Football: Start by Feeding Cristiano Ronaldo Cakes

Not much to say, when will we torture Colonel Youxi of the Mei Agency?

How should I put it? The subject matter is interesting, but the 22_23 season is still too late. Even the 18_19 season is good. I am not interested in watching the 22_23 season.

What can I say? The protagonist's golden finger is suitable for changing careers. The protagonist will not be able to discover his awesomeness unless he tries other professions 😅

I have read 125 chapters so far. The advantage is that the description of the game is good, and the author himself plays the game and has pictures. The shortcoming is that the author wrote a lot about the support of the Red Devils fans for the team, the impact of the team on the fans, and involved gangs. There is also Cantona as the adoptive father. It is set that the protagonist has forgotten his previous memories. It is completely unnecessary to make Hu Keer the brother and enemy. It only adds to the poison point for readers. The performance of this book is not good. Compared with those with thousands of monthly tickets, the actual description of the game is not bad or even better than them (there are also pictures). If the author cuts off most of these redundant things, leaving only the bond between the team fans, and gives the protagonist 1.2 Heroines, the performance will immediately go up. To be honest, online novels are like eating fast food. If you are writing about football, you should focus on football. In this book, you do not have all the off-field stuff, which is not pleasing. This is not to enrich the novel and make the protagonist image three-dimensional, but to make the primary and secondary contradictions indistinguishable, which increases the poisonous point.

It's hard to break down. I wrote about joining the national football team, and then, obviously it was a football article, but inexplicably wrote that members of Hukel's gang were mortal enemies and then killed each other. It's both fun and unpleasant, and there is no independent offensive ability. On a daily basis, the team just fights wits and courage with Teng and Xia and cooperates with Cristiano Ronaldo. The rhythm is really bad, and the main design line is inexplicable. You write football articles off the field and write about gangs and destroying criminal organizations. Why, you're going to play 007 to play football. I've booked it all but can't watch it anymore.

Looking through the catalog, the protagonist has joined the national football team? ? ?

It's so interesting, hahaha There are not many books after the football Caesar, Beckham template, and Real Madrid midfielder that I can read. The front of this one is quite interesting.

Don't forget your original intention, follow Brother Luo to get a contract in Saudi Arabia. 😟

I have writing skills, but the disadvantage is that the author is always enjoying himself.

Can it improve the Chinese football environment and give Chinese football a chance to rise?

Do you want to start a national football team? It's still the national football team from last year.

I read it twice, and the first time I felt that the author was enjoying himself, suppressing it when it was time to feel good, and deliberately sensationalizing it every day. The second time I tried to be on the same channel as the author, it was much better. I hope the author will continue his efforts.

Most of the small football novels starting in 2022 were written impulsively. They started as soon as they had a good idea. Many of them fell apart in the end, and the eunuch dropped. This kind of novel needs to wait until it reaches 800,000 words to see whether the author intends to finish it.

This Billy has always felt a bit abrupt and inexplicable.

There is only one skill that I can't enjoy, it's not as good as the first ten chapters.

2023? What can I write about during this time? Is the author prepared to write 5 million words in one year?

Don't you want to revitalize Tenghai? 😅

A very funny book with the author's picture explanation is very interesting suiiiiiiiii

I finished reading the free chapters and subscribed to QQ to read and subscribe to a few more. I made a few suggestions. You have too few cheats to make me happy, and the game descriptions made me dizzy. There are seven or eight chapters in one game, and some are about 10 chapters, which is too long.

Hey, what's the point of the 2022-23 season? Can't we start around 2000? When he was young, he competed with the shining gods in football. In his peak period, he beat Melo in the training stage. At the end of his career, he was still suppressing Melo and was not allowed to rise to the top. In a 20-year career, there are peaks and troughs, and physical functions will also deteriorate. Only this kind of football novel is interesting.

This timeline is crazy, I could have written two seasons until it was finished.

Wear it until the 22/23 season? I want to know how the author will end it after writing a season, or just end it.

It should be better to start with leaving Real Madrid. How long has it been since Manchester United? . .

... Although I really like Ronaldo, it's not that big of a deal. Isn't it good to be the boss? Reborn but still short of money

Let Kai score a goal. This is not a good idea.

Looking at Manchester United's recent transfers, Manchester United is about to revive