uchiha fans. The content of political battles should be less written and more straightforward to make it more enjoyable, and more about the farming style of building a family. The plot transition and enrichment content, such as opening Uchiha's own family ninja school to cultivate talents, ninjutsu and so on. Supply, by the way, the author is engaged in ideological education construction based on the knowledge of the past life. The Uchiha people in the province have been deceived and lame, so you can refer to the Uchiha's own opinions; promote the White Zetsu cells to compensate for Yang escape, the strategic significance of this thing to Uchiha. Everyone who has watched Naruto understands; in the future, practicing magic and establishing a connection with the Holy Land will represent the entire Uchiha family to form a contractual psychic cooperation. (The protagonist can also promote the immortal method suitable for human cultivation through the system.) For the content of Reforming the Security Department, please refer to Saving Uchiha starting from becoming the clan leader; it not only satisfies the readers but also fits the theme. Now the content in this aspect is a bit sparse and seems nondescript. I have typed so many words and I don't know if the author will read it. Let's leave it at this. I hope the author can write it well.

The photos of Night Raid are not on the same level as the previous ones. Or is it a matter of plot design?

Why isn't his name Uchiha Nobuyoshi?

I'm looking forward to the ending of the next one, but it feels like Danzo either defected or died and was exposed by the Orochi King.

Finally got the first place🤓

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There is a reason why he is not popular. It is difficult for Mangekyou to kill a supporting character. The Zanpakutō is him, but he is still affected. The psychotic Itachi sided with you after just a few words. I was embarrassed while watching it

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