The Three Kingdoms with Extraordinary Powers, Gather Money and Grain to Bring Peace to the World

During the troubled times of the Three Kingdoms, the world of supernatural powers, destiny, and strength was still ancient. You still have food, but you are fighting for position with a village chief and his son, and then there is a group of bandits. In the first few dozen chapters, they are fighting like this. What do you think? The beginning is written like this. I thought you would have some strength and some food, and gather people to push it slowly. You can write like this at the beginning, but how can you write later?

Well written and very serious. . But the early stage was too complicated regarding the issue of the village chief. . . You can go ahead and pretend to be clever, not to mention the messy, treasonous and other things in the back. It may be very difficult to write like this, but the only point is that the big guy is not cool enough. This is not to say that it is a cool article, but it is not very enjoyable to read. . . Personal opinion The second thing is skills. How many chapters have you already weighed ten thousand pounds? It's too outrageous. You'd better upgrade your skills. You can plant some special plants in the middle and later stages. The generals will increase their health and blood after eating them. Just a suggestion. Paper and pen, special horses, armors, ores, and weapons are all in a mess And you can randomly stimulate the destiny of individuals in the village. . . And the outrageous part about the bandits coming, everyone just rushed the protagonist and pushed him out, thinking that immortals are omnipotent. . After this, nothing felt right. . A strange smell. Secondly, in ancient times, a craft required an apprenticeship of ten years. Still pass half of it. Your advice is enough for you as the village chief, let alone your ability to increase grain production. Just like me, a well-known expert in the province, I have to overcome all difficulties when I become a doctor in a village clinic. . Especially I donated money . . . Then there is the trivial struggle in your village that can be seen. What will happen if there is a large-scale war later? . . . If you don't like to see it, this village will be blocked directly for you. . . Obviously all the struggles in your village can be resolved. The writing is okay. Except for a strange smell there is also the Qing Emperor. . All I can say is. . It's not as good as the system. But if you have other settings, just pretend I didn't tell you.

Question, are all collectors robots?

It's well written, but I couldn't stand it until Chapter 8. Is this the behavior of a fool? If the protagonist, a modern person, passes through, he will be treated as a fool. Do you have to help that villager? They didn't help you. Are you a fool? , Can't you leave? Can't you build a village by yourself? In ancient times, you had food and you wanted people to have a bunch of people. What trouble would you have if you wanted to be the village chief? If you really don't like it, you can buy some people. In ancient times, there were also dental shops.

You have to endure loneliness. If a newcomer writes tens of thousands of words, no one will read it, unlike an old author who has traffic.

The introduction was different from what I thought. I thought the superpowers of the people in it were like those in Marvel. The result looks like the entry Three Kingdoms, which was very popular in the past. There were too many explanations from the author's perspective in the early stage. From the first chapter, the setting is explained from the author's perspective, and the setting is forced on the readers. After everything has been explained in the front, the readers are numb afterwards. The story of the novel is the main thing, and the setting is supplementary. The setting must serve the story, and the story cannot be used as a stepping stone for the setting.

It's really confusing, and the main character's personality is also very strange

This subject and golden finger are all in vain

Come on! Received👏✊

A village chief's son who has superpowers and a strong heart can't even deal with it. He wants to return the king's hegemony, Holy Mother, you,

The protagonist will not collect cards again, but collect famous scribes from the Three Kingdoms along the way😄

The subject matter is very good, but it's a pity that the author is a novice.

As for the village chief and Song Xuan, the author still plans to reuse them?

The writing is rubbish, the narration is unclear, and the writing skills are so poor that one sentence cannot be followed from the next. I have looked back at it myself, but it was just a mess. The setting made it complicated for me. The plot setting was childish, and I often wrote biased stories, which made me seriously self-indulgent. There were many historical errors and many typos. Originally, each chapter of mine was about 2,100 words. I wrote about 60,000 words and got scolded. The system was broken by me, and I was asked to change it to 2,500 words per chapter. The heroine in the first chapter was also added when I was 70,000 to 80,000 words. The first chapter was revised the most. This was all thanks to the people who came to criticize my system in the past. As a result, the more changes I made, the harder it became to read. I don't know what I think. Maybe I care too much about the comments. I also pile up the number of words when revising. Anyway, it's just a pile of crap. After 100,000 words, I revised every day, wrote every day, and was scolded every day. I stopped working on the previous chapters. Although I tried it once, it was very bad. I never reached 40 after reading. I thought about giving up and not writing, but I thought about writing the contract that I signed at the beginning of a month, so I gritted my teeth and wrote it down. I often write plots that are off-kilter. I originally had an outline. I agreed to take over the cottage and lead to the Lulong Immortal Temple, and then directly seize Lingling. As a result, I wrote the main plot as a martial arts, and I kept adding new characters to fight. After 130,000 words, I started to change the written chapter of 2,500 to 3,500. It was just stupid. Of course, I added dialogue directly. The purpose of doing this was to achieve 300,000 as soon as possible and have perfect attendance. Although I can write 10,000 words a day, it is actually a terrible 10,000 words. I have given up on this book myself. I practice my narrative skills every day to see if I can practice my writing skills. I also freely write the plot and write whatever comes to mind. Except for my persistence, I don't have any ability in writing. I am trying to find ways to improve every day, but it seems that except for the improvement in hydrology, there is nothing else. In this book, I have avoided all possible pitfalls. The protagonist's character is wrong both front and back, and he is too kind-hearted. He is not suitable for survival in the world of the Three Kingdoms. I am thinking about changing it for my next book, and currently plan to have three months of perfect attendance. If you want to read this, you have to click on it. If you can give me some writing advice, please do so. However, you may not be able to make it through three chapters. As for revising the first part, I am not currently capable enough to do so.

The creative idea is good, but the place of birth is not good, Lingling? It was still in the village. During the Three Kingdoms' struggle for world supremacy, if you did not want to be controlled by aristocratic families during that period, you must gather talents, and there were a lot of talents. But in a place like Lingling in Jingnan, where did the talents come from? The population is not large, how can we develop? If you don't enter an official career, there will be no righteousness. Without righteousness, you will know the consequences of the hardships of the Sun family in Jiangdong in the early stage. Therefore, your route is indeed a bit unwise.

As a modern person who lives in exile and doesn't have much military power, why do you think you want to run for village chief when you have more food? This is ancient times. The landlord's family will give you a meal. After reading a few pictures, I feel that they are ridiculous.

Shouldn't Poison be Li Ru's skill? After all, he should be the most famous for murdering the Young Emperor, right? Jia Xu's first impression was of chaotic martial arts, and then I also felt that Lu Bu's thunder was wrong. The thunder should be Ma Chao. After all, Ma Chao is one of the gods of the thunder department. Apart from the three surnamed family slaves and Wushuang, Lu Bu should have the deepest impression of Yuanmen shooting halberds.

You can refer to Shensan III for the writing method of this book. Regarding the author's current problems, I mainly think that it is caused by not writing an outline. I am talking about a very detailed outline. In fact, there is no big problem. Just write the next book well.

. . ! . . . . . . . The creativity is okay, but the author is a bit stupid. Look at what you wrote earlier.

I have read about 40 chapters, but I don't really want to read it. The writing is too messy and the layout is not good.

I can only say that some readers are really good-natured in not quarreling with the author. Farewell

There is a characteristic of newcomers writing books. The ideas are good and interesting, but the writing and data are lacking.

Why hasn't it been put on the shelves yet? Power for love