The Love Apartment Begins with Entering the Police Station

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Can the heroine be written as Nolan?

Even if the women in the love apartment consider breaking up the CP, you, an ordinary protagonist, may not be able to handle it. Yoyo is a drama queen, and Meijia is a bit silly. These two are already considered normal people, but you may not be able to handle it. Although Hu Yifei said she wanted a man who was better than him, she was so competitive. If you were better than her, she would only want to surpass you. Two people can't compete for the rest of their lives. What she needs is a little strong guy who can't be beaten to death and has no self-esteem. Let's not talk about Wanyu. Her character is flawless. She pursues freedom and yearns to see all the beautiful scenery in the world and learn all the knowledge she is interested in. Her family also supports her in doing this. When you are twenty, you will think that her ideas are in line with yours. But when you are thirty and want to stabilize, you will find that she is still the same bird with shining feathers that cannot be shut down. And you have been bound by the world and cannot fly with her. You want to suppress your desires and follow her, but her kindness and intelligence will make her break up with you and let you pursue your happiness. Yu Mo is already the most suitable candidate among the protagonists.

To be honest, it is a bit too inconsistent for Dali to join the apartment now... After all, Dali is still a child now. Many of the jokes in the love apartment are about driving, and if Dali joins now, he will need to take care of the children alone. It is like eating chicken in a dream, which indirectly reduces the role of the protagonist and makes it less interesting. Therefore, I feel that it is a bit early for Dali to join the apartment now...

Nolan

Write well, come on. I still like to read single female protagonists in this type of books. I would like to give you some suggestions. Single female protagonists, but can the female protagonist be Yu Mo? Yu Mo feels so good in Love Apartment, an urban beauty, but it's a pity that the relationship is not going well.

Write more of your own stuff👌? If you don't want to go through the TV show completely according to the situation, then I might as well watch TV. If you want to be a complete urban fan, don't build a martial arts system. You only give the system to make the protagonist rich and pick up girls as salted fish?

TV dramas are all about hard-coupled CPs, do you have to have these two people here too? You might as well be alone like Yu Mo. In a ridiculous plot where the heroine falls in love with a shield, the shield must also shine. Honesty, bravery, and caring, many people have these qualities, and it is outrageous that in TV dramas, they can find a romantic partner just because of this.

The heroine is Sister Shan.

Chapter 27 Why not train Teacher Zeng's camera sense in advance, or let him learn to read the camera? Knowing that he would be eliminated because he was not familiar with camera changes. On the one hand, he said that he couldn't bear to see him being eliminated and that he was sad, but on the other hand, he didn't help him. Don't talk about helping him get the filming opportunity. You got this filming opportunity without you in the original work. If you want to help, you should help train him on his shortcomings and weaknesses, such as letting him learn to read the camera. The author most likely doesn't dare to change the plot. If Zeng successfully goes ahead with filming, many subsequent radio plots will have to be changed. I haven't read much of it yet, and there are comment restrictions. In order to post a comment, I spent 300 coins on purchasing the published chapters. Overall, the writing is okay. It has its own ideas. It does not completely follow the plot, but has some creativity. But I hope you can change the regrets and failures of the original play, instead of making it the same as the original work. In this way, there is really no difference whether there is a protagonist or not. Don't just change the daily routine, but don't change the big things.

No need to argue, the female lead in the role is Nolan.

Now I look back at "Love Apartment" and realize the details. The residents in the apartment should basically be the rich second generation. Let's not talk about the monthly rent for such a large room. Judging from their attitude towards work, as well as the fact that they can live a carefree life despite having intermittent work, it shows that they are not worried about money.

The more I read, the less interesting it becomes. The rest is full of plots from Love 5. I've already read them all and you're still asking me to read the novel? And what about the system? Are you afraid of catching a cold after practicing Nine Yang Magic?

