Martial Arts Immortality: Starting from Baduanjin

Read a few chapters. The protagonist's character is as high as the sky and his life is as thin as paper. It's really all thanks to the author's wonderful writing. I can't write it visually. Goodbye.

The protagonist is a fool who does nothing but wants to go to heaven

Could the person who wrote this novel be unable to move when he saw a woman?

This book is so poorly written and has a brainless protagonist!

When there is no real strength, all kinds of suicide attempts have lost the normal thinking logic, and I really can't stand it anymore.

It's still so slow even though it's hanging, which is a bit dissatisfying.

What kind of bullshit is this? The protagonist is as weak as a dog. Is there any connection between the whole article and the title of the book? Where did the longevity go?

There are typos in the introduction, making it difficult for people to want to read further.

My wife is procrastinating Procrastinating

Actually it's not bad, quite satisfactory. But when I think about it, I don't really like it. The Wang family is so powerful, so they sold the paddy fields when they didn't have the strength at the beginning; then they have been murdered, they are all enemies of life and death, and there are also sect forces, so it would be more likely to murder the protagonist again; it's not like he has been hiding in a martial arts hall. Furthermore, the general's woman gave me money to teach the exercises, but she never learned them, which made her feel quite abrupt.

After reading two chapters, the text is quite smooth and there is no dyslexia in reading. The problem lies in the plot structure. If this were ten years ago, readers might still be able to accept it, but things are different now. Times have changed. If you want to write this kind of article, I think you can learn from the book "Create a Taoist Lord of Ten Thousand Dharmas". Of course, you only learn the part that is not on the shelves. What comes out after it is on the shelves is a piece of shit.

The writing is sophisticated, the narrative is smooth, the structure is grand, and the timing of the arrangement is good. However, the plot is a bit slow, and the emotional drama is not described thoroughly enough. I look forward to a big explosion. If you can persist, this book will be a masterpiece!