Beginning from the Sidelines and Becoming the Taoist Lord of Ten Thousand Dharmas

He is also a cultivator. It's funny. The cultivator can't beat the martial arts practitioner. He can't carry 200 pounds at the second level of Qi training. I don't know how the author set it up. The innate Qi of spiritual energy is not as powerful as the inner Qi. Author, you really know how to write.

Elder Jin Dan bewitched such a qi-training garbage like the protagonist, it's 666, he has such a big face, the protagonist has no feelings for the sect, even if he has a dog, he will wag his tail, this protagonist is worse than a dog

I'm really speechless 🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨 They tricked me, a book-hungry person, into killing me. The first part is okay, but why can't I think about the second part? I'm really impressed. The writing is messy and slips away.

It's almost chapter 250, and I haven't built the foundation yet. I'm so damn good at it.

Dude, you are so awesome. It's 200 chapters and you're still practicing Qi. 👍👍👍

It takes 999 experience to upgrade from level 2 to level 3, so we count it as 1,000. The protagonist took 3 years. Throwing out 1-2 and the time needed to find the sect, we can calculate that 2-3 will take 1 year, no problem. 🤭 Then 3-4 requires 5999 which is 6000, counting 6 years. 4-5 takes 19999 which is 20 years. 5-6 requires 59999 which is 60 years. 6-7 takes 199999 which is 200 years! There is no golden finger in the co-authorship. Except for the protagonist, what is the average qualification of everyone else as an Immortal Emperor? I don't know how the author thought of using this method to suppress the protagonist, but I can only say "admire"

It's a very weak plot. I really don't have any books to try.

The writing gets worse and worse. It's like changing the person, and the protagonist is the same. The comparison of the behavior before and after is like schizophrenia. There are two completely different personalities.

The writing was acceptable before it was put on the shelves, but Shangguan Xiangling was a mess after it came out. The content of the book has nothing to do with the introduction. I advise old bookworms not to waste their money.

He is also an old author, why can't he distinguish between Dharma and Technique? Dharma is the foundation of practice. Through the practice of Kung Fu, you can achieve your own rebirth and transform yourself into an immortal. Techniques are the application of Dharma, such as plants, elixirs, formations, utensils, talismans, etc., Which are called the five arts. If you can practice by relying on spiritual rain techniques and sword moves, can you also advance to the foundation and golden elixir stages by relying on alchemy and drawing talismans? 😁😁

I've read more than a hundred chapters and it still doesn't make me feel good. I don't know how you think you're writing a good story. Your main character is Wai Wai? I don't understand, so I gave up.

It's okay at the front, but I don't know what I'm writing at the back, and it looks ridiculous. Why is the main character's Qi training so outrageous? Why don't you stop doing this in the middle and late stages of foundation building? Why is Qi training stirring up the situation every day? There was also a failure in alchemy, and a powerful elixir was used to produce a magical elixir.

I'm trying to persuade you to quit. Before it was released, the pacing and writing were fine. But after it was released, it felt like it was written by a different person. The preface and the follow-up didn't match the words, and there was no sense of immersion at all.

Where do you think of writing it? The first divine power elixir can also have powerful Taoism, but the latter god-level elixir has no effect at all. Apart from providing daily upgrades, there are other inconsistencies. It is just like what others said, it is a killer diary.

After discovering so many things, you didn't even remind you at all. How could the sect be sorry for you?

I haven't finished reading Chapter 3 and died from poison. It's too blunt to advance the plot.

Has anyone changed the writing since it was put on the shelves?😅

First of all, the plot has no logic at all. There are more than two hundred and sixty chapters of Qi training. The key is to get stuck in the realm, which makes people speechless. You said you move to the tenth level of Qi training, and then there is no deep meaning. Why do you want him to force it? Then why don't you practice Qi 9999? Then come the 999th level, the golden elixir level 99, the Nascent Soul level 81, the transformation level 72, and the tribulation level 36. Each level writes five chapters. It takes ten million words every minute. The master wants a plot without plot and a rhythm without rhythm. I imitate Chengfeng's writing style, but only at the level of his early years. In his early years, he couldn't handle the crazy protagonist.

Which Shangguan Xiangling wrote a piece of rubbish after she came out, with a white-eyed wolf protagonist and all kinds of licentiousness?

Did I miss it? Chapter 147 mentioned that you need to practice the acquired spiritual body without leakage, but then you turned around and gave up on this secret technique? In Chapter 148, I asked Senior Sister Lin for the Foundation Building Pill at the end. Why did I feel like I had completely forgotten the rest? Has the person who wrote the book changed? 😂😂😂😂

I saw that in Chapter 170, why does it look like the protagonist has been replaced? ?

Is there a Shennong? After reading more than 170 chapters, I feel like there are two people before and after it is released. The front is still normal, but the back is going crazy every day, and the holes such as acquired spiritual bodies have not been filled. Can I still read it in the future?

Chapter 272: Go to Xiong's house to seek revenge. You just have to kill him. You have to beep non-stop. You can't even say you're showing off. Let's talk about your poor word count. You can't even talk about your irritation. It feels like a middle grader. The last book was pretty good. How could this book be written like this? I'm really disappointed.

Let's not talk about the ancestor of Wuji. He can obviously kill the third level of foundation building without foundation building. After the foundation building, his skills have been upgraded a lot. He almost died after killing the fourth level of foundation building. Has his combat power collapsed like this?

Chapter 130: Why should Patriarch Wuji be written as a time traveler, and the protagonist in the book suddenly calls himself "Master Tao". I don't see what the book has to do with Taoists. There are so many little poisons in the book that I can't hold on!

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You can still look at the front, but the back is boring.

To be honest, the writing is actually okay, but the transitions between each plot are very abrupt. In the first paragraph, some treasure appeared somewhere and learned new skills. However, these new things are not as important in the following paragraphs. At least there must be a small climax. All in all, the overall structure is still too loose. I would call it a refreshing article, but I just wanted to enjoy it and it was over. In addition, the character's personality is a bit weak. He is decisive in killing, sinister, foul-mouthed, and petty. However, in the early stage, the character did not stand firm and was a bit too arbitrary. It feels like there is an outline, and only an outline. Nothing else, just my thoughts!

It's strange to see the middle part. The setting and plot are a bit inconsistent? Isn't it Dongfu Prefecture? Why did it become Zhongzhou? There is also the Southern Territory. Also, isn't the ninth level said to be an acquired body? How come it turned into refining mystical skills again?

I like this kind of clear and stable improvement, and I am meticulous and not aggressive.