After reading half of it, I canceled it... I feel like the author wanted to follow the plot of the original CP too much... The problem is that Zeng Xiaoxian is nothing as a friend, but as a real partner... Lu Xiaobu can only be a bad friend. The character design copied from Love Apartment had many problems at the time. Naturally, not many people care about logic when watching it as a sitcom. However, the advancement and increase of the plot of the novel really made me not like the original CP. Moreover, the logic of the protagonist is also very strange. Those nonsensical settings in the love apartment are dispensable, and it doesn't matter if you add them, but daily life is relatively peaceful. With Jiuyang Gong, why are you so eager to throw away all your money to buy the Six Meridians Divine Sword... One Yang Finger is better than the Six Meridians Divine Sword. Is it really necessary to pursue lethality so much? You set up a special department yourself, and report the monsters that are difficult to deal with. You said that Yifei and the teacher ate big snakes in the mountains... It's a bit off topic. I think that when you have money, first of all, don't talk about too much. A scooter between 20 and 40 is no problem. Since it has some advantages in time travel, it is no problem to make some investments. Money can be used to expand resources [f n=39] And where are the martial arts of the Xiaoyao sect that can lead to immortality, and there are also things like Yiyang Finger that can cure diseases, easy muscles and bones to change the appearance, various light exercises to facilitate running, Yi Jin Jing and Jiuyin's bone training chapter to improve the root and bones, many god-refining exercises to strengthen the spirit and see if they can enhance memory... Let's talk about the heroine. I saw more than 200, is it probably the single heroine of Yu Mo? There is no progress; speaking of development, it feels like you play a warrior in DND through time...

The writing is pretty good, and it basically maintains the feel of the original work. I hope to write about everyone's growth that was not shown in the TV series "Love Apartment". It's best to fill in the holes, don't be like others, they are all harems, I feel embarrassed when I see them, they are all independent women, pursuing freedom. How could you rob a man? I haven't seen the original drama, the man who didn't express his opinion between the two women was dismissed.

The other scenes in the love apartment are okay, but the scene in Lu Ziqiao's Inception is really difficult to write. It is a really touching scene. In addition, people who watch it will automatically be brought into the BGM of Hongjian. That effect is really difficult to achieve.

After reading it in one go, I will tell you about a relatively big problem. 1. The author's writing is good, and making changes would make it a good fanfic, but I still can't let go. Those who come to watch Love Apartment come from the green years of the past. The original plot is both a highlight and a pain point. Try to add your own things, and the time span of the same season of Love Apartment is very large. If you don't want to change the original plot point, you can write it outside the plot point. Anyway, there is no accurate date in the original plot, so you can write those times as you like. 2. The issue of role participation and integration Now that you have brought Zhuge Dali and Nuolan in, you have to think about what characters they may have now, what things they will do, how people in the apartment will react to these things, and how they would react originally. You have to think carefully about the changes after they are added to the plot. Just like after Nuolan joined the apartment, I knew that she was with the protagonist. She was like an unglamorous background, just like an extra NPC. Apart from knowing her existence, she did not speak or do any actions. These two points are relatively big problems. I hope the author will continue to work hard! Come on!

I still like Wanyu, to be honest, the fifth one. That was a forced consummation. After all, it was impossible for Zhao Ji to come back to film, and there would be no sixth part. Then the fifth part was just filling in all kinds of holes. To be honest, the two of them have broken up. The reunion was just forced by the screenwriter.

It's quite interesting. It doesn't follow the plot directly like other novels, nor does it deliberately darken a certain character. It can be seen that the author also likes iPartment very much. I always feel that to write a fan novel, you must first like the original work. If I don't like the original work, how can I write a plot that everyone will like. Yesterday I read an article where the protagonist is a doctor. The author made all the original characters worldly and gloomy. He wanted to make money but also disgusted the readers. I don't know what he thought.

Who do you want to choose as the heroine?

Why did the main character have so few roles when writing the fifth season? Also, you said at the beginning that there are aliens and other things in the world of "Love Apartment". Nowadays, there are fewer and fewer such plots. It is written that the protagonist of the fifth season has no role.

You can't watch the back part, the more you look at it, the more boring it becomes.

Did the protagonist take Nolan's first time? It's a little itchy, but the author doesn't even hint at it. After all, he's not married, so he should...

When it came to the fifth season, it was completely copied. The protagonist said a few words from the original show, which are no different from the original show. There were more or less changes in the first few seasons. Did the characters change later?

Why is it that the writing is so good at the beginning, but it starts to get lazy in the middle, and it's like a long TV drama plot?

It was pretty good in the beginning until I got together with Nolan, especially the protagonist of the plot with Nolan seemed to have been replaced, and it became more and more slutty later on.

This book is much better written than most love apartments

The front was fine, but starting from the Olympics, it started to feel a bit shaky? Can't take it in?

Why do I feel like someone else changed the writing later and I was lazy later?